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 楼主| 发表于 2003-8-12 17:11:00 | 只看该作者
刚才忘了说,是考G的作文模板,但修改修改可以用在T--
主要觉得T笔考论坛里没很多的作文模板,所以.....大家凑合的看吧~
板凳
发表于 2003-8-12 20:32:00 | 只看该作者
谢谢MM!
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2003-8-13 10:21:00 | 只看该作者
再贴几个网友转给偶的T模板吧,好像出自GTER,

要你命3000-作文拿这个模板上吧  
   
请英语好的同学看一下有没有什么结构、语法和用词上的不妥!谢谢!  
本文系综合《TWE填空作文法》,朱泰琪的考研作文模板,还有水木上Skytarget和twoc  
up等诸多大牛的作文模板而成。 ( )表示可有可无的话,字不够就加上。[ a/b/c]表示
方括号内由/分开的几句话选一句  
  
   
(一) 对立观点式  
(1)给出两个对立的事物或者一个事物对立的两个方面,要求考生支持一方并进行说明。  
   
   具体表述如下:  
TOPIC:  Some people like A; others like B. Which one do you         
prefer -- A or B? Give specific reasons and examples        to  
illustrate your answer.  
(2)给出两个对立事物或一个事物对立的两个方面,要求考生说明二者为什么不同或比较  
它们的优缺点,并给出理由。  
    具体表述如下:  
TOPIC:  Some people believe that A while others consider B         more  
appropriate. Give advantages and disadvantages         of the two  
positions and explain which position         you support.  
   
对立观点式的三种模板:  
1.人们往往看到B的明显优点而忽视了它的缺点,同时A的内在优势没有被重视。  
第一段:To choose A or choose B is something of a dilemma to the public  
because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of  
B, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of A.  
第二段:[For B, people are often driven to believe that / It is quite  
easy for average people to CHOOSE B because of the obvious reason that]  
……. (As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”.) Although B does  
have its seemingly profound advantages, at the mean time[there lies  
intrinsic [harmful characteristic/drawbacks] in it such as …… / it can  
be achieved only conditionally because……] . Some [people/experts]  
[maintain/warn] that……. This significant point, however, is often not  
noticed by [the public/most people]  
and accordingly, is unconsciously overlooked. (Therefore we have no  
complete  evidence to suggest that B is always better than A.)  
第三段:[Another [disastrous/unfortunate] fact is that / Unfortunately,]  
the  innate quality of A is often underestimated.  
或:What is more, if you notice the invisible benefits of CHOOSING A,  
you can understand A more deeply.  
   
Here I would explain a few of the most important reasons for choosing A.  
The  main reason is that ……. To illustrate this, there is an example  
that is very persuasive:……. Besides, the further reason why I advocate  
AAA is that……. Moreover,……  
第四段:Therefore from what we have discussed, we may safely come to the  
conclusion that CHOOSING AAA is a rather wise decision.  
   
2.选A还是选B的确是一个热门话题,我们来研究一下,A比B至少有三大优势:1,2,3  
。  
第一段:There is no denying the fact that …(whether to choose A or B is  
better) is a popular topic which is much talked about [not only by …,  
but also by …/by people across the world/ in a modern society].  
或:There is no denying the fact that …(whether to choose A or B is  
better) is a popular topic which has caused heated debate over a long  
period of time (because it affects everybody in his or her daily lives).  
或:In a modern society, people always face the dilemma of whether to  
choose  A or B. This problem is a much-debated one in that it affects  
everybody in his or her daily lives.  
   
Although it seems that [ [normally/sometimes] we can not tell which one  
outweigh the other between A and B / they normally coexist peacefully],  
they deserve some close examination.  
   
[If three criteria were taken into account, in comparing these two, I  
would prefer A. / As far as I am concerned, I vote for the latter].  
There are no less than three advantages in A as rendered below:  
第二段First, we can observe easily that in modern society,  
①          .The second/another reason for my propensity for A is that  
②             .The third reason, not the last/however, goes this way:  
③           .  
第三段In conclusion, (it must be explained that these three reasons  
sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more  
persuasive than any one of them.) Only these three reasons can make a  
person draw the conclusion that ④           , not to mention there are  
more.  
   
3.选A还是选B的确是一个热门话题,我们来研究一下,二者各有优势,不过我来选的话  
,A的优点还是比B多。  
第一段前两句同2,第三句While both the two [methods/choice] may have their  
advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different  
circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinion about it.  
第二段:[A has the obvious advantage that / One very strong argument for  
A is that] ……. But there lies intrinsic harmful characteristic in this  
method. Some [people/expert] [maintain/warn] that…… Furthermore, …….  
Therefore we have no complete evidence to suggest that A is always  
better than B.  
第三段:On the other hand, choosing B also has advantages to some  
extent, For example, …… .  
   
