Conan的作文贴，热烈欢迎大家拍砖！谢谢大家！

conanwang

15 December
Independent Writing: Agree or disagree? Children should do similar jobs with parents?




The employment market is highly competitive nowadays. Many people argue that children should seek a job which similar to their parents’ on the purpose to obtain job offers. From my perspective, forcing a child to pursue a specific job at their very early age is unnecessary.

Firstly, setting a career goal for children would impose an extra burden on them. If the child do not like their parent’s job, he or she would have to face undue pressure for years. In reality, expecting children to follow parents’ jobs may dampen students’ enthusiasm for study. Furthermore, the children may lose their ability to make decisions. Children treated as passive receptacles would less likely to think independently, creatively and critically when leave their parents. Lastly, setting a career goal for children today may not necessarily guarantee that children would engage in a promising career in next 20 years. Nothing stands still. Although many banker considered the job as the most promising job before 2008, thousands of employees are being fired nowadays.

Nonetheless, providing children with some career guidance would be in interest of the children growing up. To begin with, this measure can help children develop confidence. Taking their parents as a positive role model, children may feel they are under the right path. Moreover, with careful guidance, children can take advantage of being a quick-learners in a certain area. If a child’s mother teach English literature in university, they are more likely to achieve accomplishments in English. Furthermore, certain job opportunities would be open up for those people whose parents have related field experiences. This is rooted in the fact that the parents could impart professional knowledge to their children in daily life. The rich experience their parents accumulated in this field could help a fresh graduate to have deep understanding of highly specialized knowledge.

In conclusion, although setting career goal for children is a preparation for them, kids should be granted opportunities to chase their dream and follow their heart. I personally believe that the great leader find their pathway through their own vision.



第一次发作文贴，队长大人请帮忙分组~欢迎大家用砖头拍死我~

conanwang

16 December
Independent Writing: Agree or disagree? The car(automobile) has had greater effect on society than the airplane.

With the advances intechnology, the automobile and fixed-wing airplane gradually became the majormeans of transportation. While many people argue that the civil aircraft has affectedprofoundly our daily life, I believe that the widespread use of car, animportant symbol of modernization in civilized societies, has more far-reachinginfluence on society.

On the one hand, the aircrafthas brought benefits to citizens. Firstly, travel time has been shortenedbecause of the availability of the jet plane. Passengers, for instance, wouldbe able to fly across the Pacific Ocean, without enduring the seasick formonths. Secondly, the introduction of airplane opens up opportunities formultinational businesses. For example, businesspeople are able to visitfactories based in different counties, coordinating production processproperly. Admittedly, not all people prefer travelling by plane, as civilaviation normally require lots of money. Travelling by plane will costpassengers a fortunes to purchase airplane tickets, not to mention the highairport tax and fuel surcharge.

Compared withairplane, however, automobile has greater advantages. To begin with, car isaffordable for most people. The mass-production of the automobile offerindividuals cars at a low price. Meanwhile, the utilization of the automobileis diversified. Cars can be effortlessly designed for multiple uses and thiscan be proved by such vehicles as sedan, bus, truck and construction car. Inaddition, the benefits of aircraft may be discounted during the unfavorableweather condition. Instead, many cars such as SUV can be driving under terriblecondition, which provide passengers with comfortable travel conditions, with noregard to the weather forecast.

In conclusion,although the development of aeroplane was a landmark in human history, theinvention of the autocar has significantly reformed society since the availabilityof the steam engine automobile. Technically, most people prefer cars for itseconomical, multifunctional and comfortable.

Yeeisstrong

15 December

Independent Writing: Agree or disagree? Children should do similar jobs with parents?

The employment market is highly competitive nowadays. Many people argue that children should seek a job which similar to their parents’ on the purpose to obtain job offers. From my perspective, forcing a child to pursue a specific job at their very early age is unnecessary.

