biss33：700分的遗憾（在第16页）

stevewu

偶選的是c

簡化後的資訊是 sold for three times the price that the drug's maker charges for...

其實偶覺得如果這裡的that可以省掉，就更簡潔了。

九月份真是群牛輩出，LZ將來也會是九月牛群的一員阿 ^^

Foreastbear

如果是that, 这样比较好：

price that, per milligram, the drug’s maker charges

biss33

以下是引用Foreastbear在2005-9-20 20:34:00的发言：

如果是that, 这样比较好：

price that, per milligram, the drug’s maker charges

that应该是不足charges之后省略的price ，是不是放在the drug's之后比较好？

biss33

stevewu想问你一下：考试的时候是要按州选学校还是填学校的代码？代码在那里可以查到？

wwwhahchn

偶以前的发言，帖过来，MM参考一下

以下是引用wwwhahchn在2005-9-11 12:45:00的发言：

GWD-13-8

A new hair-growing drug is being sold for three times the price, per milligram, as the drug’s maker charges for another product with the same active ingredient.

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2. than
   
   
3. that
   
   
4. of what
   
   
5. at which

我的理解：

支持C，charge sth.(price) for sth.(商品)，插入语不影响that引导限定性定从的使用

D错，of what唯一合理的理解是what表示商品，这样the price of what是一个整体，the drug's maker charges for ... 做定从修饰该整体，语法上讲得通，但是逻辑上有问题：what指代什么？？
1）what指代后面的another product：
这样就产生了wordy的问题，charge for已经表明了price的所属，前面再加一个(the price) of what重复
2）what指代其他的东东（非句中的another product）：
the drug's maker charges for ... 引导的定从的修饰对象是price，而不是what，对what起不了解释说明的作用，所以what显然does not make sense，应该换成其他的具体商品的名称，比如说anaesthetic。
但这样还是意思不好。不妨假设这里的another product是heroin，带入句中，就变成了the price of anaesthetics the drug's maker charges for heroins。到底是“毒品制造商就海洛因而索要的麻醉剂的价格”呢？还是“毒品制造商就海洛因而索要的价格”呢？？显然后者的意思清楚，前者根本就是不知所云

E错，charge sth.(商品) at sth.(price)对，但是charge for sth.(商品) at sth.(price)就不对了，而此题选E的话，正是用了后一种表达。所以这些用法一定不能混淆

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stevewu

以下是引用biss33在2005-9-20 21:06:00的发言：
stevewu想问你一下：考试的时候是要按州选学校还是填学校的代码？代码在那里可以查到？

學校的代碼在每間學校的網頁中都會提供，找admission的相關資訊很容易就可以找到。

如果沒記錯的話，應該是按州選學校（托福也是這樣吧？）

若有謬誤請大家指正囉~

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-9-21 8:32:40编辑过]

biss33

刚发完的短消息，这么快就回复了。

stevewu谢谢

ring_cheng

bissMM加油哦！

babypace

同意这题选C，that是合适的。at which的话要省略price的。

biss33

问ts 4-4：

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and
landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the
first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life
and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who
became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the
peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in
1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write
romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in
1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about
the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in
1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote
romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909
becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

这道题好像公认是d 但是我觉的d的前半句存在严重的结构问题，a novelist+who和后半句割裂开，所以我选了e

请大家帮忙讲讲。谢谢