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burningsky

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The twentieth century has seen a great deal of changes and advances of technology taking place, with which human lives have changed dramaticly. In some ways, life is worse, but mostly it is better. Changes in food preparation, for example, have improved our lives.
    The convenience of preparing food today is amazing. Messes of heating tools is bringing us either instant or delicate preparation of food. Microwave cooking, for instance, makes cooking no longer a time consuming task. Instead, getting food quickly cooked is as simple as pressing several buttons. Consequently, a large amount of time can be saved especially for white-colars to concentrate more on their work.
    Not only convenience, food preparation today also provide us with more variety. With refrigerators and freezers, people can prepare different kinds of foods at different time and enjoy them at one meal. This advantage allows us to get various elements of nutritions even through a small and commen meal. Additionally, people living in the same house with different taste can also benefit from the variety of food preparation.
    Besides, healthy eating nowadays is also easier than before. When cooking, people use new fat substitutes and cooking recipes to cut fat and calories. This reduces the rick of heart diseases and high blood pressure which people have suffered for a long time. Also, ruits and vegetables whether fresh, preserved or canned are available all the year round. Think of how easily one can enjoy fresh oranges to absorb vitamin C any season anywhere he wants.
    Our lives are fast, but people still prefer well-prepared food. New food praration thchnololgy brings us more advantages than those listed above. But even just the convenience, variety and health it has brought have dramaticly improved our lives.

这篇没有计时，是对着范文自己改的，不知是否有自己风格脱离了范文呢？

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好像没有你另一篇写的潇洒

burningsky

8. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

    Nowadays, watching TV has become an important way of people’s daily entertainments. As the time people spend in front of televisions is getting longer, there comes an opinion that television has destroyed communication among friends and family. As a fun of television myself, I find the statement above is not to the point.

    The fact is that although television does cut down some time of communication among friends family, it is far from destroying the communications. After all, watching TV is one of the various recreations people enjoy today. Other indoor pastime including playing cards and surfing on the internet, as well as outdoor activities such as shopping and travalling share a balanced weight with watching TV in people’s daily life. That is to say, television is just one of the factorsof the deminishment of communications in morden world.

    Though the infulence does exist, the time people absorbed in television does not completely separate friends or members of family from each other. When friends and members are watching together, the programmes provide them more topics to discuss, without which people may just care about their own business. Imagining a father and his son share a football game in front of TV together, there would be amounts of subjects they can talking, such as the players, and the situation of the game. In this way they get to understand more of each other, overcoming the potential generation gap which may be an obstacle of their communication.

    In addtion, the programmes people prefer in certain period can provide more imformation of one’s moods, feelings and interests for friens and family members. A mother may notice the violent trend of her child who tends to prefer TV shows about violence. By this information, she can take some meatures to care more of her kid in more aspects in daily life, for instance, the friends the kid usually hang with, or the books the kid is fond of most. The futher care for child can deepen the communication with her mother.

    Based on what are mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that televisions contribute to people’s communication in stead of destroying it. The key lies in the proper way to use this tool of entertainment.

then how about this one?

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  burningsky对待TWE的态度和精神值得学习和鼓励.

你的后一篇好象比第一篇要流畅一些.

burningsky

看来还是要自己写了～我决定放弃模板和范文啊啦～～