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作文：
一个人对他们的fitness gyms的proposal：
our recent survey on our customers indicating they have a higher interest in eating healthier. One way to do that is by eating organic food. In response to that survey, 政府一定会开始引进orgnic grocery stores。为了contribute to our customers overall healthy level我们应该expand our fitness gyms with organic grocery sections. This will boost up our sales, which has not been changed for a while.

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我的切入点：
1.survey的可信度，sample有没有取好；
2.definition of eating healthy is vague, 而且ignored other possible ways that people will choose to eat healthy while not spending too much on food, since organic food typically is expensive than non-organic
3.cost of maintaining the organic grocery sections may be high

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