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topic 171 Imagine that you are preparing for a trip. You plan to be away from your home for a year. In addition to clothing and personal care items, you can take one additional thing. What would you take and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
my essay
When time past, we all grow older than before. So we may want to go outside to open our eyes. That is good experience to us. But when you prepare for your long trip, we always must face some tough choices which is whether we should take more personal care items or clothing . I deem that the personal care items care items are more important.
On one hand, when we leave home for a long trip, our heath is the most important thing. If we don’t have a healthy body during the trip, we can just do nothing. There are many aspects contained in (“in” is right?) personal care items which always be used for maintaining your body work well. Firstly, the medicine is a crucial item. That can ensure that illness keep away form you! If you have some emergency with your body, the medicine can help you recover form illness as soon as possible and make you enjoy your journey with more time. Secondly, some tools which are utilized under some bad circumstance are also useful items. For example, the umbrella can be used in a rainy day and the stick can help you for climbing mountains. So they also protect your health from an indirect way.
On the other hand, the clothing just have one main using. They keep you warm or cool. Wearing some right clothing could help you be beautiful but I think it is not as necessary as the personal care items for giving you a happy travel. And although we take much beautiful clothing, we just put on one set of them. So the extra clothing is unuseful.
As far as I concerned, the answer is so clear that taking more personal care items is a wise and helpful choice for going out for a long trip.
本人基础不好,考t时间紧,希望能保4争5!不知行不行!
另外想知道是不是标点也算在字数里呢? 字数最好是多少?
再次感谢!10月就考,急呀!!
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