OG13语法58题

livebelieve

感觉说C加了限定词扭曲句意太牵强了。感觉题目是不是想要D那种有因果关系词FOR的，虽然我也没在原题看出因果关系。。。。很牵强。。。

Fiona09

楼主不妨把题贴出来供大家讨论？

livebelieve

我贴OG113题吧   不懂

113. As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
 
(A) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
 
(B) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind as an adult.
 
(C) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision would be rated about 20/500; qualifying it to be legally blind if an adult.
 
(D) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about 20/500; an adult with such vision would be deemed legally blind.
 
(E) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision, which would deemed legally blind for an adult, would be rated about 20/500.

livebelieve

选D   那个that怎么回事
A Repeated use of it creates confusion because the referent is not clear.
 
B The final phrase is awkwardly and ambiguously attached to the sentence.
 
C The use of a semicolon instead of a comma creates a sentence fragment.
 
D Correct. One independent clause describes a baby’s vision, the other an adult’s; the two independent but linked main clauses are correctly separated with a semicolon in this version of the sentence.
 
E Subordinate clause beginning with which is awkward and ambiguous.
 
The correct answer is D.

livebelieve

还以为分号前后都要平行呢