12日就要考了，突然发现一个语法点很迷惑，很紧张，就在这发帖了，请牛牛们解答

crystal2859

In his work, Leon Forrest’s work is more reminiscent of Henry Miller’s obsessive narratives and Toni Morrison’s mythic languages than James Joyce’s internal explorations。

In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting East African cave paintings.  











(A) Leakey contributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting  





(B) Leakey contributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and by painstakingly documenting  





(C) Leakey was a contributor to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of  





(D) Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of  





(E) Leakey's contributions to archaeology include discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation of

介词短语中都有his 或者her， 主句不用以人命开头和物主代词相对应吗，牛牛帮忙解答下吧，很疑惑

jenny1989

这道题我仔细看过 结论是IN ADDITION TO没有逻辑主语和实际主语对应问题
详细见这个帖子
http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-422087-1-1.html

-- by 会员 TheAssembly (2009/12/9 13:33:24)

对的 只要含义上合理 都可以的

TheAssembly

这道题我仔细看过 结论是IN ADDITION TO没有逻辑主语和实际主语对应问题
详细见这个帖子
http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-422087-1-1.html

bulimu

如题

-- by 会员 bulimu (2009/12/9 10:40:11)

我上面的解释对不对哟

-- by 会员 zscsl (2009/12/9 10:54:39)

和你想的一样哟

shanefeng

这道题目在prep破解里面选A昨天做的但我记得在别的地方是选D

-- by 会员 yuling526 (2009/12/9 11:16:31)

这个题我记得见过2个版本得答案，一个是prep上，一个是忘了哪里好像是og，
好像是in addition 的平行不重要，最重的是后面的 and

xlg24127

请问C错在哪里了？

crystal2859

额···我一直觉得是那样，错了好长时间了，谢谢楼上呀

crystal2859

额···我一直觉得是那样，错了好长时间了，谢谢楼上呀

xfyyds

答案是d   Leakey's contributions  和leakey contributed 其实都可以   并不是一定要和her work 对应的，    主要考的是后面的平行对称，   这题prep上有好多变体，  Leakey's contributions 和 leakey contributed、 都有，  我开始也觉得肯定是Leakey's contributions  比较好  但是prep上这样，     可能他的考点是在于后面的平行对称，  discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of ，   and  前后都是  用of连接的2个名词 所以最对称 其他选项 就是1个动词 一个名词

zhouray

第二题，是选D，用排除平行可以做

我纠结的是那个开头In his work, Leon Forrest’s work          In addition to her work ，Leakey's contributions

物主代词后面不应该是有人名对应吗 我觉得因该是                  In his work, Leon Forrest            In addition to her work ，Leakey

需要有具体的人名和his和her对应丫，不知道有没有表达清楚

-- by 会员 crystal2859 (2009/12/9 11:18:19)

按照你的这样的理解那么怎么去做到平行结构呢？

再说了，没有语法规则说前面是her，his，后面就一定是人名 Lucy， Jack的~