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【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day15

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1.(239)Were it not for the fusion-powered heat andradiation that rush from its core, instead itsown weight would cause a star to collapse.
A.instead its own weight would cause a star tocollapse
B.instead a star would have collapsed under itsown weight
C.a star would have to be collapsing under its ownweight
D.a star would collapse under its own weight        
E.its own weight would have caused a star’scollapse
D
2.(240)According to public health officials, in1998 Massachusetts became the first state in which more babies were born towomen over the age of thirty than under it.
A.than
B.than born
C.than they were
D.than there had been        
E.than had been born
A (错选C)
解析:more than的平行中出现省略,直接将than后的部分补齐,然后和than之前进行对比,相同的部分可以省略,不同的部分中的相同部分需要指代,最后留下的就是最简的省略形式,这也是GMAT的省略原则,尽可能地简洁而没有歧义。
这道题: more babies were born to women over the age of thirty than ……
补齐就是 more babies were born to women over the age of thirty thanbabies were born to women under the age of thirty
对比前后,babies were born to women 是完全相同的,可以直接省略
the age of thirty 也相同,但是是在over介词短语和under介词短语这两个不同部分里,所以用代词it

3.(241)Over 75 percent of the energy produced inFrance derives from nuclear power, while inGermany it is just over 33 percent.
A.while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B.compared to Germany, which uses just over 33percent
C.whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent ofthe energy produced in Germany
D.whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes fromnuclear power in Germany   
E.compared with the energy from nuclear power inGermany, where it is just over 33 percent
C(错选D)
我当时就想过D中的in会不会有歧义的问题,我怎么读都觉得没歧义。。而且和前面的句子平行结构更好,就选了D…但貌似还是有歧义,那好吧就选C

4.(242)Retail salesrose 8/10 of 1 percent in August, intensifying expectations that personal spending in the July-September quartermore than doubled that of the 1.4 percent growth rate in personalspending for the previous quarter.
A.that personal spending in the July-Septemberquarter more than doubled that of
B.that personal spending in the July-September quarter wouldmore than double
C.of personal spending in the July-Septemberquarter, that it more than doubled
D.of personal spending in the July-September quarter morethan doubling that of   
E.of personal spending in the July-Septemberquarter, that it would more than double that of
B(错选D)
不需要that ofthat指代不明,这里讲的是会超出原本预期的1.4%double the 1.4%

5.(243)Sulfur dioxide, a major contributor to acidrain, is an especially serious pollutant because it diminishes therespiratory system's ability to deal with all other pollutants.
A.an especially serious pollutant because it diminishes therespiratory system's ability to deal
B.an especially serious pollutant because ofdiminishing the respiratory system's capability of dealing
C.an especially serious pollutant because itdiminishes the capability of the respiratory system in dealing
D.a specially serious pollutant because itdiminishes the capability of the respiratory system to deal
E.a specially serious pollutant because ofdiminishing the respiratory system's ability to deal

6.(244)In Japan, a governmentadvisory committee called for the breakup of Nippon Telephone and TelegraphCompany, the largest telephone company in the world, so it would be two local phone companies and one long-distanceprovider.
A.In Japan, a government advisory committee calledfor the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the largesttelephone company in the world, so it would be
B.The breakup of the world's largest telephonecompany, Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, was called for by a governmentadvisory committee in Japan, so it would be
C.A government advisory committee in Japan called for thebreakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the world's largesttelephone company, into
D.The breakup of Nippon Telephone and TelegraphCompany, the world's largest telephone company, was called for by a governmentadvisory committee in Japan, so it would be   
E.Called for by a government advisory committee,the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company in Japan, the world'slargest telephone company, was to be into

7.(245)In no other historical sighting didHalley's comet cause such a worldwide sensation as did its return in 1910–1911.
A.did its return in 1910–1911
B.had its 1910–1911 return
C.in its return of 1910–1911            
D.its return of 1910–1911 did
E.its return in 1910–1911
C错选E
这里不能忽略了前面的in no other…中的in,需要平行。

8.(246)Scientists have identified an asteroid,2000 BF19, that is about half a mile wide and, if itstrikes Earth, it can do tremendous damage to part of the planet but probably not cause planetwide destruction.
A.and, if it strikes Earth, it can do tremendousdamage to part of the planet but
B.and, if it would strike Earth, part of theplanet could experience a tremendous amount of damage but it would
C.and that, if it were to strike Earth, could do tremendous damageto part of the planet but would
D.and that, if Earth is struck by it, can do partof the planet tremendous damage, but it would  
E.and that, if it strikes Earth, it couldexperience a tremendous amount of damage but

9.(247)Minivans carryas many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles,cost less, get better gas mileage, allow passengers toget in and out more easily, and have a smoother ride.
A.Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, comparedwith most sport utility vehicles, cost less,
B.Minivans, which carry as many as sevenpassengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles, they cost less,
C.Minivans carry as many as seven passengers, incomparison with most sport utility vehicles, and have a lower cost, they
D.Minivans, carrying as many as seven passengers, comparedwith most sport utility vehicles, cost less,   
E.Minivans, which carry as many as sevenpassengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles the cost is lower, andthey

A(选了D,心好累。。。纠结了半天,本来觉得A中的compared那句位置特别奇怪,因为前后特征都可跟运动车型比较,为什么还特意放中间?所以选了D,然而D还是错的。。但D也有问题,就是carrying变成了修饰,也就是只有能装7人的minivan才有后面那些特征,就跟原意不符了)

