Unlike the body’s inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin. A: with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting B: where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead C: with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting D: in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results E: in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results 我做题的时候选A,回头看的时候又觉得象D,很难抉择. A好像比较对象更好(body’s inflammatory response vs the body’s response to sunburn, widespread swelling and stiffness vs. more localized ),但结构较怪,with的修饰可能会有歧义(修饰前面的response还是后面的response?).而且"is more localized andresulting..."好像大全也见过类似用法,但读得总不舒服. D的比较对象不好,而且"until it has healed"中it该是指 "cuts and sprains",单复数有错.只是句子更通顺一些. 请NN们帮我确认一下答案.我后天就要考试了,语法还是没把握呀!
A中的"with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals" 可以看作非限制修cuts and sprains. A中比較不好的是"is more localized and resulting": - 第二個is不應該省, 因為is localized跟is resulting的兩個is工能上不一樣, 可是我不決定GMAC會否接受這種省略. - 假設GMAC接受這種省略, 另一個問題是好像沒有必要用現在進行時態(is resulting) 個人傾向A, 因為在5個choices中A是相對比較好...
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