【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day23

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1.
答案：C
解析：
A.时态错，应该与announced保持时态一致。they指代不明。
B.which就近修饰了stores，错误。
D.announce to do用法错误。
E.时态错，应该与announced保持时态一致。

2.
答案：B
解析：
A.it指代不明，前面Caribou是复数，且应该用泛指。
C.in order to不简洁。
D.it指代不明，前面Caribou是复数，且应该用泛指。
E.it指代不明，前面Caribou是复数，且应该用泛指。

3.
答案：D
解析：
A.being冗余。use的用法错误。
B.secretary of labor和influence概念不对等。
C.secretary of labor和influence概念不对等。use的用法错误。
E.secretary of labor和influence同位语概念不对等。use的用法错误。

4.
答案：E
解析：
A.主语是rock samples，主谓不一致。
B.主语是rock samples，主谓不一致。
C.date的用法错误，正确用法应该是be dated to/at。
D.and后不是完整句子结构，少谓语，错误。

5.
答案：B
解析：
A.it指代不明，was主谓不一致，错误。
C.which修饰hearings，主谓不一致，错误。
D.and和also，then和later语义重复。
E.which修饰hearings，主谓不一致，错误。and和also，then和later语义重复。

6.
答案：A
解析：
B.unlike比较对象不对等。
C.which用于指代整个句子，错误。
D.which用于指代整个句子，错误。unlike比较对象不对等。
E.their和they指代不明。unlike比较对象不对等。

7.
答案：C
解析：
A.主谓不一致，错误。
B.主谓不一致，错误。
D.三个并列动词的形式不平行。
E.三个并列动词的形式不平行。

8.
答案：D
解析：
A.it指代不明。
B.主谓不一致，错误。they无指代。it指代不明。
C.主谓不一致，错误。this单独使用错误。
E.主谓不一致，错误。

9.
答案：B
解析：
A.namely没有连词的作用，不能接独立的句子。the fact of sb doing sth的用法普遍错误。
C.with使用错误，原句并没有表伴随或附属的语义。it无指代，错误。
D.with使用错误，原句并没有表伴随或附属的语义。
E.namely没有连词的作用，不能接独立的句子。because引导原因状语从句而非名词性从句，导致this fact无所指，错误。

10.
答案：D
解析：
A.前面已经有主语，所以it多余。
B.时间状语的位置错误。
C.drama、play和Lorraine Hansberry同位语不对等。
E.and后面是主动语态，语义错误。

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Day 23

1. C.  A. 时态错误——will

2. B.  平行结构

3. D.  句子逻辑（插入语）

4. E.  Date at...+old/ date to...+ago

5. B.  句子逻辑

6. A.  D. unlike 比较双方不能比；monkfish单复数同行；which 不能指代一句话

7. C.  a variety of + 复数名词，谓语动词用复数

8. D.  句子逻辑(插入语）

9. B.  A. namely后补充说明句子主语，用that..., namely that...更对称;resemble 和dissimilar 对比，用while 更好

10. D.  句子逻辑（插入语）

Shell_liang

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Ranyo

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1.(212)Trans World Entertainment Corporation, which owns the Record Town and Saturday Matinee retail chains, announced that since sales of up to one-fourth of its stores are poor, they will be closed.
A.that since sales of up to one-fourth of its stores are poor, they will be closed
B.it is closing up to one-fourth of its stores, which accounted for its poor sales
C.it was closing up to one fourth of its stores because of poor sales
D.to be closing, on account of poor sales, up to one-fourth of its stores         
E.having poor sales, such that up to one-fourth of its stores will be closed

C* (其实C的说法也不太好，但是其他选项问题更大)
A they指代不明
B which修饰stores，不对。
D 句意不对。
E such that连用基本不对。

2.(213)Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it with nothing but a handheld lance, as Dorset people did, required exceptional hunting skill.
A.so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
B.so to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
C.so in order to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
D.and so in order to stalk it over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it     
E.and so stalking them over the treeless landscape and getting close enough in order to kill it

