【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day11

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1.(199)The Quechuans believed that all things participated in both the material level and the mystical level of reality, and many individual Quechuans claimed to have contact with it directly with an ichana (dream) experience.
A.contact with it directly with【it没有指代；第二个with有点奇怪】【it指代不清；directly有修饰contact或with an ichana experience的歧义：修饰contact 时意为通过ichana来直接接触，修饰with短语意为只能通过ichana来接触(不一定是 直接接触)】
B.direct contact with it by way of【by way of冗余；it指代不清；把原句的“直接地接触”改为“直接的接触”，原句没有错误的情况下尽量遵循原句？】【by way of没有问题；原句directly有歧义，应该修改】
C.contact with the last directly through【last最后一个，至少三者，应该是latter？】【两者之间的后者应该用latter】
D.direct contact with the latter by means of【by means of冗余；把原句的“直接地接触”改为“直接的接触”】 【正确】 【by means of没有问题；原句directly有歧义，应该修改】   
E.contact directly with the mystical level due to【因果关系不成立，应该是表达方式】

2.(200)A scrub jay can remember when it cached a particular piece of food in a particular place, researchers have discovered, and tend not to bother to recover a perishable treat if stored long enough to have rotted.
A.tend not to bother to recover a perishable treat if【bother doing】【tend单复数错误，应为单数，对应主语A scrub jay，tend与can remember并列，而非remember，能记住&倾向√，能记住&能倾向×；if从句省去主谓，还原后主语是 jay而不是treat，错误；Bother to do/bother doing都是对的】
B.they tend not to bother recovering a perishable treat【they无指代】
C.tending not to bother to recover a perishable treat it【tending没有并列】
D.tends not to bother recovering a perishable treat【正确】 【tends使用正确，主谓一致；bother doing用法idiomatic；stored后置定语 修饰treat正确】   
E.tends not bothering to recover a perishable treat it【bothering错误； to recover错误】

3.(201)The three women, liberal activists who strongly support legislation in favor of civil rights and environmental protection, have consistently received labor's unqualifying support.  
A.have consistently received labor's unqualifying support【unqualifying不合格的】
B.are consistently receiving the unqualifying support of labor【现在进行时不优；unqualifying错误】
C.have consistently received the unqualified support of labor【正确】
D.receive consistent and unqualified support by labor【by错误；不断地修饰收到更好，而非修饰支持】   
E.are receiving consistent and unqualified support by labor【by错误；不断地修饰收到更好，而非修饰支持；现在进行时】

4.(202)Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O’Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.
A.as much as that which is being emitted annually by all【主语为amount，无需使用as much as；which前面加逗号】
B.as much annually as is emitted by the【主语为amount，无需使用as much as】【annually位置错误，应该放在is emitted后面修饰emitted】
C.as much compared to what is annually emitted by all【主语为amount，无需使用as much as；as much compared to错误】
D.that emitted annually by all【正确】         
E.that emitted annually compared to the【句子中有"compare to/with"，这个句子也不能使用比较词，如more, less, greater, prefer, better, worse, X times as much等】

5.(203)In late 1997, the chambers inside the pyramid of the Pharaoh Menkaure at Giza were closed to visitors for cleaning and repair due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing and fungus was growing on the walls.
A.due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing【due to不能解释句子，只能解释名词；such levels so that错误；its错误】
B.due to moisture that tourists had exhaled, thereby raising its humidity to such levels that salt from the stone would crystallize【due to错误；its错误】
C.because tourists were exhaling moisture, which had raised the humidity within them to levels such that salt from the stone would crystallize【were exhaling moisture, which had raised时态错误，呼气在提升之前发生】【tourists were exhaling moisture无法表达closed for cleaning and repair的直接原因； Which在GMAT里面不可以指代前面整个分句】【Such that + would(情态动词)是表达目的，逻辑含义错误】
D.because of moisture that was exhaled by tourists raising the humidity within them to levels so high as to make the salt from the stone crystallize【关闭因为呼气，主干错误，一直都在呼气，但关闭是因为达到了一个界限，应该是呼气导致了什么结果；raising作为定语，动作有持续发生的意思，不符合逻辑】      
E.because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing【正确】

6.(204)The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his “Essay on Heat and Light,” a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A.a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a【正确】
B.a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a【envisioning有名词形式，为了和critique平行，应该使用名词形式】【his多余】
C.a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well【envisioning错误；as well多余】
D.critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of【critiquing和a vision of不平行】        
E.critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of【his多余；虽然两个动名词并列，但是有名词形式，应该优先使用名词形式】

7.(205)The commission’s office of compliance, inspections, and investigations plans to intensify its scrutiny of stock analysts to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when they are paid for their work by a firm’s investment banking division.
A.to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when they are【正确】
B.to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also if conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or they are【but also if不平行】
C.to not only investigate whether or not research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also if conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or are【but also if不平行】
D.not only to investigate whether or not research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or are【but also不平行】     
E.not only to investigate whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when【but also不平行】