Firstly, setting a career goal for children would impose an extra burden on them. If the child does not like their parent’s job, he or she would have to face undue pressure for years. In reality, expecting children to follow parents’ jobs may dampen students’ enthusiasm for study. Furthermore, the children may lose their ability to make decisions. Children (who) treated as passive receptacles would less likely to think independently, creatively and critically when left their parents. Lastly, setting a career goal for children today may not necessarily guarantee that children would engage in a promising career in next 20 years. Nothing stands still. Although many bankers considered the job as the most promising job (many bankers believed their work was the most promising) before 2008, thousands of employees are being fired nowadays. (红色的论点很好呢，我怎么没有想到呢~)

N model, children may feel they are under the right path. Moreover, with careful guidance, children can take advantage of being a quick-learners in a certain area. If a child’s mother teach English literature in university, they are more likely to achieve accomplishments in English. Furthermore, certain job opportunities would be open up for those people whose parents have related field experiences. This is rooted in the fact that the parents could impart professional knowledge to their children in daily life. The rich experience their parents accumulated in this field could help a fresh graduate to have deep understanding of highly specialized knowledge.（用词很不错~逻辑也好~）

In conclusion, although setting career goal for children is a preparation for them, kids should be granted onetheless, providing children with some career guidance would be in interest of the children growing up. To begin with, this measure can help children develop confidence. Taking their parents as a positive role opportunities to chase their dream and follow their heart. I personally believe that the great leader find their pathway through their own vision.



这篇文章的结构可能大部分人不会使用吧，一半支持一般反对。我个人倾向于一边倒啦，觉得这样好些点，多多练习应该不会差~ PS：本人作文一直很菜~

conanwang

17 December
Independent Writing: Agree or disagree? We should spend more time listening in the teamwork.





There are plenty of team works nowadays which we are required to cooperate with our partners in order to finish working. While some people argue that spending time in listening others is a waste of time, I believe that it is necessary for each member listen actively to others’ opinions in teamwork.

On the one hand, some people suggest that listening to teammates all the time may distract our attention. For example, it is difficult for us to concentrate on projects while we are listening to reports for hours. In addition, the passive listening may result in misconceptions. Without active listening, we would more likely to follow teammates’ instructions blindly, thereby leading to negative outcomes. Moreover, if most of team members are listening, it will practically impossible to make a wise decision within a short time. Making decisions slowly usually results in failure in a highly competitive market.
    
However, the active listening, which is at the heart of communication, would be conductive to our teamwork profoundly. The effective communication require each member to grasp others’ ideas and that is why the active listening is a prerequisite of any successful conference. Furthermore, listening patiently is an important way to show respect. People who interrupt others’ conversations frequently with no regard to others’ feeling can be regarded as selfish persons in many counties. Lastly, the effective listening could help us to collect information from others simply in the meeting room where we can identify problems and address issues, which greatly improve our work efficiency.

From what has been discussed, while listening is only part of the teamwork, it is an extremely important method of communication. As a starting point of successful work, the active listening should be learned by each group members.

Yeeisstrong

16 December
Independent Writing: Agree or disagree? The car(automobile) has had greater effect on society than the airplane.

With the advances in technology, the automobile and fixed-wing airplane gradually became the major means of transportation. While many people argue that the civil aircraft has affected profoundly our daily life, I believe that the widespread use of car, an important symbol of modernization in civilized societies, has more far-reaching influence on society.

On the one hand, the aircraft has brought benefits to citizens. Firstly, travel time has been shortened because of the availability of the jet plane. Passengers, for instance, would be able to fly across the Pacific Ocean, without enduring the seasick for months. Secondly, the introduction of airplane opens up opportunities for multinational businesses. For example, business people are able to visit factories based in different counties, coordinating production process properly. Admittedly, not all people prefer travelling by plane, as civil aviation normally requires lots of money. Travelling by plane will cost passengers a fortune to purchase airplane tickets, not to mention the high airport tax and fuel surcharge.（建议不要这么写，一开始写对立方的优点，把对立方的优点可以放到第四段~）

Compared with airplane, however, automobile has greater advantages. To begin with, the car is affordable for most people. The mass-production of the automobile offer individuals cars at a low price.(没怎么明白这句的意思)Meanwhile, the utilization of the automobile is diversified. Cars can be effortlessly designed for multiple uses and this(these) can be proved by such vehicles as sedan, bus, truck and construction car. In addition, the benefits of aircraft may be discounted during the unfavorable weather condition (slack season).(和第一点相似？)Instead, many cars such as SUV can be driving under terrible condition, which provide passengers with comfortable travel conditions, with no regard to the weather forecast.（论点挺好，但是逻辑有点混乱，建议并购整合一下~）