However, it is also important to see that under certain circumstances B  
will ……(disadvantage)  
或:Yet there are some people who cast serious doubts on B  
或:Although B does have its seemingly profound [advantages/ reason], at  
the  mean time[there lies intrinsic [harmful characteristic/drawbacks]  
in it such as …… / it can be achieved only conditionally  
because……] .  
第四段:(针对我个人的情况又可以说出一套理由)But if all these factors are  
c ontemplated, [as far as I am concerned / according to my personality  
and fondness], the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B  
because A fits [me/us students] better in two ways: In the first place,  
……,  In the second place/secondly,……Therefore from what we have  
discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion that CHOOSING AAA is a  
rather wise decision. 或:(我个人的情况说不出什么新的理由,只好说我觉得A优
点就是比B多)  
It seems, very difficult for us to prefer one to another because all of  
them  have their advantages and disadvantages to the extent that it is  
hard to distinguish. Yet that does not mean they are all the same to me.  
Which one I prefer depends on my own experience, life style and  
emotional concerns. [As far as I am concerned / According to my  
personality and fondness/ To be frank], I would like to choose A,  
because there are too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages not  
to choose it. B, on the other hand, has advantages no more than its  
disadvantages.  
   
(二)单一观点式  
(1)给出一个论点,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由。  
    具体表述如下:  
TOPIC:   Do you agree or disagree with the following           
statement?  AA A. Use specific reasons and details         to support  
your answer.  
(2)给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由  
。  
   具体表述如下:  
TOPIC:   A is superior to B in DONG C. Do you agree or          disagree  
with this statement? Use specific reasons to          support your point  
of view
   注:在模板中用A、B表示相比较的两个事物,这种形式与对立观点式有着很大的相  
         似之处,考生可以进行适当的借鉴。  
   
我认为(2)不如就用对立观点式的模板得了。(1)的两种模板如下:  
1.disagree这个问题的确是个热门话题,支持的人的理由是……,但是它的错误在
于… …  
第一段:There is no denying the fact that …(if one should … /if … is  
correct) is a hot topic which is much talked about [not only by …, but  
also by… /by people across the world/ in a modern society].  
或:There is no denying the fact that …(if one should … /if … is  
correct) is a popular topic which has caused heated debate over a long  
period of time (because it affects everybody in his or her daily lives).  
或:There is no denying the fact that …(if one should … /if … is  
correct)  is the basic (moral/philosophical) problem that can not be  
circumvented byanybody,( because the opinion on this problem will  
determine one’s attitude toward the world and the life).  
Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to take a glance at  
the  
arguments on both sides. 第二段:People who support AAA usually give  
some, even all of the following reasons. The first is that … The  
second/another reason for people’s propensity to the idea is that…The  
third reason [not the last/however], goes this way:…  
第三段:(As a proverb says, “Everthing has two sides”.) Although …(the  
opinion in question) does have its seemingly profound  
[advantages/reason], at the mean time [there lie intrinsic [harmful  
characteristics/drawbacks/faults] in [it/this method] such as …… / it  
can be achieved only conditionally because……] . Some [people/expert]  
[maintain/warn] that……. This significant point, however, is often not  
noticed by [the public/most people] and accordingly, is unconsciously  
overlooked. (Therefore we have no complete evidence to conclude that the  
statement is correct.) What is more, …  
第四段:As far as I am concerned, I am convinced that … Therefore,  
based on  the above discussion, I disagree with the opinion.  
   
2.Agree或disagree都可以。这个问题的确是个热门话题,乍一看不好说,不能仓促下  
结论,但是我同意/不同意它,至少有3条理由:1,2,3。(下面是按agree写的,容易  
改为disagree的模板)  
第一段第一句同1 ,第二句At first glance it seems very difficult for us to  
draw a [definite/quick] conclusion that … is right or wrong, because it  
has both advantages and disadvantages. However, after serious  
considerations we can see that under most circumstances …(this  
approach) will do more good than harm.  
或:As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion. However, it is  
unfair to draw a quick conclusion without serious considerations.  
   
There are no less than [three advantages in A/three reasons to agree  
with the opinion] as rendered below:  
第二段First, we can observe easily that in modern society, ①          .  
The second/another reason for my (propensity for …/agreement with …)  
is that …  
The third reason, [not the last/however], goes this way: ③           .  
第三段In conclusion, (it must be explained that these three reasons  
sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more  
persuasive than any one of them.) Only these three reasons can make [a  
person/me] draw the conclusion that ④           , not to mention there  
are more.  
(三)选择观点式  
      具体表述如下:  
TOPIC:   In order to do XXX, there are many ways:          A, B, C,  
D……. W hich do you choose? Give specific         reasons and examples  
to illustrate  your answer.  
      注:在模板中用大写XXX表示一件事情,A,B,C,D代表做此事所用的不同方  
          法。这种命题形式不为多见。  
   
1.这么多东东好难挑啊,但是只考虑我个人的喜好,我选A,选A至少有三条好处:1,2  
,3。所以我得出结论A好。当然这仅限于我。  
第一段It seems, in so many items, very difficult for us to prefer one to  
another because all of them have their advantages and disadvantages to  
the extent that it is hard to distinguish. Yet that does not mean they  
are all the same to me. Which one I prefer depends on my own experience,  
life style and emotional concerns. To be frank, I would prefer A if  
personal quality is considered as a criterion to choose things.  
(However, it is unfair to draw a quick conclusion without serious  
considerations.) There are no less than three advantages in A as  
rendered below:  
第二段First, we can observe easily that in modern society, ①          .  
The second/another reason for my (propensity for …/agreement with …)  
is that …  
The third reason, [not the last/however], goes this way: ③           .  
第三段In conclusion, (it must be explained that these three reasons  
sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more  
persuasive than any one of them.) Only these three reasons can make me  
draw the conclusion that ④           , not to mention there are more  
(reasons that can account for my fondness for it). (Anyway, it is  
confined to me, different persons can make different choices according  
to their personality and fondness.)  
   
