【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day13

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Day 13
1. A
考点: that-限定性定语从句
          Which -非限定性定语从句
        B. That引导的限定性定语从句(即特指搬迁首都的那个立法案) 不能换成用which 引导的非限定性定语从句( 国会立法案只有1800年的那一个) ; making 和established 不平行❌
        C. 同B❌
        D. 前面部分厄长; making 是非限定性定语从句
        E. Made 应与establish 平行
2. C
        A. It 指代不明，fell应改成had fallen❌
        B. 时态错误❌
        C. ✅
        D&E. With修饰前面整个分句而不是profits
3. C.
        考点: prohibit sth/ prohibit from doing/ prohibit sb from doing
        A. Prohibit 用法错误❌
        B. Prohibit 用法错误❌
        C. ✅
        D&E 描述agreement 的内容用现在分词作定语修饰比较好，prohibit 用法错误❌
4. B
        A. Rate和US相比较错误❌
        B. ✅
        C. Their 指代不清，united state’s后无法还原❌
        D. Rate of fatty food❌
        E. Rate of people❌
5. E
        A&B&C. It 指代不清❌
        D. Proving 应与前面became 平行❌
        E. ✅
6. E
        考点: indicate ( to sb) something/ that
        A. Indicate 搭配错，making 应与reduced 平行❌
        B. Indicate 搭配错❌
        C. There are 表示依然存在或统计数据，此处不合适❌
        D. And前后不平行，且在否定句中表示或者❌
7. D
        A&B. 主语应该是wolly adelgid ❌
        D&C. And前后不平行❌
8. B
       考点: so….that
9. B
        A. And前后不平行❌
        B.✅
        C.A as well as B有主次顺序，A为主，B为次，Constructing 应为construction ❌
        D. Construction 和decoration❌
        E. As well as同C
10. D
        A&B&E. Both…and….的平行结构❌
        C. 主句没有谓语动词

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1.(219)Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established the Library of Congress.
A.Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established【正确】【法律法规的具体的内容要用ving 修饰，比如法规规定捕的鱼必须小于一定尺寸，但此处made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C.意为“提供了政府迁移的相关条款”，并没有说明法律法规的具体内容，所以限定性定从更合适。】
B.The act of Congress, which was approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established【定语从句改为现在分词修饰making需要表持续性，且丢失时态，不优；which还有修饰congress的嫌疑？】【 that引导的限定性定语从句不能被改为which引导的非限定性定语从句，因为“谈论 的立法案是特指搬迁首都的那个”，因此必须用that引导的非限制性定语从句（如果用which引导的非限定性定语从句，则imply了“国会立法案就只有1800年颁布的那 一个”，违背常识）；making作为伴随approved的结果状语，逻辑意思不合理，其应该是说明act的作用，修饰act。我自己的分析中，把which和两边的逗号提出，making可以看作分词修饰act；但是貌似该理解更好，看作which从句中动词的状语】
C.The act of Congress approved April 24, 1800, which made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., and established【and established没有并列的】
D.Approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., the act of Congress also established【主语the act相隔太远；making provision作为状语修饰established错误】【making作为非限定性修饰，使得句子表达的是act of Congress只有那么一个，违背常识。】     
E.Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also establishing【establishing作为状语修饰made provision，但是二者之间不具备修饰关系，都是法案规定的内容】【The act of Congress少了限定性定语从句的修饰，使得句子表达的是act of Congress 只有那么一个，而国会法案不止有一个，这违背常识；establish和make provision 逻辑上是同一层次的，不应该把establish作为伴随结果(逻辑含义也变得不合理)，所以要不把also establishing改为and also establish，要不改为同A选项一样。】

2.(220)The results of the company's cost-cutting measures are evident in its profits, which increased five percent during the first three months of this year after it fell over the last two years.  
A.which increased five percent during the first three months of this year after it fell【it没有指代；during the first three months应该与现在完成时连用】
B.which had increased five percent during the first three months of this year after it had fallen【过去完成时没有依据；it指代错误】
C.which have increased five percent during the first three months of this year after falling【正确】
D.with a five percent increase during the first three months of this year after falling【with作为状语修饰are evident，但应该修饰profits】【falling的逻辑主语也成 了results，错误。】   
E.with a five percent increase during the first three months of this year after having fallen【with作为状语修饰are evident，但应该修饰profits】  【after having done something是不可能对的】
3.(221)In an attempt to guarantee the security of its innovative water purification method, the company required each employee to sign a confidentiality agreement prohibiting that its water purification methods be disclosed to companies using an analogous purification process.  
A.prohibiting that its water purification methods be disclosed to companies【companies与an analogous purification process之间单复数不对应；prohibiting现在分词修饰？，法律用分词修饰，表示持续性的行为，但是agreement也适用吗】【prohibit that是错误用法】
B.prohibiting them from the disclosing of its water purification methods to any company【them没有指代；any错误，应该是any other】【prohibit sb from doing，这里prohibit sb from sth错误】
C.prohibiting disclosure of its water purification methods to any company【any错误，应该是any other】【 prohibit sth.是惯用法；因为后面未划线部分已经用了analogous，所以前 面只需要any company，而不必any other company来特意把自己公司排除开来；描述agreement的内容用现在分词作定语修饰更合适】【正确】
D.that would prohibit them from disclosure of its water purification methods to companies【them没有指代；companies与an analogous purification process之间单复数不对应】【描述agreement的内容用现在分词作定语修饰更合适；them无指代；prohibit sb from sth错误】  
E.that would prohibit its water purification methods to be disclosed to a company【正确】【描述agreement的内容用现在分词作定语修饰更合适；prohibit sth. to be done错误】

