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楼主
发表于 2005-6-5 14:53:00 | 只看该作者

TWE 008

只准备一周考托福,时间有点紧,把作文贴出来,大家改改



Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has improved the standards of education. Use specific reasons and details to support your position.



Hot discussion always springs up when it comes to this topic whether television has helped improve the standards of education. Of course there are both pro-and-cons of the television, just as coins have two sides. However, as a student who prefers amusing education than those boring regurgitating lectures, I agree that television has helped improve the standards of education.



Television provides more content than traditional lectures. Television is by no means only a machine-TV set, and it represents those multi-media corporation teams where lots of people are working in every corner of the world and presenting overwhelming information to the audiences. It increases the content of traditional education dramatically. Decades ago, a primary school teacher had to describe sea as vast, blue and vigorous in an introductory lessen about marine life. Today’s lucky teacher, however, only needs to switches on the TV set, play a program from the Discovery channel and every single one of his pupils would be definitely clear about what a vast, blue and vigorous sea means.



Moreover, television makes it possible for an interest-oriented study. As the old Chinese proverb says interest makes the best teacher. Students tend to get A+ in those courses interesting to them but get not so good grades in uninteresting ones. Television simply provides a whole set of programs from which educators and students could choose their favorite from. Such a interest-oriented education method probably makes the education more effective.



Television could also be an alternative more accessible education way than the traditional classroom methods. Take a history topic for example. Many students might share the similar experience that the same topic would be much easier to be understood on a TV talk-show program than the boring lectures in the classrooms. Television integrates education into entertainment, which beats traditional lecture.



As mentioned, at the very beginning, that each coin has two sides, there is no denying that there are some side-effect associated with the introduction of television into education. For example, the content of some television programs may not be suitable for a certain age group of students. However, application of the television in education never means simply buying a TV set for the students and let them watch and learn in the crouch at home all by themselves. The teachers or other educators must take their responsibilities to monitor their students’ study. I believe that television stands a big chance to help improve the standard of education and people who work in education system could make this big chance to a true reality.


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沙发
发表于 2005-6-6 21:51:00 | 只看该作者

哎呀,楼主你一周考T,不就是高手?

板凳
发表于 2005-6-6 23:33:00 | 只看该作者
【发贴必读】--TWE标题格式说明!请不要省掉0!谢谢

TWE作文练习以TWE185的题目为准(资料指南和下载区均有下载)。
为了便于搜索,方便考友参考作文思路、理由,有效的使用已有的资源,并且对先来后至的作文练习有个比较,也方便版主管理CD原创范文。大家发出作文练习修改贴时,请在标题中使用统一的关键词格式,突出作文题编号:

******(标题)TWE******表示185 的统一编号。)


例如: [求助]偶在挤牙膏, TWE161

或者简单表述:TWE180


如果是个位十位的标题, 写成: TWE001; TWE019


恳请不要省略标题里面的0,


因为用单独的一个字符1是搜索不到的,


必须两个字符以上才能搜索。



同时: TWE-001和TWE001是不同的


请不要用横线或者空格, 有没有横线和空格的搜索结果也是不同的。



在正文里面, 恳请朋友们贴出完整题目, 方便大家探讨


所以恳请大家配合一下, 方便自己,方便后人。


恳请不要使用其他格式,谢谢

共同努力,营造完美备考环境!

友情提醒: 没有按照格式发贴的朋友, 请您点击发贴子窗口右下角的




可以修改您的标题


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地板
 楼主| 发表于 2005-6-7 12:30:00 | 只看该作者

没有那么多时间去准备,毕竟申请的时候也不是光看英文好呀;Gud Lak~ ^_^


to 斑竹,改了题目,方便大家查看,希望大家给估个分,提个意见

5#
发表于 2005-6-7 21:01:00 | 只看该作者

多谢配合!


你的作文很好的说,要我肯定给6分,祝考试好运。

6#
 楼主| 发表于 2005-6-8 09:29:00 | 只看该作者
初来乍到不懂规矩;)时间还是个问题,老是overshoot;
7#
发表于 2005-6-8 23:46:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用dengfu在2005-6-8 9:29:00的发言:
时间还是个问题,老是overshoot;

这个倒是要注意,平时练习时要严格要求,只留25分钟写。另外,考试时可先写平头加两个理由段再加结尾,保证结构完整,如果时间,再写多点。

8#
 楼主| 发表于 2005-6-9 00:32:00 | 只看该作者
多谢斑竹,这样还可以节约思考的时间,边写边想;唉,加油拉~
9#
发表于 2005-7-26 07:18:00 | 只看该作者

The topic is wrong. Why did you get the topic? It is not from the 185.


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