【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day13

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Day 13
1. 错选E 考点rhetorical construction 修饰
先排除掉有歧义的B/D 用了夹心修饰，可以修饰act of congress或者Wahsington DC
读书笔记的重要补充：法律法规act不需要大写，因此必须要用相应的限定性修饰才可以distinguish这是哪个法律法规
因此BC的which用了非限定性定语从句不符合逻辑
C的句子结构导致整个句子没有谓语动词，错上加错
D除了夹心修饰外 Making的从句也是带有逗号的非限定性 也是错误的
E在语法上是正确的，在逻辑语义上made provision和established被放在了一个层次上，但实际上一个是因一个是果，不可以用also连接

2. 错选A 考点logical prediction grammatical constructions
时态排除掉B，都用had逻辑上不合理
用with的也排除掉，伴随必须有个合理的逻辑主语，但但这里主语是results of，错误
补充with独立主格结构：
With+object+object complement 做adverbial phrases，表伴随
e.g. Visitors to the park haveoften looked into the leafy canopy and seen monkeys sleeping on the branches,with arms and legs hanging like socks on a clothesline.
E的having fallen不可以修饰名词只可以修饰从句
剩下A/C之间
你咋就是看不见A的it主谓不一致呢！！！！眼瞎啊这么大个语法错误非得拿语义推来推去！！！！！！
A和C的时态都没有错，语法上也是合理的（怪不得排不出来）

3.  错选B 考点idiom
考点是prohibit的固定搭配：
1. prohibit something: Porhibiting disclosoure of its water purification 正确
2. prohibit from doing something: Prohibit from disclosing the water purification methods 正确
3. prohibit somebody from doing something: Prohibit them from disclosing water purificaiton methods 正确
prohibit that ->错误
因此，排除掉A prohibit that，B prohibit somebody from something，D prohibit somebody from something
E的to a company别扭，另外prohibit something to be done也是错误表达

4. B 考点比较
先排除比较对象错误的, A:people in france VS. US 不对等 错误
C fatty food US's 错误
另外their有歧义排掉A/C
D的 rate of fatty foods consumed听起来像是吃了rate 有歧义
E：the rate of people 错误！重点应该是consuming fatty food的rate
不是B有多好，是其他太拉


5. E 考点Rhetorical construction
读句意应该推出需要一个表强烈转折的连接词but
因此这里while选项应该被排除
C in its paying绝对错误排掉
D的proving和falling放在了同一个水平线上语义上就是错误的，并且but后面要有完整clause，用proving没有动词，因此D是错误的

6. E 考点平行 grammatical construction
这个句子有明显的平行标志词nor/or/and
先排掉句子内不平行的A/B/C/D

7. D 考点rhetorical constructions 平行
开头By sucking，因此后面必须跟可以发出动作的逻辑主语，tree growth显然不可以发出这个动作，因此排掉AB
C 的and dropping和谁也都不平行 如果是participle从句就不需要and了
E 把retards, causes放在一起，this指代了woolly adlgid使得WA导致了颜色的改变，逻辑意思不对，后面半句话的their dropping也是明显错误 因此应该选D


8. B 考点固定搭配
考点是so...that
因此排掉ACDE


9. B 考点平行 固定搭配
much of the artisans' creative energy was expended on the creation and on construction and decoration
这里是一个大平行包小平行的结构
先排除掉平行标志词冗余和使用错误的D, and also是冗余的
A的creation of 和when they constructed不平行 排除
C的constructing and decoration不平行
E as well as改变了原句的意思
注意！这种情况下如果原句语义被没有理由的改变那么下面的选项是错的，如果原句语义有问题，改变语义才没有问题
enshrined: 通常用被动时态 - 铭刻于心的
这里表达被篆刻的

10. D 考点平行 固定搭配
这里的考点是both...and的搭配，注意这是一个闭平行结构！结构必须是统一的，不然是绝对的错误
A: both rooted in...and Duke Ellingtong 少了Prep phrase和动词
B: both in the stride tradition... and Duke Ellington 少了prep phrase
C: who produced a body of work rooted 前半句话全是修饰没有动词
E: both in the... and Duke Ellington 少prep phrase

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1.(219)Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established the Library of Congress.
A.Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established
B.The act of Congress, which was approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established
C.The act of Congress approved April 24, 1800, which made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., and established
D.Approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., the act of Congress also established           
E.Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also establishing

