今天写的,希望有高人帮我看下有没有较之前的有小小的进步,还需要注意哪些方面.理由我写了两个,但是写的较详细吧 TOPIC o you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain There are many different views concerning about this topic,I would like to vote the point that the television ,newspaper,magazines,or the other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of the famous people.the media disturbe their lifestyle,even influence their family Paying too much attention to their personal lives effect the famous people to have their usual habits.although they are the famous people on the screen but actually they are the ordinary people as us when get down from the platform.they may like to go shopping ,to watch the film,to paly with their friends.but the media disutrb these.they may trail them try to find something that we can not see on the screen because of the audience rating or attracting the eyebow of the people.For example ,a famous person who want to go to xiangyang road,but he can not avoid the front page of the news about him to such place which can influence his reputation.so he may choose to stay at home instead of it .how deplorable it is. on the other hand,the media focus on their emotional life especially. For instance.he/she eat with an opposite sex.the media may guess they are the lovers ,but actually they are just eat because of the friendship,such as this news may impact their celebrity and they can not have friends normally.it is so pity that if you are a famous people,the cost is to lose your personal lives. Furthermore,this action also can affect their family,because the media may focus on their father , mother or the back of the family ,attempting to find something different,such as whose family used to poor and whose father used to do something disgraceful .whose grade was not good in the schooltime,but they ignore that if they are successful now,we should concern about their nowdays or the future days not the past and not their family,it is irrelevant about their success,I believe that every famous people hope we concerning about their achievement and hope we do not disturb their family.After all we like them because of their charm not their family's
For all the reasons mentioned above ,I think we should concern about them approprately and the precondition is not to affect their life. |