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[Essay] Rotman MBA Essay求助(求已录或者同申的小伙伴看看)

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发表于 2022-12-7 01:50:36 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Our admitted students stand out by doing interesting things with their personal and professional lives — something we describe as the ‘spike factor’; what are the things that you have done in your life that demonstrate Passion/ Grit/ Resilience/ Innovation/ Drive/ Ambition and more? This can cross all or any aspects of life outside of work – hobbies, volunteerism, awards, entrepreneurial ventures, sports and the arts. We believe that exposure to a rich diversity of viewpoints makes for a superior learning experience, and pride ourselves on building a diverse class of exceptional individuals who will go on to make the School proud as professionals and alumni.Explain your spike factor (something unique about yourself) that you believe will contribute to the Rotman community and is aligned with Rotman values. (up to 500 words)*  Optional - Please upload 1-3 of your 'spikiest' pictures to the supplemental items section of your application here. Note: Your photos must be uploaded as a single PDF.

我看到几个词:
1. doing interesting things
2. This can cross all or any aspects of life outside of work – hobbies, volunteerism, awards, entrepreneurial ventures, sports and the arts.

所以想问下,这个essay里描述的事情,是只能是outside of work,还是也可以描述工作中的事情呀?

先写写各位大大了!!
发表于 2022-12-8 14:54:56 发自 iPhone | 显示全部楼层
我是70%的篇幅写了工作之外的事情来说明自己的spike factor,然后剩下一点篇幅写这个spike factor如何影响自己的工作、career goal以及未来的规划。已经收到录取,供参考~
 楼主| 发表于 2022-12-8 17:27:50 | 显示全部楼层
收到 感谢!
发表于 2022-12-9 15:32:53 | 显示全部楼层
我觉得主要是看那些例子比较能展示与学校价值契合的,不用纠结于是生活上的还是工作上的。我写了一个社会服务和一个工作上的,最后总结factor。已录。加油!
 楼主| 发表于 2022-12-9 17:50:46 | 显示全部楼层
sammiz 发表于 2022-12-9 15:32
我觉得主要是看那些例子比较能展示与学校价值契合的,不用纠结于是生活上的还是工作上的。我写了一个社会服 ...

好嘞好嘞!感谢!!
发表于 2022-12-14 20:09:29 | 显示全部楼层
同为申请罗德曼的小朋友,加个好友吧
发表于 2022-12-15 03:52:15 | 显示全部楼层
Abbalovemeng 发表于 2022-12-14 20:09
同为申请罗德曼的小朋友,加个好友吧

Hello 我也是申请rotman的! 加个好友吧!
发表于 2022-12-16 17:07:57 | 显示全部楼层
Huimzhu 发表于 2022-12-15 03:52
Hello 我也是申请rotman的! 加个好友吧!

加V : abbalovemeng
 楼主| 发表于 2022-12-18 21:25:47 | 显示全部楼层
Huimzhu 发表于 2022-12-15 03:52
Hello 我也是申请rotman的! 加个好友吧!

不好意思 最近一直没上CD,私信你啦!
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