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[备考心经] [原创]对阅读和句子改错的一点个人感受

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41#
发表于 2007-5-16 03:03:00 | 只看该作者

it's great.

But which in 119 refers not sentences but phrasal again.

119. Executives and federal officials say that the use of crack and cocaine is growing rapidly among work­ers, significantly compounding the effects of drug and alcohol abuse, which already are a cost to busi­ness of more than $100 billion a year.

(A)  significantly compounding the effects of drug and alcohol abuse, which already are a cost to business of

(B)   significantly compounding the effects of drug and alcohol abuse, which already cost busi­ness

(C)  significantly compounding the effects of drug and alcohol abuse, already with business costs of

(D)  significant in compounding the effects of drug and alcohol abuse, and already costing busi­ness

(E)   significant in compounding the effects of drug and alcohol abuse, and already costs business

Choice B, the best answer, uses clear and concise phrasing to state that it is the effects of drug and alcohol abuse that already cost business the sum mentioned. In A, to business is awkwardly and confusingly inserted between cost and the prepositional phrase that modifies it, and are already a cost to business is wordy and awkward compared to cost business. In C, already with business costs of... is awkward and unclear, failing to specify that those prior effects generate the cost. Choices D and E produce faulty constructions with the phrase significant in compounding, which cannot grammatically modify the verb form is growing.

42#
发表于 2007-6-5 00:53:00 | 只看该作者

Infer就是弦外之音。

让我茅塞顿开。

谢谢你的心得。

43#
发表于 2007-6-5 02:16:00 | 只看该作者
谢谢
44#
发表于 2008-9-5 11:00:00 | 只看该作者

太对了,看懂最重要,什么套路即使在考试中有点点用,在国外学习或生活就不一定应付得了了.感谢mzyzhu分享.

45#
发表于 2009-1-4 14:46:00 | 只看该作者
很受教育
46#
发表于 2009-4-14 23:26:00 | 只看该作者
我一定朝这个方向努力!
47#
发表于 2009-4-14 23:39:00 | 只看该作者

呵呵  谢谢lz贡献自己的经验 学习了:)

48#
发表于 2009-9-23 11:34:00 | 只看该作者
我的神啊,大牛啊~~
49#
发表于 2010-6-3 15:19:42 | 只看该作者
努力的目标~~~~~
50#
发表于 2010-7-24 13:35:14 | 只看该作者
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