8.(206)While studying the genetic makeup of corn, a new class of mutant genes was discovered by Barbara McClintock, a discovery which led to greater understanding of cell differentiation.
A.a new class of mutant genes was discovered by Barbara McClintock, a discovery which led【逻辑主语错误；which错误】
B.a new class of mutant genes in corn were discovered by Barbara McClintock, leading【逻辑主语错误；leading作状语错误】
C.Barbara McClintock discovered a new class of mutant genes, and it led【it错误，不是基因导致了更深的理解，而是这个发现】
D.Barbara McClintock discovered a new class of mutant genes, a discovery that led【正确】   
E.Barbara McClintock, who discovered a new class of mutant genes, leading【缺少谓语】

9.(207)Unlike the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries, a permanently orbiting space station will have to generate its own electricity.
A.the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries,【主语不平行】
B.the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, with sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights,【with sufficient enough power引导状语错误，应该是定语修饰unlike后面的名词】【Sufficient和enough同义词重复】
C.the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which enabled them to carry sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries,【主语不平行】
D.the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which were capable of carrying sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights, 【正确】         
E.the flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, whose shortness allowed them to carry sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries,【主语不平行】

10.(208)Scientists who studied the famous gold field known as Serra Pelada concluded that the rich lode was not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years concentrated the gold from jungle soils and rivers and rocks.
A.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years【not but不平行；如果看成单独的两个词，but后面的that从句也没有并列的，还是错误】
B.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but instead swarms of microbes over millions of years that【not but不平行；看成单独的两个词，也是错误；instead多余】
C.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but swarms of microbes over millions of years that【not but不平行】
D.produced not by the accepted methods of ore formation but by swarms of microbes that over millions of years【正确】         
E.produced not by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years【not but不平行】

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Day11
1.(199)The Quechuans believed that all things participated in both the material level and the mystical level of reality, and many individual Quechuans claimed to have contact with it directly with an ichana (dream) experience.
A.contact with it directly with
B.direct contact with it by way of
C.contact with the last directly through
D.direct contact with the latter by means of     
E.contact directly with the mystical level due to

2.(200)A scrub jay can remember when it cached a particular piece of food in a particular place, researchers have discovered, and tend not to bother to recover a perishable treat if stored long enough to have rotted.
A.tend not to bother to recover a perishable treat if
B.they tend not to bother recovering a perishable treat
C.tending not to bother to recover a perishable treat it
D.tends not to bother recovering a perishable treat      
E.tends not bothering to recover a perishable treat it

3.(201)The three women, liberal activists who strongly support legislation in favor of civil rights and environmental protection, have consistently received labor's unqualifying support.  
A.have consistently received labor's unqualifying support
B.are consistently receiving the unqualifying support of labor
C.have consistently received the unqualified support of labor
D.receive consistent and unqualified support by labor     
E.are receiving consistent and unqualified support by labor

4.(202)Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O’Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.
A.as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
B.as much annually as is emitted by the
C.as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
D.that emitted annually by all        
E.that emitted annually compared to the

5.(203)In late 1997, the chambers inside the pyramid of the Pharaoh Menkaure at Giza were closed to visitors for cleaning and repair due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing and fungus was growing on the walls.
A.due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing
B.due to moisture that tourists had exhaled, thereby raising its humidity to such levels that salt from the stone would crystallize
C.because tourists were exhaling moisture, which had raised the humidity within them to levels such that salt from the stone would crystallize
D.because of moisture that was exhaled by tourists raising the humidity within them to levels so high as to make the salt from the stone crystallize      
E.because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing

6.(204)The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his “Essay on Heat and Light,” a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A.a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B.a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
C.a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well
D.critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of         
E.critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
（平行&同位语）

7.(205)The commission’s office of compliance, inspections, and investigations plans to intensify its scrutiny of stock analysts to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when they are paid for their work by a firm’s investment banking division.
A.to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when they are
B.to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also if conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or they are
C.to not only investigate whether or not research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also if conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or are
D.not only to investigate whether or not research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or are     
E.not only to investigate whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when

8.(206)While studying the genetic makeup of corn, a new class of mutant genes was discovered by Barbara McClintock, a discovery which led to greater understanding of cell differentiation.
A.a new class of mutant genes was discovered by Barbara McClintock, a discovery which led
B.a new class of mutant genes in corn were discovered by Barbara McClintock, leading
C.Barbara McClintock discovered a new class of mutant genes, and it led
D.Barbara McClintock discovered a new class of mutant genes, a discovery that led   
E.Barbara McClintock, who discovered a new class of mutant genes, leading

9.(207)Unlike the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries, a permanently orbiting space station will have to generate its own electricity.
A.the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries,
B.the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, with？ sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights,
C.the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which enabled them to carry sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries,
D.the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which were capable of carrying sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights,          
E.the flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, whose shortness allowed them to carry sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries,

