【语法】1214起愈发寂静整理（共97题，至1月4日）

livebelieve

楼主15题举的栗子不错 求问那个例子为什么E是错的   选D？

livebelieve

还有第九题第三个例子 是选C还是E？？？

livebelieve

举例：Rising inventories, when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead to production cutbacks that would hamper economic growth.
A)When unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead B)When not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, possibly leads C)When they were unaccompanied by corresponding sales increases, can lead D)If not accompanied by correspondingly increased sales, possibly leads E) If not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead


确实不知道选什么

livebelieve

如果能把举例的答案标记下更好了

livebelieve

楼主第五题也没答案   我要疯了

hermione919

livebelieve 发表于 2016-12-17 13:27
楼主15题举的栗子不错 求问那个例子为什么E是错的   选D？

正确答案是D，引用ron的解释哈！
choice (e) can be knocked out for its bad parallelism.
the two actions described at the beginning - cost plummeting, phones becoming more common - are clearly simultaneous, so we need to use parallel structure for these simultaneous events.
the first is "the cost ... has plummeted", so the second MUST be "phones ... have become increasingly common". it's not written that way, so (e) is incorrect.

in addition, (e) uses while in a questionable sense. when while appears at the beginning of a clause like this, it's normally used to introduce contrast ("while most of the class spent the weekend studying for class, i spent the weekend at the beach").

hermione919

livebelieve 发表于 2016-12-17 15:12
如果能把举例的答案标记下更好了

建议大家可以复制开头十几个词在bing搜索就找到答案和解释了哟  上面有曼哈顿ron的解释或者GMATCLUB的解释哈

hermione919

livebelieve 发表于 2016-12-17 15:01
还有第九题第三个例子 是选C还是E？？？

选E哈，C的错误是corresponding sales increases，结构是adj.+N1+N2 产生修饰歧义，形容词既可以修饰名词1也可以修饰名词2
而E中很好的修正词错误，corresponding increases in sales

hermione919

livebelieve 发表于 2016-12-17 15:01
还有第九题第三个例子 是选C还是E？？？

选E哈，C的错误是corresponding sales increases，结构是adj.+N1+N2 产生修饰歧义，形容词既可以修饰名词1也可以修饰名词2
而E中很好的修正词错误，corresponding increases in sales

hermione919

livebelieve 发表于 2016-12-17 15:06
举例：Rising inventories, when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead to prod ...

选E哈，C的错误是corresponding sales increases，结构是adj.+N1+N2 产生修饰歧义，形容词既可以修饰名词1也可以修饰名词2
而E中很好的修正词错误，corresponding increases in sales