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151,5分作文,摘自185范文(暴笑)

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楼主
发表于 2005-9-5 10:10:00 | 只看该作者

151,5分作文,摘自185范文(暴笑)

151 What is the most important animal in your country? Why is the animal important? Use reasons and specific details to explain your answer.


本文摘自185范文,据称是5分之作,一读之后,顿觉异常之爽,故贴出与大家同爽。只为一笑,望原作者海涵!


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Before I answer this question, I feel that I should introduce myself(我晕!介绍你自己干什么?我们要介绍的是“the most important animal ”). I come from China, so(“So?” How so?) I think that the pig should be the most important animal in our country because this animal plays a very significant action in our daily life.



Needless to say, the pig is one of the most important meat foods. Everyday, we eat it from its head to its feet(吃的还够全乎). All parts of a pig are edible(大肠头是我的最爱). We can use its different parts to cook all kinds of delicious food. In China, there are eight kinds of dish party(?不懂). Every kind is closely associated with the pork.



The second, the pig is also a kind of important industrial material. .(猪的一身都是宝,我小学就学过)We can use the pig skin to make all sorts of shoes, wallets and other leather goods. In addition, its feather (我靠,强!飞猪!)can be used to make brushs



The last reason is that raising pig is one of the important income sources of farmers.(好的,经济话题,不愧是万能话题,新东方老师的指点一点没错,哪里都好用,我也准备用一下!) If you have a chance to China, you can find that almost every farmer family raises several pigs. Many farmers get their cash by selling pigs. At the same time , some provident and skilled farmers have become very wealthy through raising pig(真棒,我也要养猪!).



After understandind the reasoning above, I think that nobody should doubt my answer about this question. The pig is really the most important animal in our country.(我相信!I 服了 you!)


[此贴子已经被作者于2005-9-5 23:26:38编辑过]
沙发
发表于 2005-9-6 07:17:00 | 只看该作者

great!!!!haha

板凳
发表于 2005-9-6 12:35:00 | 只看该作者

there are eight kinds of dish party.


我想這應該是說中國菜系分八大種類


地板
 楼主| 发表于 2005-9-6 22:12:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用trey0726在2005-9-6 12:35:00的发言:

there are eight kinds of dish party.


我想這應該是說中國菜系分八大種類



yeah, that makes sense. But "dish party" just sounds ridiculous, it is like dishes are holding a part, or the party is about the dish. Personly, I think "dish groups" would be better. Maybe not, whatever.
[此贴子已经被作者于2005-9-6 22:16:20编辑过]
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发表于 2005-9-7 10:37:00 | 只看该作者
no offense, but this is really funny.I cannot help laughing!
6#
 楼主| 发表于 2005-10-4 05:06:00 | 只看该作者
终于考完了,反观此文,实属暴强!但5分可能是真的,是计算机打分得到的结果,不可小看。望引起注意,也希望借此增强信心!
7#
发表于 2005-10-7 18:59:00 | 只看该作者

看来往这方面发展还是有潜力可挖的

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