10.(248)The UnitedStates minted about 857 million silver-colored “Susan B. Anthony” dollarsbetween 1979 and 1981, but the coin proved unpopular because it looked and felttoo much like a quarter.
A.The United States minted about 857 million silver-colored“Susan B. Anthony” dollars between 1979 and 1981, but the coin
B.About 857 million silver-colored “Susan B.Anthony” dollars were minted as coins in the United States between 1979 and1981 but
C.About 857 million silver-colored “Susan B.Anthony” dollars that were minted between 1979 and 1981 in the United States
D.About 857 million silver-colored “Susan B.Anthony” dollars that the United States minted between 1979 and 1981        
E.Between 1979 and 1981 the United States mintedabout 857 million silver-colored “Susan B. Anthony” dollars, which
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1.(239)Were it not for the fusion-powered heat and radiation that rush from its core, instead its own weight would cause a star to collapse.
A.instead its own weight would cause a star to collapse 主语应放句首
B.instead a star would have collapsed under its own weight 主语应放句首
C.a star would have to be collapsing under its own weight
D.a star would collapse under its own weight        
E.its own weight would have caused a star’s collapse 主语应放句首

2.(240)According to public health officials, in 1998 Massachusetts became the first state in which more babies were born to women over the age of thirty than under it.
A.than
B.than born
C.than they were
D.than there had been         
E.than had been born
宾语比较,more babies were born to women over the age of thirty than (babies were born to women) under it

3.(241)Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.
A.while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B.compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent
C.whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
D.whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany                                                          在法国,超过33%的能量来自于德国生产的核能
E.compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over 33 percent在法国,有75%的能源来自于核能;而在德国,仅有xx%的能源来自于核能

4.(242)Retail sales rose 8/10 of 1 percent in August, intensifying expectations that personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubled that of the 1.4 percent growth rate in personal spending for the previous quarter.
A.that personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubled that of
B.that personal spending in the July-September quarter would more than double
C.of personal spending in the July-September quarter, that it more than doubled
D.of personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubling that of   
E.of personal spending in the July-September quarter, that it would more than double that of
对比还是要再看看!对于double的考点有点模糊

5.(243)Sulfur dioxide, a major contributor to acid rain, is an especially serious pollutant because it diminishes the respiratory system's ability to deal with all other pollutants.
A.an especially serious pollutant because it diminishes the respiratory system's ability to deal
B.an especially serious pollutant because of diminishing the respiratory system's capability of dealing
C.an especially serious pollutant because it diminishes the capability of the respiratory system in dealing
D.a specially serious pollutant because it diminishes the capability of the respiratory system to deal
E.a specially serious pollutant because of diminishing the respiratory system's ability to deal

6.(244)In Japan, a government advisory committee called for the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the largest telephone company in the world, so it would be two local phone companies and one long-distance provider.
A.In Japan, a government advisory committee called for the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the largest telephone company in the world, so it would be
B.The breakup of the world's largest telephone company, Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, was called for by a government advisory committee in Japan, so it would be
C.A government advisory committee in Japan called for the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the world's largest telephone company, into
D.The breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the world's largest telephone company, was called for by a government advisory committee in Japan, so it would be   
E.Called for by a government advisory committee, the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company in Japan, the world's largest telephone company, was to be into

7.(245)In no other historical sighting did Halley's comet cause such a worldwide sensation as did its return in 1910–1911.
A.did its return in 1910–1911
B.had its 1910–1911 return
C.in its return of 1910–1911            
D.its return of 1910–1911 did
E.its return in 1910–1911

8.(246)Scientists have identified an asteroid, 2000 BF19, that is about half a mile wide and, if it strikes Earth, it can do tremendous damage to part of the planet but probably not cause planetwide destruction.
A.and, if it strikes Earth, it can do tremendous damage to part of the planet but
B.and, if it would strike Earth, part of the planet could experience a tremendous amount of damage but it would
C.and that, if it were to strike Earth, could do tremendous damage to part of the planet but would
D.and that, if Earth is struck by it, can do part of the planet tremendous damage, but it would  
E.and that, if it strikes Earth, it could experience a tremendous amount of damage but

9.(247)Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less, get better gas mileage, allow passengers to get in and out more easily, and have a smoother ride.
A.Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less,
B.Minivans, which carry as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles, they cost less,
C.Minivans carry as many as seven passengers, in comparison with most sport utility vehicles, and have a lower cost, they
D.Minivans, carrying as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less,   
E.Minivans, which carry as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles the cost is lower, and they

10.(248)The United States minted about 857 million silver-colored “Susan B. Anthony” dollars between 1979 and 1981, but the coin proved unpopular because it looked and felt too much like a quarter.
A.The United States minted about 857 million silver-colored “Susan B. Anthony” dollars between 1979 and 1981, but the coin
B.About 857 million silver-colored “Susan B. Anthony” dollars were minted as coins in the United States between 1979 and 1981 but
C.About 857 million silver-colored “Susan B. Anthony” dollars that were minted between 1979 and 1981 in the United States
D.About 857 million silver-colored “Susan B. Anthony” dollars that the United States minted between 1979 and 1981         
E.Between 1979 and 1981 the United States minted about 857 million silver-colored “Susan B. Anthony” dollars, which


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1D 同10,考指代
2A 同7,经典比较/平行考察
3C 4B 5C(错,正确答案A,忘了:ability/ capacity / capability (of sb. sth.) to doin/for doing错
6C 7C 8C 9A  10A
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