10.(208)Scientists who studied the famous gold field known as Serra Pelada concluded that the rich lode was not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years concentrated the gold from jungle soils and rivers and rocks.
A.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years
B.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but instead swarms of microbes over millions of years that
C.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but swarms of microbes over millions of years that
D.produced not by the accepted methods of ore formation but by swarms of microbes that over millions of years        
E.produced not by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years

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1.(199)The Quechuans believed that all things participated in both the material level and the mystical level of reality, and many individual Quechuans claimed to have contact with it directly with an ichana (dream) experience.
D
A.contact with it directly with it无指代；with experience搭配问题
B.direct contact with it by way of it无指代；by way of奇怪
C.contact with the last directly through  the last；directly 有 修 饰 contact 或 through an ichana experience的歧义
D.direct contact with the latter by means of     
E.contact directly with the mystical level due to 啰嗦

2.(200)A scrub jay can remember when it cached a particular piece of food in a particular place, researchers have discovered, and tend not to bother to recover a perishable treat if stored long enough to have rotted.
D
A.tend not to bother to recover a perishable treat if if从句无svo结构；tend主谓不一致
B.they tend not to bother recovering a perishable treat they指代错误
C.tending not to bother to recover a perishable treat it 不平行；it多余
D.tends not to bother recovering a perishable treat      
E.tends not bothering to recover a perishable treat it 从句没有分词简洁，it多余；tend doing没有这种用法

3.(201)The three women, liberal activists who strongly support legislation in favor of civil rights and environmental protection, have consistently received labor's unqualifying support.  
C，错选B
A.have consistently received labor's unqualifying support have done时态错误
B.are consistently receiving the unqualifying support of labor
C.have consistently received the unqualified support of labor 时态错误
D.receive consistent and unqualified support by labor    by奇怪
E.are receiving consistent and unqualified support by labor

4.(202)Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O’Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.
D
A.as much as that which is being emitted annually by all which is being啰嗦
B.as much annually as is emitted by the annually位置；as后直接跟is错误
C.as much compared to what is annually emitted by all as much不和compared to连用，同义复用
D.that emitted annually by all         
E.that emitted annually compared to the copared to位置错误

5.(203)In late 1997, the chambers inside the pyramid of the Pharaoh Menkaure at Giza were closed to visitors for cleaning and repair due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing and fungus was growing on the walls.
E
A.due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing such。。so that错误
B.due to moisture that tourists had exhaled, thereby raising its humidity to such levels that salt from the stone would crystallize
C.because tourists were exhaling moisture, which had raised the humidity within them to levels such that salt from the stone would crystallize them无指代；such错误
D.because of moisture that was exhaled by tourists raising the humidity within them to levels so high as to make the salt from the stone crystallize      levels so high错误
E.because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing

6.(204)The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his “Essay on Heat and Light,” a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A
A.a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B.a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a envisioning不如vision好
C.a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well envisioning不如vision好；as well错误
D.critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of     and前后不平行   
E.critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of and前后不平行

7.(205)The commission’s office of compliance, inspections, and investigations plans to intensify its scrutiny of stock analysts to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when they are paid for their work by a firm’s investment banking division.
A
A.to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when they are
B.to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also if conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or they are
C.to not only investigate whether or not research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also if conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or are investigate位置错误
D.not only to investigate whether or not research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or are     investigate位置错误
E.not only to investigate whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when 第二个when从句没有主语

8.(206)While studying the genetic makeup of corn, a new class of mutant genes was discovered by Barbara McClintock, a discovery which led to greater understanding of cell differentiation.
D
A.a new class of mutant genes was discovered by Barbara McClintock, a discovery which led 主语和studying不一致
B.a new class of mutant genes in corn were discovered by Barbara McClintock, leading 主语和studying不一致
C.Barbara McClintock discovered a new class of mutant genes, and it led 新的种类led巨大理解，语意不太对
D.Barbara McClintock discovered a new class of mutant genes, a discovery that led   
E.Barbara McClintock, who discovered a new class of mutant genes, leading 无svo

9.(207)Unlike the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries, a permanently orbiting space station will have to generate its own electricity.
D
A.the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries, 不对称
B.the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, with sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights, sufficient enough同义复用
C.the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which enabled them to carry sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries, 不对称；sufficient enough同义复用
D.the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which were capable of carrying sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights,           
E.the flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, whose shortness allowed them to carry sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries, 不对称；whose指代早期飞船了错误

10.(208)Scientists who studied the famous gold field known as Serra Pelada concluded that the rich lode was not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years concentrated the gold from jungle soils and rivers and rocks.
D
A.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years but前后不对称
B.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but instead swarms of microbes over millions of years that but instead连用错误
C.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but swarms of microbes over millions of years that 时间状语位置？
D.produced not by the accepted methods of ore formation but by swarms of microbes that over millions of years         
E.produced not by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years but前后不对称