关于Michigan的申请论文（ESSAY）

ring_cheng

2、Describe the initiatives you have taken over the past two years to develop professionally.  (500-word maximum)

我对该题的理解是，需要从三个方面来阐述：一是主动做过些什么工作/学习？二是这些工作/学习是否围绕职业发展目标？三是这两年的工作/学习是否具有渐进性和发展性？

如果我的理解没错，那么这道题是不是应该再写一下自己的职业发展目标？因为有了职业目标才好写如何采取措施的，不然会让人感觉写的没头没脑。但是第三篇ESSAY又问CAREER GOAL是什么？我担心如果两篇里面都写到CAREEER GOAL会很多余；另外，要不要写采取主动措施后的结果，比如“优化了产品开发流程，从而缩短了开发时间，增加了工作效率”这样的话？请大家指点。

4.Describe a situation where your professional ethics were challenged and how you came to terms withthe situation. What did you learn from this? (500-word maximum)

有两个事例，一个是当年做导游时有旅游商店向我招揽生意，许以高额回扣；另一个是被竞争对手挖角，但要带走商业机密。大家感觉用哪个更好？

先谢啦！

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-9-14 21:59:42编辑过]

jetrong

以下是引用ring_cheng在2005-9-14 21:47:00的发言：

2、Describe the initiatives you have taken over the past two years to develop professionally.  (500-word maximum) 我对该题的理解是，需要从三个方面来阐述：一是主动做过些什么工作/学习？二是这些工作/学习是否围绕职业发展目标？三是这两年的工作/学习是否具有渐进性和发展性？

你的理解非常好，我的想法与你一样!

如果我的理解没错，那么这道题是不是应该再写一下自己的职业发展目标？因为有了职业目标才好写如何采取措施的，不然会让人感觉写的没头没脑。但是第三篇ESSAY又问CAREER GOAL是什么？我担心如果两篇里面都写到CAREEER GOAL会很多余；另外，要不要写采取主动措施后的结果，比如“优化了产品开发流程，从而缩短了开发时间，增加了工作效率”这样的话？请大家指点。

不要写career goal，会重复的，而且只有500字，没有足够空间让你写的

4.Describe a situation where your professional ethics were challenged and how you came to terms withthe situation. What did you learn from this? (500-word maximum)有两个事例，一个是当年做导游时有旅游商店向我招揽生意，许以高额回扣；另一个是被竞争对手挖角，但要带走商业机密。大家感觉用哪个更好？我个人觉得还是第二个的好!有特色，有内涵挖掘!

先谢啦！

shouyang12

第2题问的应该是你的成长里程吧,因为在工作中,不同的经历会影响短期目标的制订

第3题应该是未来的发展目标

第4题感觉两个都不好,太大众,看essay的人整天见这中文章,估计看了会心烦

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纯属个人观点

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-9-14 22:23:52编辑过]

DreamXP

No.4

"另一个是被竞争对手挖角，但要带走商业机密"好像这样写的人不少哦,反而我觉得导游那个比较有意思,毕竟本身有导游backgroud的人不多吧

而今迈步从头越

以下是引用ring_cheng在2005-9-14 21:47:00的发言：

4.Describe a situation where your professional ethics were challenged and how you came to terms withthe situation. What did you learn from this? (500-word maximum)

有两个事例，一个是当年做导游时有旅游商店向我招揽生意，许以高额回扣；另一个是被竞争对手挖角，但要带走商业机密。大家感觉用哪个更好？

先谢啦！

我觉得这两个其实取材都没有问题，关键在于你如何描述。我觉得这种题目，取材基本上不可能惊天动地的，关键也不在于素材本身

cicilla

Michigan的题目真的可怕，我看了一眼感觉怎么无从下手？和我对其他学校感觉都不一样。可能他问得实在太细了。算了，既然essay都不喜欢我，我也就别申请了。

祝你们好运啊！！！加油加油！

eeyupyup

以下是引用cicilla在2005-9-14 23:53:00的发言：

Michigan的题目真的可怕，我看了一眼感觉怎么无从下手？和我对其他学校感觉都不一样。可能他问得实在太细了。算了，既然essay都不喜欢我，我也就别申请了。

祝你们好运啊！！！加油加油！

Agree.. Essays are very good reflection of the types of students the schools are looking for. If you find it very difficult to write their essays, a pass might be your best choice.

Good Luck to everyone!!

Swinerton

Essay 2. is how did you develop yourself. you can start from why you chose ur college major. why you took your first job, why you switched to another company, and probably, why you got another degree. The key is to show your development to now is consistent and I think the winning essay will be either you set up a goal when you were young, and you followed your goal and had solid progress or you switched your intest, but this interest is reasonable development of your past. Essay 3. I think this is about your future goal. Where you are now and where you want to be in the future. and this transition or development relys on your MBA education coz. your current background is not enough for you to open the door to your dreamland   To be honest, i think 500 words are enough to show what you want to do. And,wharton, duke chicago etc they have almost same essay question. the only difference is they merge those two essays into one question. So if you have completed ur essay for those three schools, just simply split it. but pay attention to why school part, try to be as specific as you can. link your interest to what this school can   provide you. As to ethics, if you dont have unique story, then tell it in unique way. Good luck my friends! Although I am not applying Michigan I like Ann Arbor very much. It is a very beautiful and friendly town. But be prepared to the long distance to those big cities and long long chilly winter.

毛西西

Michigan的问题在于500字的限制. 很难把问题说清楚.

shouyang12

毛西西是毛毛虫吧?

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