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【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day15

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Day 15 C (又是一个做对了选错了的)ACBA  CCCAA
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发表于 2022-11-20 23:45:45 | 只看该作者
1.
A.条件状语,不要instead
B.同A
E.虚拟语气

2.
B.因为是女人的对比,所以不是婴儿
C.没有适用时态
D.时态         
E.时态

3.
A.it 不对,这里要对比的话不能拿过来指代
B.使用不对
C.应该是33%的能力来自于核能
E.地点状语不该这样用

4.
A.that 指代前面的分数不对
C.that 和it 的问题
E.that 和it 的问题

5.
B.because of doing 不对
C.表程度应该是用especially
D.special 表特殊

6.
A.it 指代company,但感觉不是因果关系
B.逻辑上这里的it会有问题
D.同B
E.was to be 不对

7.
A.did its return in 1910–1911
B.had its 1910–1911 return
C.开头有in了,in no other,所以应该是状语的比较         
D.一般是倒装
E.its return in 1910–1911

8.
A.应该是要that 来连接的
B.would do 不对
D.谓语的逻辑主语不对
E.这里的it 很有问题了

9.
A.假如是并列就不需要and
B.they 多了个主语
C.少了and 连接主语
E.这里the cost 又是一个主语了不对

10.
B.后面是it
C.同B
D.同B
E.同B
57#
发表于 2022-12-3 01:40:11 | 只看该作者
Day 15
1. D 考点 grammatical construction
这一题的考点是虚拟语气 简单的记忆方式就是从句were/had/should+动词原形,主句也必须要是动词原形
这道题先排除时态一定错误的have collapsed和have to be collapsing BC
E的its own weight would have caused听起来像是星星导致了另一个星星的坍缩 而且结构也不对
A的语义问题类似E,并补充:虚拟语气主句开头必须是主语

2. 错选C 考点比较
无语了真的这道题做了四次四次都是错的
比较对象:More babies were born to women over the age of thirty vs. babies were born to women under it
这里over the age of thirty是prep phrase可以忽略不看,可以看出是宾语和宾语的比较(babies born over vs. babied born under)
又因为这里介词under和over是平行的,it只带了the age of thirty所以语义清晰,babies可以省略,were也不需要放在这里
因此应该选择A
找准比较对象!再用比较对象决定需不需要省略

3. 错选D 考点比较 logical predication
Whereas/while不需要含义上的绝对平行
比较对象应该是energy produced in France和energy produced in Germany
A选项it只带了over 75% of the energy produced in France语义逻辑不合理 错误
B选项用德国和能源比 错误
C和D的区别在于place ment of prep phrase!!
D的in Germany变成了修饰nuclear power,变成了法国本土和能源和德国核能源?所以说prep phrase的位置真的很重要!!!
E 的比较对象也不对等,一个是整体能量一个是energy from nuclear,另外这个结构语义也改变了

4. B 考点比较 固定搭配 verb
比较对象是personal spending growth rate in July-Spectember vs. personal spending growth rate in previous quarter
固定搭配是double the + noun
是不是还有个虚拟语境?
排掉that of的选项,语义足够清晰了不需要加that of
BC之间 C的结构expectations of personal spending,用逗号隔开接非限定性定语从句是错误的,语义错了,it指代不清

5. A 考点 固定搭配 diction
这里考ability to do something/able to do something
capability of dealing是错误的 正确一些的用法:capability to do
Especially: 极严重的
specially: 特殊的

6. C 考点 主谓一致 指代
ABD it指代the largest company in the world,但也能指代government advisory comittee 指代不清
E 这个被动语态非常awkward

7. C 考点比较
结构In no other historical sighting...In its return of....
这个结构才是正确的

8. C 考点平行 grammatical construction
这个属于是从句的平行从句平行必须要有that 排掉AB
又虚拟语气 if it were to + could+动词原形
DE没有were说的好像要撞地球了一样

9. 错选D 考点比较 平行
主语比较,这里compared with做插入语 Minivans vs. most sport utility vehicles
carry和compared with 后面的cost/get/allow/have不是一个层次,是carry和compared with是一个大平行
BCE they指代不清
D的carrying as many as seven passengers可以被compared with修饰 有歧义 因此不优


10. A 考点 grammatical cosntructions
B有857 million dollars were minted感觉听着还有没被minted的,it无所指代
C it无所指代
D 同CB
E 用定于从句语义改变重心变成了minted,但重点应该是没人喜欢这些钱
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发表于 2022-12-4 01:02:41 | 只看该作者
Day15
1.(239)Were it not for the fusion-powered heat and radiation that rush from its core, instead its own weight would cause a star to collapse.
A.instead its own weight would cause a star to collapse
B.instead a star would have collapsed under its own weight
C.a star would have to be collapsing under its own weight
D.a star would collapse under its own weight        
E.its own weight would have caused a star’s collapse

D*
这道题做过,记住了答案。然而不太会倒装和虚拟语气。
If there were no …, a star would… 虚拟语气


2.(240)According to public health officials, in 1998 Massachusetts became the first state in which more babies were born to women over the age of thirty than under it.
A.than
B.than born
C.than they were
D.than there had been         
E.than had been born

A*
这道题也做过,记住了答案。than (babies were born to women) under the age of thirty.



