Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve metropolitan Boston. - Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve
- Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve
- Concerns about public health have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
- There were concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving
- There were concerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
For A, 时间Between...and...紧跟修饰对象Construction, 无修饰歧义;句子的意思没有复杂时态的表达需要。 For B, 完成时态复杂 ;时间修饰因为位置的摆放引起歧义。 For C, 完成时态复杂 ; A lead to B,SVO完整间接,插入时间修饰没有达到清晰表达修饰作用的效果;For serving, to serve,表达目的还是用to do好, 毕竟这里to serve是 in order to的缩写。 For D, there be结构加入了代词There,引起指代歧义;简单的SVO结构被分词结构代替,增加理解困难;serving得分词结构其能表达In order to 的意思? For E, 基本同D,For serving and To serve参见C。
英语,用于交流;SC,用于考察考试者是否有能力增强交流效率; 简单易懂,无歧义,完全表达句义的英语,才是GMAT要求的英语。
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