4.(222)Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.
A.people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their【rate和美国不可比；their多余】
B.people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the【正确】
C.fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States's, their【their多余；句子主干变了，有点怪？】【被动的使用awkward】
D.the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the【句意不对】 【the rate of fatty foods错，不是消耗fatty foods的rate，而应该是人们消耗fatty foods 的rate】
E.the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the【句意不对】【the rate of people错误，不是people的rate，应该是the rate of consumption】

5.(223)After several years of rapid growth, the health care company became one of the largest health care providers in the metropolitan area, while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in its payment to doctors and hospitals.
A.while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in its payment to【its多余；payment不如动词简洁】【即便表示转折对比，while也有”at the same time“的含义在里面，与then矛盾，并 让句意变成了the health care company expanding and falling是同时发生的，但是 实际上应该是先became largest，然后再fell；its payment没有问题，只是没有in paying to简洁】
B.while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business and fell months behind in its payment to【修饰关系变成了并列关系，但是二者之间是有关联的，无法处理业务增长导致了发不出工资】
C.but then it proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in its paying【its多余】
D.but then proving unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in paying【but then proving错误】
E.but then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in paying【正确】

6.(224)Although energy prices have tripled in the United States over the last two years, research indicates few people to have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do, nor are they making fuel efficiency a priority when shopping for cars.
A.few people to have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do, nor are they making【表明人，错误】
B.few people having significantly reduced the amount of driving they do or made【表明人，错误】
C.that there are few people who have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do, nor having made【表明人很少，错误】
D.that few people have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do and are not making【and are not making时态不并列】【 后面半句变成了few people are not making…于原句意思相悖； and在否定句中是“或”的意思，要用or来表示“和”。】
E.that few people have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do or made【正确】

7.(225)By sucking sap from the young twigs of the hemlock tree, tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop prematurely.
A.tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop【主语错误】
B.tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and their dropping【主语错误】【this不能单独作为代词指代前面整句，如果要指代前面整句， 需加上别的概括性名词组成this + n.；】
C.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, which causes needles to change color from deep green to grayish green, and dropping【不是树的生长导致改变颜色，是前面整件事】
D.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop【正确】      
E.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and then their dropping【不是并列关系】【this错误同B；cause the color of needles to change不如cause needles to change color简洁；and后不平行，their无指代】

8.(226)The four-million-year-old fossilized skeleton known as Lucy is so small compared with many other skeletons presumed to be of the same species, and so some paleontologists have argued that Lucy represents a different lineage.
A.presumed to be of the same species, and so【so that，两件事之间具有因果关系，不是简单的并列；因为太小了，以至于学者得出……结论】
B.presumed to be of the same species that【正确】
C.presumed that they are of the same species, and so【so that】
D.that they have presumed to be of the same species, so that【so that；they没有指代】
E.that they have presumed are of the same species, and【so that；they没有指代】

9.(227)In ancient Thailand, much of the local artisans' creative energy was expended for the creation of Buddha images and when they constructed and decorated the temples that enshrined them.
A.much of the local artisans' creative energy was expended for the creation of Buddha images and when they constructed and decorated the temples that enshrined them【and when没有并列的】【for the creation of Buddha images 和 when they constructed 不 平 行 ; they constructed中constructed应该用被动语态；expend for搭配错误，expend sth. in/on (doing) sth才是正确的；temples enshrine them的用法unidiomatic，enshrine通常用被动语态】
B.much of the local artisans' creative energy was expended on the creation of Buddha images and on construction and decoration of the temples in which they were enshrined【正确】
C.much of the local artisans' creative energy was expended on the creation of Buddha images as well as constructing and decoration of the temples in which they were enshrined【constructing and decoration不并列，且轻重关系不明显，最好用and】
D.creating images of Buddha accounted for much of the local artisans' creative energy, and also constructing and decorating the temples enshrining them【and后半句缺少谓语，可以省略主语，但是不能省略谓语】  
E.the creation of Buddha images accounted for much of the local artisans' creative energy as well as construction and decoration of the temples that enshrined them【construction and decoration太靠后了，好像在和energy并列】
10.(228)Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
A.Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted【both and不完整】【用非限定性定语从句不如用同位语简洁】
B.Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both【both and不完整】【Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer不如Jazz pianist and composer zelltThelonious Monk简洁】
C.Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted【缺少谓语】
D.Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted【正确】   
E.Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both【both and不完整】

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1.A
that限定性，which非限定性，法案不止一个，需要用限定性
2.C
主句和从句之间不能有时态的gap！
3.C
固定搭配：prohibit sth.；prohibit (sb.) from doing
4.E❌——B✅
rate of people错误，应该为rate of consumption
5.A❌——E✅
while在表示转折对比时，有两件events同时发生的含义，所以和then冲突；prep.+ones’s+doing
往往是不简洁的，注意看one’s是否在前句中出现过
❕prove可以是主动语态动词，尤其是描述性的品质，but后省略了it，因为主语相同(effectiveness)
6.E
there are表示自然存在或统计数据
7.D
8.B
9.E❌——B✅
固定搭配：expend sth. in/on (doing) sth.
as well as有主次之分，这里不能体现，应该为平行关系；E中as well as后面少了on
enshrine：珍藏，通常使用被动语态
10.D