In conclusion, although the development of airplane was a landmark in human history, the invention of the auto car has significantly reformed society since the availability of the steam engine automobile. Technically, most people prefer cars for its economical, multifunctional and comfortable.(感觉没完事~)





表达不错，用词新颖，我学到了新的词语，建议还是看看老美185和满分作文，把结构好好把握一下~ 结构理顺的话相信是一片高分作文~
PS: 今天图书馆网坏了，所以只能晚上回寝室改了，晚了 SRY~

conanwang

19 December
Independent Writing: Agree or disagree? Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.





With the tempo of life accelerating, we have entered an era when happiness is a very difficult thing. While some people argue that working for jobs is the foundation of happiness, I think that participating in social activity, which is at the heart of people’s life, is a more important source of happiness.

Firstly, happiness can be described as a sense of pleasure and enjoyment which is a direct result of social activities. Having someone accompany with, we feel better. For instance, we will be feeling romantic happiness when we are simply having a chat with our lovers just in a leisure place such as lake. Secondly, happiness can be a time when we are spending time with other people and that is why we will probably feel the stimulating, dynamic energy of life when we are hanging out with our friends in a night club, drinking and dancing. Another example is that the netizens are more likely to post articles in the social networking which includes Facebook, Google + and twitter, sharing news with friends rather than sole, as most of people prefer social activities.

The second reason is that too much works can result in mental burdens and health problems. From psychological perspective, many workaholics claim that they are always under time pressure, with feeling chronic stress and anxiety, not to mention the sleeplessness resulting from fatigue. Furthermore, some jobs are usually challenging with a high workload and there are work politics ranging from workplace frictions to moral hazard, which can exert pressure on employees.


However, we will feel a sense of satisfaction that is a contributing factor of happiness, if our achievements has been recognized by others. In reality, we are delighted and confident when we are being promoted. As become more successful in working, we will also feel a sense of happiness when we become financially free. With more money, we can therefore satisfy ourselves and help orphans and the people with disability who are in needy.

In conclusion, although some works may be rewarding, social life has more influence on people. Neither should we neglect the importance of social life, nor should we ignore the great impacts social activities produce.

conanwang

18 December
Independent Writing:在家工作好, 还是去公司工作好？(Some people prefer to work at home while others would rather work in a company, which one would you like?)



With the advanced technology that makes remote working possible, many people can perform tasks at home, communicating with others simply via email, online networks and video conferencing. While some people argue that they prefer working at an office complex, I believe that working at home would be a better choose, for it can benefit employees, employers and society.

For employees, working at home would save their considerable time. Without time-consuming travelling between office and home, white-collar workers will be able establish a balance between work and life. For example, single mothers, who is also an office lady, would be capable of taking care of their babies while working days. For business owners, the high operating costs can be reduced by a laissez-fair management. Thereby, employers can invest money in extending businesses, without having to pay skyrocketing rents in the Central Business Districts. Most importantly, with less commuters travelling and fewer demand of electricity in the metropolis, many social problems can be curbed. Undeniably, urban traffic congestion can be alleviated and carbon emission can be reduced, which is essential for economic and social sustainability.

However, performing tasks in office block may have three merits. From psychological perspective, cooperating with colleagues can dispel loneliness and boredom. Having teammates accompany with, we will feel passionate and confident, with a high morale in a teamwork. Another benefit is that working together is a contributing factor in establishing organizational culture. If everyone are staying at home without a chance of face-to-face contact, each employee would be indifferent to colleagues and works. Lastly, working in office can enhance productivity. Compared with reliance on workers’ self-discipline, managers can supervise work process directly, receive feedback immediately and execute tasks efficiently.

From what has been discussed, although people may profit from working in offices, most of the people including employees, employers and citizens have benefited more from the policy of working at home.

cooperdw

There are plenty of team works nowadays which we are required to cooperate with our partners in order to finish working.(语法，which在从句中的成分) While some people argue that spending time in listening(好) others is a waste of time, I believe that it is necessary for each member （加to）listen actively to others’ opinions in teamwork.


On the one hand, some people suggest that listening to teammates all the time may distract our attention. For example, it is difficult for us to concentrate on projects while we are listening to reports for hours. In addition, the passive listening may result in misconceptions. Without active listening, we would more likely to follow teammates’ instructions blindly, thereby leading（àled） to negative outcomes. Moreover, if most of team members are listening, it will practically impossible to make a wise decision within a short time. Making decisions slowly usually results in(重复尽量避免) failure in a highly competitive market.