B*
有it的不对，排除ADE
in order to表目的，这里不对，排除D。and so也不对。

3.(214)Being that she was secretary of labor, Frances Perkins' considerable influence with Franklin D. Roosevelt was used preventing him from restraining strikes by longshoremen and automobile workers.
A.Being that she was secretary of labor, Frances Perkins' considerable influence with Franklin D. Roosevelt was used preventing
B.As secretary of labor, Frances Perkins' considerable influence with Franklin D. Roosevelt was used to prevent
C.Being secretary of labor, Frances Perkins' considerable influence with Franklin D. Roosevelt was used preventing
D.As secretary of labor, Frances Perkins used her considerable influence with Franklin D. Roosevelt to prevent            
E.Secretary of labor, Frances Perkins' considerable influence was used with Franklin D. Roosevelt preventing

D*
being that很奇怪，排除A。
being secretary of labor，后面应该加人，而非influence，排除C。
E，和C一样，且was used to表目的才对，排除E。
BD之中排除B，原因同C。

4.(215)Rock samples taken from the remains of an asteroid about twice the size of the 6-mile-wide asteroid that eradicated the dinosaurs has been dated to be 3.47 billion years old and thus is evidence of the earliest known asteroid impact on Earth.
A.has been dated to be 3.47 billion years old and thus is
B.has been dated at 3.47 billion years old and thus
C.have been dated to be 3.47 billion years old and thus are
D.have been dated as being 3.47 billion years old and thus      
E.have been dated at 3.47 billion years old and thus are

E*
主语 samples，排除AB。
be dated at正确，选E。

5.(216)Although she had been known as an effective legislator first in the Texas Senate and later in the United States House of Representatives, not until Barbara Jordan’s participation in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard Nixon in 1974 was she made a nationally recognized figure, as it was televised nationwide.
A.later in the United States House of Representatives, not until Barbara Jordan’s participation in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard Nixon in 1974 was she made a nationally recognized figure, as it was
B.later in the United States House of Representatives, Barbara Jordan did not become a nationally recognized figure until 1974, when she participated in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard Nixon, which were
C.later in the United States House of Representatives, it was not until 1974 that Barbara Jordan became a nationally recognized figure, with her participation in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard Nixon, which was
D.then also later in the United States House of Representatives, not until 1974 did Barbara Jordan become a nationally recognized figure, as she participated in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard Nixon, being        
E.then also later in the United States House of Representatives, Barbara Jordan did not become a nationally recognized figure until 1974, when she participated in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard Nixon, which was

A*
DE redundant，排除。
虽然A的it指代也不太好，但是 BC which错误更明显。
这道题选B。错了很多次的点，太教条了，虽然觉得B读起来更好但因为which没有选。

6.(217)There are no legal limits, as there are for cod and haddock, on the size of monkfish that can be caught, a circumstance that contributes to their depletion through overfishing.
A.There are no legal limits, as there are for cod and haddock, on the size of monkfish that can be caught, a circumstance that contributes to their depletion through overfishing.
B.There are no legal limits on the size of monkfish that can be caught, unlike cod or haddock, a circumstance that contributes to depleting them because they are being overfished.
C.There are legal limits on the size of cod and haddock that can be caught, but not for monkfish, which contributes to its depletion through overfishing.
D.Unlike cod and haddock, there are no legal size limits on catching monkfish, which contributes to its depletion by being overfished.         
E.Unlike catching cod and haddock, there are no legal size limits on catching monkfish, contributing to their depletion because they are overfished.

