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Day13
1.(219)Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established the Library of Congress.
A.Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established
B.The act of Congress, which was approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established（making这里做状语，存在夹心修饰的问题）
C.The act of Congress approved April 24, 1800, which made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., and established（fragment）
D.Approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., the act of Congress also established (making这里做状语，存在夹心修饰的问题)
E.Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also establishing(establishing是两个并列独立的事情，两者之间没有关系，所以用，ing是不合理的)
答案：A
Intended meaning: that限定性修饰the act of Congress，the act of Congress有很多，这里特指的是made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C.的那部the act of Congress

2.(220)The results of the company's cost-cutting measures are evident in its profits, which increased five percent during the first three months of this year after it fell over the last two years.  
A.which increased five percent during the first three months of this year after it fell(it指代profits单复数错误)
B.which had increased five percent during the first three months of this year after it had fallen(it指代profits单复数错误;主句时态用are,had increased这里使用错误)
C.which have increased five percent during the first three months of this year after falling
D.with a five percent increase during the first three months of this year after falling(with不优)
E.with a five percent increase during the first three months of this year after having fallen(with不优)
答案：C

3.(221)In an attempt to guarantee the security of its innovative water purification method, the company required each employee to sign a confidentiality agreement prohibiting that its water purification methods be disclosed to companies using an analogous purification process.  
A.prohibiting that its water purification methods be disclosed to companies（prohibit that的错误）
B.prohibiting them from the disclosing of its water purification methods to any company（them无指代）
C.prohibiting disclosure of its water purification methods to any company
D.that would prohibit them from disclosure of its water purification methods to companies（them无指代）
E.that would prohibit its water purification methods to be disclosed to a company（prohibit sth. to be done错误）
答案：C
Tip:
prohibit固定搭配：prohibit sth；prohibit from doing；prohibit sb from doing；prohibit sth. to be done错误

4.(222)Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.
A.people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their（rate和US比较，比较对象不对等；their为完全指代，故their指代people in France, 代 入句中即death retes of people in France…are far lower in France，语义重复）
B.people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the
C.fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States's, their（their平行指代fatty foods不优，就算指代people in France，也是完全指代，语义重复；United States和in France比较对象不平行）
D.the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the（the rate of fatty foods错，不是消耗fatty foods的rate，而应该是人们消耗fatty foods 的rate；consumed in France and the United States错误，主语rate应改为rates，且谓语动词改为are）
E.the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the（of people consuming fatty foods动名词符合结构不优；同时rate应改为rates，且谓语动词改为复数）
答案B

5.(223)After several years of rapid growth, the health care company became one of the largest health care providers in the metropolitan area, while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in its payment to doctors and hospitals.
A.while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in its payment to（while也有”at the same time“的含义在里面，与then矛盾，并让句意变成了the health care company expanding and falling是同时发生的，但是实际上应该是先became largest，然后再fell）
B.while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business and fell months behind in its payment to（while也有”at the same time“的含义在里面，与then矛盾，并让句意变成了the health care company expanding and falling是同时发生的，但是实际上应该是先became largest，然后再fell）
C.but then it proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in its paying（its多余，in its paying为动名词复合结构，它的逻辑主语应该和主句主语不同）
D.but then proving unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in paying（but不平行）
E.but then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in paying
答案：E
Intended meaning：经过几年的快速增长，这家医疗保健公司成为大都市地区最大的医疗保健提供商之一，但后来证明，它无法应对业务的增长，拖欠了几个月的医生和医院费用。

6.(224)Although energy prices have tripled in the United States over the last two years, research indicates few people to have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do, nor are they making fuel efficiency a priority when shopping for cars.
A.few people to have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do, nor are they making（indicate想要说明的是一件事情，因此后面最好跟that从句）
B.few people having significantly reduced the amount of driving they do or made（indicate想要说明的是一件事情，因此后面最好跟that从句）
C.that there are few people who have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do, nor having made（nor的用法不对，前后句也不平行）
D.that few people have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do and are not making（后面半句变成了few people are not making…于原句意思相悖）
E.that few people have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do or made
答案：E

7.(225)By sucking sap from the young twigs of the hemlock tree, tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop prematurely.
A.tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop(通过by sucking,逻辑主语应为the woolly adelgid)
B.tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and their dropping(通过by sucking,逻辑主语应为the woolly adelgid)
C.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, which causes needles to change color from deep green to grayish green, and dropping(which不能指代整个句子)
D.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop
E.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and then their dropping(this指代不优;and后不平行)
答案：D

8.(226)The four-million-year-old fossilized skeleton known as Lucy is so small compared with many other skeletons presumed to be of the same species, and so some paleontologists have argued that Lucy represents a different lineage.
A.presumed to be of the same species, and so（so...that...）
B.presumed to be of the same species that
C.presumed that they are of the same species, and so（so...that...）
D.that they have presumed to be of the same species, so that（skeletons被presumed，这里的主动就是错误的）
E.that they have presumed are of the same species, and（skeletons被presumed，这里的主动就是错误的）
答案：B
①so...that...
②Presume的固定搭配： presume的固定搭配，表示假设的时候就这三种用法：
presume that    I presume we'll be there by six o'clock.
presume somebody/something to be somebody/something (被动即sth. presumed to be) From the way he talked, I presumed him to be your boss.
be presumed to do something The temple is presumed to date from the first century BC.

9.(227)In ancient Thailand, much of the local artisans' creative energy was expended for the creation of Buddha images and when they constructed and decorated the temples that enshrined them.
A.much of the local artisans' creative energy was expended for the creation of Buddha images and when they constructed and decorated the temples that enshrined them（for the creation of Buddha images 和 when they constructed不平行）
B.much of the local artisans' creative energy was expended on the creation of Buddha images and on construction and decoration of the temples in which they were enshrined
C.much of the local artisans' creative energy was expended on the creation of Buddha images as well as constructing and decoration of the temples in which they were enshrined（the creation和constructing and decoration不平行；construct有专门的名词construction，不应该用—ing形式）
D.creating images of Buddha accounted for much of the local artisans' creative energy, and also constructing and decorating the temples enshrining them（and前后也不平行）
E.the creation of Buddha images accounted for much of the local artisans' creative energy as well as construction and decoration of the temples that enshrined them
答案：B

10.(228)Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
A.Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
B.Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
C.Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted
D.Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted
E.Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both
答案：D
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