However, the active listening, which is at the heart of communication, would be conductive to our teamwork profoundly. The effective communication requires each member to grasp others’ ideas and that is why the active listening is a prerequisite of any successful conference. Furthermore, listening patiently is an important way to show respect. People who interrupt others’ conversations frequently with no regard to others’ feeling can be regarded as selfish persons in many countiesàcountries. Lastly, the effective listening could help us to collect information from others simply in the meeting room (where指meeting room吗，什么意思？在办公室就能搞定问题吗？有点怪诶) we can identify problems and address issues, which greatly improve our work efficiency.


From what has been discussed, while listening is only part of the teamwork, it is an extremely important method of communication. As a starting point of successful work, the active listening should be learned by each group members.

不好意思 这么晚才发上来，刚加班回来
你的作文真的有太多东西值得学习了，膜拜！

conanwang

20 December
Independent Writing: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today are more likely to help others than young people in the past.
Integrated Writing: TPO15



More and more citizens recognize that being helpful is always one of the greatest virtues. While some people argue that youngsters in the past are happy to help others, I believe that the new generation are more willing to offer help than the one before it, for the promotion of first-aid knowledge, advance of technology, evolution of social media and the expansion in volunteer programmes.

Firstly, with the first-aid knowledge having been introduced into class, youths are now more capable of helping others. Nowadays, a youth are able to save a drowning person. However, youngsters might lack the ability to do rescue breathing a decade ago because rarely school set the first-aid course as mandatory.

In addition, since technology is developing, youngsters are more able to help others. Equipped with a smart phone, present-day youths are more able to locate themselves via the GPS system and then call for a rescue crew when youngsters found a wounded person in a remote forest. Instead, a mobile phone was unaffordable for adolescents in the past.

Furthermore, the social media enable youth to pay attention to needy people. For example, if a disadvantaged group ask for help by posting on Tweeter, the information may be forwarded and circulated. Thereby, youngsters, one of the main user of Tweeter, are more willing to help the group. Without social media, it is difficult for a youth to discover the social issue and offer help simply through one-way media.

Lastly, with charity being increasing fashionable in schools, young people are more likely to participate in volunteering organizations in order to help needy people. For example, there is a growing number of college students who tend to become volunteer teachers in the rural areas.

In conclusion, although the predecessors have offered a lot of help to others, today’s young people are more willing to help others.

conanwang

21 December
Independent Writing:  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To increase economic growth, government can neglect environmental concerns.





People have devastating effects on the ecosystem when increase productivity and boost the economy. While some people argue that environment problems is the price authorities have to pay for economic development, I believe that government should seek a balance between environmental conservation and economic development, for society will plunge into the disaster with ecosystem degrading and the loss of biodiversity.

Firstly, ecological degradation caused by human activities will pose a threat to our planet, if without proper regulation. We can expect more extreme weather conditions, when more carbon emissions, the culprit of the global warming, was produced considerably by thousands of power plants. The global warming will have a significant impact on our planet, with the polar ice caps melting and sea level rising due to the increasing temperature. In addition, the greenhouse effect will also cause a series chain of reactions ranging from flooding and droughts, with the government no regard to the environmental conservation.

Furthermore, it will lead to the extinction of many species of animals and plants, if government do not realize the importance of environment. Nowadays, the forest ecosystem are being destroyed at an alarming rate, with considerable loss of biodiversity. In fact, people have cut trees down in large numbers without a plan, which will wreak havoc on the wild animals. Without habitats to live in, the wildlife in a region will only able to live in cages. Moreover, the more land is tuned over to farmland, the more plants will be wiped out. The reduction in the number of species will be accelerating, if government still permit over-grazing activities in order to develop the economy

In reality, authorities are now able to maintain the ecological equilibrium, with the advance of science and technology. If the government encourage people to use renewable energy source, the consumption of coal, oil and gas can be reduced. Besides, government should condemn rather than condone environmentally inefficient manufactures. Harsh actions with the supervision system should be applied by the government, in order that the human activities will not bring about permanent devastation.

In conclusion, I strongly disagree that government do not pay attention to environmental issues simply because of developing the economy. Neither should the authorities neglect importance of ecological balance, nor should we ignore the responsibility of the government.