A*
unlike后面只加名词，并且必须可比。排除 BDE。
C which修饰错误。

7.(218)In attempting to solve the problems caused by a lowering of the price of oil, oil companies operating in the North Sea have taken a variety of approaches, which includes their reducing employment, using new technology to pump oil more efficiently from smaller fields, and finding innovative ways to cut the cost of building and operating platforms.
A.which includes their reducing employment, using new technology to pump oil more efficiently
B.which includes reducing employment, using new technology to be more efficient in pumping oil
C.which include reducing employment, using new technology to pump oil more efficiently
D.which include the reduction of employment, their using new technology to pump oil more efficiently            
E.including a reduction of employment, their use of new technology to be more efficient at pumping oil

C*
平行，选C。

8.(219)Fossils of the arm of a sloth found in Puerto Rico in 1991, and dated at 34 million years old, made it the earliest known mammal of the Greater Antilles islands.
A.sloth found in Puerto Rico in 1991, and dated at 34 million years old, made it the earliest known mammal of
B.sloth, that they found in Puerto Rico in 1991, has been dated at 34 million years old, thus making it the earliest mammal known on
C.sloth that was found in Puerto Rico in 1991, was dated at 34 million years old, making this the earliest known mammal of
D.sloth, found in Puerto Rico in 1991, have been dated at 34 million years old, making the sloth the earliest known mammal on         
E.sloth which, found in Puerto Rico in 1991, was dated at 34 million years old, made the sloth the earliest known mammal of

D*
前面是fossils，排除BCE。A各种错误。

9.(220)The fact of some fraternal twins resembling each other greatly and others looking quite dissimilar highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely they vary considerably on a spectrum of genetic relatedness.
A.The fact of some fraternal twins resembling each other greatly and others looking quite dissimilar highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely they vary considerably
B.That some fraternal twins resemble each other greatly while others look quite dissimilar highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely that they vary considerably
C.With some fraternal twins resembling each other greatly and others looking quite dissimilar, it highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely considerable variation
D.With some fraternal twins resembling each other greatly and others looking quite dissimilar, it is a fact that highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely a considerable variation        
E.Because some fraternal twins resemble each other greatly and others look quite dissimilar, this fact highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely they vary considerably

B*
namely不可以直接加句子，但是可以加that再加句子，排除AE。
C it指代不明。CD with伴随，缺少可以伴随的主语，不对。

10.(221)The first commercially successful drama to depict Black family life sympathetically and the first play by a Black woman to be produced on Broadway, it was Lorraine Hansberry's A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics' Circle Award in 1959, and was later made into both a film and a musical.
A.it was Lorraine Hansberry's A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics' Circle Award in 1959, and was later made
B.in 1959 A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics' Circle Award and was later made
C.Lorraine Hansberry won the New York Drama Critics' Circle Award for A Raisin in the Sun in 1959, and it was later made
D.Lorraine Hansberry's A Raisin in the Sun won the New York Drama Critics' Circle Award in 1959 and was later made           
E.A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics' Circle Award in 1959, and later made it

D*
前面说的是drama play，后面也必须立即跟着这个play，排除ABC。
E说play made it，主语不对。选D。

Robertt

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1. announced 过去式 排除AB；D: announce to do是错的，正确用法是announce sth.或者announce+从句
2. Caribou are复数，排除ADE kill it; C: in order to啰嗦，to do较优
3. 仅仅从主语修饰成分即可排除A，B，C，E而仅留下D
4. date to 后面是ago，且to后面直接接年代数字（不需要接be）；date at 后面与old搭配。
5. E：then与later用词重复
6. 误选E：Unlike比较双方不可比；前面there be句型是主系表结构，所以后面contributing不能表示伴随结构，而是作为形容词修饰前面的名词catching monkfish；用because引导的原因状语从句来表示方式太过于累赘。
7. AB includes主謂不一致；DE三個動詞不平行
8. C：that was可以省略，且应该用that were；谓语动词应该用复数形式（B也是）；this无所指。主谓一致可以删掉很多选项
9.
10. E: A Raisin in the Sun不能把自己变为电影和音乐剧，因此make需要用被动，it無所?️