biss33：700分的遗憾（在第16页）

biss33

问个问题吧:

Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff, Deborah Sampson, the first

woman to draw a soldier’s pension, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22,

was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become too ill to

serve.

A. 22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become

B. 22, was injured three times, while being discharged in 1783 because she had

become

C. 22, and was injured three times, and discharged in 1783, being

D. 22, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was

E. 22, having been injured three times and discharged in 1783, being

这道题真是让人郁闷。A的时态had become ,我觉得明显错。总不能先病倒再参军，在受伤，再退役把。

d也错得很离谱。injured如果作为并列的动词明显意思不对

要是作为修饰成份也太远了吧。

斟酌了半天选的d.但是好像大家偏向a。请各位指教一下

biss33

为什么偶的帖子应者寥寥？如有不妥之处请各位指正！！

stevewu

個人的看法是 because she had become too ill...其對應的主句是 (Deborah Sampson) was discharged in 1783，也就是把最後一個逗號後的部分當成一個完整的句子，而和 joined..., was injured..., and was discharged...形成平行對稱的結構。就邏輯關係來說也是如此，因為 become too ill 不可能是他去從軍、受傷的原因，所以這裡的時態應該是沒有問題。

wwwhahchn

以下是引用biss33在2005-9-15 21:23:00的发言：

问个问题吧:

Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff, Deborah Sampson, the first woman to draw a soldier's pension, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become too ill to serve.

A. 22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become

B. 22, was injured three times, while being discharged in 1783 because she had become

C. 22, and was injured three times, and discharged in 1783, being

D. 22, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was

E. 22, having been injured three times and discharged in 1783, being

这道题真是让人郁闷。A的时态had become ,我觉得明显错。总不能先病倒再参军，在受伤，再退役把。

d也错得很离谱。injured如果作为并列的动词明显意思不对

要是作为修饰成份也太远了吧。

斟酌了半天选的d.但是好像大家偏向a。请各位指教一下

这题我也是偏向D的，A的时态明显有问题，而且两个was并列，后面一个应该省略的

D的injured可以理解为分词而非谓语

大家讨论

biss33

谢谢小真真，stevewu

我刚才又看了一遍这篇文章

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=34&ID=117875

a选项应该属于逻辑意思的错误（本来我以为是纯事态错误，意看到就排除了）

d选项属于修饰错误，是第一等错误

我现在选d

open to discuss

msrs

我开始也是选的D，后来和NN讨论还是A好些

A有什么逻辑意思错误？这个我到没有看出来

D的修饰实在是太远了，OG中绝对找不到这样的修饰。

A、jioned。。。was injured。。。and was charged三个过去是并列没有什么不错，was我认为不可以去掉，去掉了后破坏了平衡。charged和什么东西平衡呢？

wwwhahchn

以下是引用msrs在2005-9-16 10:00:00的发言：

我开始也是选的D，后来和NN讨论还是A好些

A有什么逻辑意思错误？这个我到没有看出来

D的修饰实在是太远了，OG中绝对找不到这样的修饰。

A、jioned。。。was injured。。。and was charged三个过去是并列没有什么不错，was我认为不可以去掉，去掉了后破坏了平衡。charged和什么东西平衡呢？

A把had become ill放到joined army前面去了

biss33

大家晚上好，汇报一下今天的情况：

gwd10 错13（超时1分钟）

sc4 cr 4 rc 5  （有些题考试的时候做错了，但是下一来看就能选对，这是为什么呢？）

gwd11 错6（因为很多题遇到过，做得很快）

cr1 rc 5 sc的26和30答案改为e&a(大家对答案时请注意）看了7页讨论，汗……

怎么越来越差了，我快没有信心了。怎么办怎么办？

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-9-16 23:51:03编辑过]

biss33

坚持，坚持！即使在第100次被打倒也要在第101次站起来！

誓与ets斗争到底！！

biss33

晕，偶发现甜橙jj的答案又错了

gwd 11 cr 12 答案是c

大家可以看看http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=24&replyid=56351&id=56351&page=1&skin=0&Star=4

39楼 神仙lawyer的精辟论述。非常经典的解题思路，也许对逻辑有帮助