一些通用的句型:(不好固定在某个模板中,而是在每个模板中都可以用到)  
It can be given by a (well known/concrete) example that ……. / In order  
to see this point clearly, let us to see an example:……  
This may explain why …….  
It goes without seeing that……  
In fact, we can observe easily that in modern society,……  
As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”.  
As a proverb says, “Where there is a will there is a way”.  
As is known to all, “No pains, no gains.”  
Let’s bring our discussion here to a more present and practical  
context. In  today’s world,……  
I can say that if you have no experience like these, your life is an  
inadequ ate one.  

be of great benefit to sb./sth.  
The reason of … is not so much … as …  
People differ greatly in their attitudes towards this problem. Some  
people hold the opinion that … Others, [ however/on the contrary],  
maintain that …  
   
It is [urgent/necessary/convienient/desirable/advisable] for sb. to do  
sth.  
have [trouble/a difficult time] [in doing sth./with sth.]  
最后意犹未尽或者字数不够可以加这么一句:Nevertheless I must admit that  
people can do well without AAA, but no one can ignore the added  
convenience and satisfaction offered by AAA. Such experience will  
definitely be helpful in one's later life. (你想要我不会不给你,你不想要我
也不会强迫你要,大家讲道理吗  
……)

5#
 楼主| 发表于 2003-8-13 10:22:00 | 只看该作者
别嫌烦,还有一个,是转贴(来自GTER)

昨晚用了一晚上的时间拜读了skytarget的作文模板并将其改变成自己的风格。正好今天的  
考试用上了,所以现在将其共享,希望对以后的兄弟姐妹能有用。  
---------------------------------  
In this modern society,people always confront the dilemma of choosing wheth  
er AAA or BBB.This problem is a much debated one in that it affects  
everybody in his or her daily life.People may prefer one to the other  
although some may have no opinions about both at all.Before rendering my  
opinion,I think it is necessary to take a glance at the arguments on both  
sides.  
It is quite rational for average people to choose BBB because of the  
obvious  reason that 原因.The most extreme manifestation of this idea is  
the fact that  例子.Even though,however,many advantages of BBB over AAA  
will be obscured by its considerable drawbacks such as 例子.Therefore we  
have no complete evidence  to suggest that BBB is always better than  
AAA.Moreover, a close scrutiny of  the potential benefits of choosing AAA  
would reveal how flimsy it is to stick  to the propensity to BBB over AAA.  
There are numerous reasons for my preference for AAA, and I shall here  
explore only a few of the most important ones. One chief reason is that 原因
一.And I can think of no better illustration of the idea than the fact that  
例子一.  

The above is only part of the important aspects, and another one with equal  
significance with respect to choosing between the two lies in the  
development of the proposition that 原因二.This demonstrates the undeniable  
fact that 例子二.  
Besides,a further reason why I advocate AAA is that 原因三.This may explain  
why 例子三.  
In addition...  
Finally,to speak frank, there is also a more practical reason why I would  
choose to...
Instances of the same sort can be multiplied indefinitely.When taking into  
account all these merits we may safely arrive at the conclusion that  
advantages of AAA outweigh any benefit we can get from BBB and choosing AAA  
is a rather wise decision.But nothing has been mentioned to deny the  
opinion of choosing BBB.And I must own up to that people can do well  
without AAA,but no one can ignore the additional convenience and  
satisfaction offered by AAA.Such experience, which weighs so heavily on my  
mind that other controversy against choosing AAA is as dust in the  
balance,will definitely contribute to one's later life and also leads to my  
original inclination for AAA.
6#
发表于 2003-8-13 18:24:00 | 只看该作者
有好东东,谁会嫌烦
7#
发表于 2003-8-15 10:41:00 | 只看该作者
谢谢leeciao!
8#
发表于 2003-8-23 23:05:00 | 只看该作者
thanks
9#
发表于 2003-8-24 02:54:00 | 只看该作者
花这么多工夫奉献给大家,好辛苦啊,多谢乐!一定好好看看
10#
发表于 2003-8-29 11:28:00 | 只看该作者
我提个醒: 根据我本人的亲身经历, 用过的模板很可能被ETS记录下来, 下次有人再用就会被追踪到. 比如我很久之前考过一次托福, 准备了模板, 作文5分; 事隔一年, 再考, 同样的模板, 4分. 而且, 这绝对是个好模板.
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