我把我的摸版贴出来好了

xiaombmb

感谢分享！

vincentliew

这个好象GMAT的ISSUE模板吧

qingre2006

我觉得挺好，分享而已。谢谢

yongzuoli

The above writing format is good not for format itself but for that the format is written to be readable and understandable. The correct words are used and examples are placed in appropriate positions of the paragraph. I would like to add my input to this format. Based on my feeling, "their distinct experiences" may be changed to "their personal experiences" as distinct emphasizes the comparison between things. The writer wants to say " each one has each experience " but does not intend to compare the experiences. I still feel format is important in English writing especially in the test. Writing may be otherwise stuck somewhere without it in hand during the stressful writing period.      

tear1star

谢热心楼主