3.(241)Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.
A.while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B.compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent
C.whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
D.whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany   
E.compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over 33 percent

D*
A it is 不知道在指代啥
B compared to 33% in Germany
C 前后比较对象不一致
E 结构好乱
这道题应该选C,whereas不用考虑比较对象是否一致的问题,比较就可以了。D语意模糊,“the energy”有定冠词,是说法国这75%里有33%来自德国,还是德国有33%来自核能?
E it指代不明,compared with后面的比较对象和前面的75%不一致。


4.(242)Retail sales rose 8/10 of 1 percent in August, intensifying expectations that personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubled that of the 1.4 percent growth rate in personal spending for the previous quarter.
A.that personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubled that of
B.that personal spending in the July-September quarter would more than double
C.of personal spending in the July-September quarter, that it more than doubled
D.of personal spending in the July-September quarter more than doubling that of   
E.of personal spending in the July-September quarter, that it would more than double that of

B*
A: doubled 过去时不对
CE:you can't say "expectations of X(,) that it would do Y". that's wrong whether there's a comma or not.
D: that of没必要


5.(243)Sulfur dioxide, a major contributor to acid rain, is an especially serious pollutant because it diminishes the respiratory system's ability to deal with all other pollutants.
A.an especially serious pollutant because it diminishes the respiratory system's ability to deal
B.an especially serious pollutant because of diminishing the respiratory system's capability of dealing
C.an especially serious pollutant because it diminishes the capability of the respiratory system in dealing
D.a specially serious pollutant because it diminishes the capability of the respiratory system to deal
E.a specially serious pollutant because of diminishing the respiratory system's ability to deal

A*
especially,排除DE。
because of 不对,排除B。
AC之间有点纠结。
C: the capability of doing/the capability in doing 都是错的!!!

6.(244)In Japan, a government advisory committee called for the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the largest telephone company in the world, so it would be two local phone companies and one long-distance provider.
A.In Japan, a government advisory committee called for the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the largest telephone company in the world, so it would be
B.The breakup of the world's largest telephone company, Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, was called for by a government advisory committee in Japan, so it would be
C.A government advisory committee in Japan called for the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the world's largest telephone company, into
D.The breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the world's largest telephone company, was called for by a government advisory committee in Japan, so it would be   
E.Called for by a government advisory committee, the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company in Japan, the world's largest telephone company, was to be into

C*
A it单复数不对
B it指代不明,且单复数不对。
D it单复数不对
E 是公司变成俩,不是“breakup”变成两个公司。
call for 呼吁


7.(245)In no other historical sighting did Halley's comet cause such a worldwide sensation as did its return in 1910–1911.
A.did its return in 1910–1911
B.had its 1910–1911 return
C.in its return of 1910–1911            
D.its return of 1910–1911 did
E.its return in 1910–1911

E*
理解句意,彗星回归这件事是sighting,比较对象要一致,选E。
这道题选C。前后比较对象要一致,都要有in


8.(246)Scientists have identified an asteroid, 2000 BF19, that is about half a mile wide and, if it strikes Earth, it can do tremendous damage to part of the planet but probably not cause planetwide destruction.
A.and, if it strikes Earth, it can do tremendous damage to part of the planet but
B.and, if it would strike Earth, part of the planet could experience a tremendous amount of damage but it would
C.and that, if it were to strike Earth, could do tremendous damage to part of the planet but would
D.and that, if Earth is struck by it, can do part of the planet tremendous damage, but it would  
E.and that, if it strikes Earth, it could experience a tremendous amount of damage but

C* that that 平行 后面的that是虚拟语气
AB让句子有两个独立的句子,排除。
D but it would与前面can do part of 不平行
E that 后面要加修饰asteroid的东西,不能出现主语,排除。


9.(247)Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less, get better gas mileage, allow passengers to get in and out more easily, and have a smoother ride.
A.Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less,
B.Minivans, which carry as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles, they cost less,
C.Minivans carry as many as seven passengers, in comparison with most sport utility vehicles, and have a lower cost, they
D.Minivans, carrying as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less,   
E.Minivans, which carry as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles the cost is lower, and they

A*
从cost less开始都是比较了。
B出现了两个主语
C不平行
D compared with好像是在和passengers比较
E不平行


10.(248)The United States minted about 857 million silver-colored “Susan B. Anthony” dollars between 1979 and 1981, but the coin proved unpopular because it looked and felt too much like a quarter.
A.The United States minted about 857 million silver-colored “Susan B. Anthony” dollars between 1979 and 1981, but the coin
B.About 857 million silver-colored “Susan B. Anthony” dollars were minted as coins in the United States between 1979 and 1981 but
C.About 857 million silver-colored “Susan B. Anthony” dollars that were minted between 1979 and 1981 in the United States
D.About 857 million silver-colored “Susan B. Anthony” dollars that the United States minted between 1979 and 1981         
E.Between 1979 and 1981 the United States minted about 857 million silver-colored “Susan B. Anthony” dollars, which

A*
后面是it,排除BCDE。只能选A了?
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DAY15
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C C C A A
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发表于 2023-7-6 07:49:25 发自 iPhone | 只看该作者
1-d  指代,句子结构
2-a 比较
3-d 句子结构 指代
4-b 比较 指代
5-a 固定搭配,修饰
6-a 句意 指代
7-d 比较 平行
8-c 修饰 指代 结构
9-d修饰
10 a 指代
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