A*
C前面的句子缺少谓语动词，排除。
E establishing修饰前面的made，排除。
B D making修饰后面的establish，排除。


2.(220)The results of the company's cost-cutting measures are evident in its profits, which increased five percent during the first three months of this year after it fell over the last two years.  
A.which increased five percent during the first three months of this year after it fell
B.which had increased five percent during the first three months of this year after it had fallen
C.which have increased five percent during the first three months of this year after falling
D.with a five percent increase during the first three months of this year after falling   
E.with a five percent increase during the first three months of this year after having fallen

C*
AB的it不对，和profits不符，排除。
DE感觉with表示伴随不太对？

3.(221)In an attempt to guarantee the security of its innovative water purification method, the company required each employee to sign a confidentiality agreement prohibiting that its water purification methods be disclosed to companies using an analogous purification process.  
A.prohibiting that its water purification methods be disclosed to companies
B.prohibiting them from the disclosing of its water purification methods to any company
C.prohibiting disclosure of its water purification methods to any company
D.that would prohibit them from disclosure of its water purification methods to companies  
E.that would prohibit its water purification methods to be disclosed to a company

C*
prohibit from doing可以 forbit doing可以。
prohibit to do不可以。排除E。
A缺少谓语动词。
BD的prohibit from后面要加动词ing形式？them也不对，因为前面是each employee。

4.(222)Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.
A.people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their
B.people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the
C.fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States's, their
D.the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the  
E.the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the

E*
若前面是people，则后面应该是their。若前面是rate，则后面应该the。排除BC。
后面有in France，则不应该是their，否则就是“他们的…在法国”，而实际意思应该是“法国的…”，排除A。
D应该是两个rates比较，排除。选E。
这道题应该选B！！！前面那个排除我想多了。of noun. doing永远是不对的。

5.(223)After several years of rapid growth, the health care company became one of the largest health care providers in the metropolitan area, while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in its payment to doctors and hospitals.
A.while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in its payment to
B.while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business and fell months behind in its payment to
C.but then it proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in its paying
D.but then proving unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in paying  
E.but then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in paying

E*
排除ABC，不可以出现两个主句。D不应该proving。不过AB的while好像问题更大？Ron：若用while表示比较，这两件事比发生在同一个timeframe里，不可能有then。

6.(224)Although energy prices have tripled in the United States over the last two years, research indicates few people to have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do, nor are they making fuel efficiency a priority when shopping for cars.
A.few people to have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do, nor are they making
B.few people having significantly reduced the amount of driving they do or made
C.that there are few people who have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do, nor having made
D.that few people have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do and are not making
E.that few people have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do or made

E*
排除A 不应该是indicate sb. to do. 意思错了，是说这个研究显示…，而非这个研究指示某人做某事。
排除BC 不平行
D 双重否定表肯定，排除。E完美平行。

7.(225)By sucking sap from the young twigs of the hemlock tree, tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop prematurely.
A.tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop
B.tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and their dropping
C.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, which causes needles to change color from deep green to grayish green, and dropping
D.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop      
E.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and then their dropping

D* 逻辑主语正确，后面平行
排除AB，逻辑主语错误。
E，不可以有两个主句。
C后面不平行，且which修饰growth。


8.(226)The four-million-year-old fossilized skeleton known as Lucy is so small compared with many other skeletons presumed to be of the same species, and so some paleontologists have argued that Lucy represents a different lineage.
A.presumed to be of the same species, and so
B.presumed to be of the same species that
C.presumed that they are of the same species, and so
D.that they have presumed to be of the same species, so that   
E.that they have presumed are of the same species, and

B* so that结构
ACD的结构都不对。E会让这个句子有两个主句，且逻辑有误。

9.(227)In ancient Thailand, much of the local artisans' creative energy was expended for the creation of Buddha images and when they constructed and decorated the temples that enshrined them.
A.much of the local artisans' creative energy was expended for the creation of Buddha images and when they constructed and decorated the temples that enshrined them
B.much of the local artisans' creative energy was expended on the creation of Buddha images and on construction and decoration of the temples in which they were enshrined
C.much of the local artisans' creative energy was expended on the creation of Buddha images as well as constructing and decoration of the temples in which they were enshrined
D.creating images of Buddha accounted for much of the local artisans' creative energy, and also constructing and decorating the temples enshrining them   
E.the creation of Buddha images accounted for much of the local artisans' creative energy as well as construction and decoration of the temples that enshrined them

B* be expended on 花费在…上，很平行。
A不平行。C不平行。DE句意都不对。

10.(228)Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
A.Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
B.Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
C.Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted
D.Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted   
E.Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

C*
这道题应该选D。经验主义错误，觉得出现了两个独立句子就是不对的，所以直接选了C。但实际上run-on sentence是说两个完整的独立的句子。

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5、e
6、e
7、d
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