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rorarora

以下是引用swlfx在2005-8-15 10:26:00的发言：
看一段：Modern manufacturers, who need reliable sources of materials and technologically advanced components to operate profitably, face an increasingly difficult choice between owning the producers of these items (a practice known as backward integration) and buying from independent producers. Manufacturers who integrate may reap short-term rewards, but they often restrict their future capacity for innovative product development.
最后一句话其实就是个引子，同时，下面各段主要都是讨论都是integrate的优、缺点。由此，我们可以判断该文的TOPIC是陈述integration。

看来还是划红线的这句是T.S., 最后一段however,带出的是让步,对上文的中心内容起qualify的作用。起码OG是这么理解的......= =;

假设是讨论backward integration和independent supplier红线处就应该分别描述......只能这么理解了......真是迷惑人呀。。。。

icerach

此题还要理解qualify的意思：“限制，修正”，不要和“qualified”混淆起来。

tania

以下是引用swlfx在2005-8-15 10:26:00的发言：
看一段：Modern manufacturers, who need reliable sources of materials and technologically advanced components to operate profitably, face an increasingly difficult choice between owning the producers of these items (a practice known as backward integration) and buying from independent producers. Manufacturers who integrate may reap short-term rewards, but they often restrict their future capacity for innovative product development.
最后一句话其实就是个引子，同时，下面各段主要都是讨论都是integrate的优、缺点。由此，我们可以判断该文的TOPIC是陈述integration。

一语惊醒梦中人！欧明白了，如果主题是讨论intergrate 和buying的话，那么第一段中应该对这两者分别进行描述，而不是象文中首段一样只对integrate进行了描述，是吗？

swlfx

看一段：Modern manufacturers, who need reliable sources of materials and technologically advanced components to operate profitably, face an increasingly difficult choice between owning the producers of these items (a practice known as backward integration) and buying from independent producers. Manufacturers who integrate may reap short-term rewards, but they often restrict their future capacity for innovative product development.
最后一句话其实就是个引子，同时，下面各段主要都是讨论都是integrate的优、缺点。由此，我们可以判断该文的TOPIC是陈述integration。

蓝夕叶子

整篇文章的结构是怎样的呢？

A viewpoint is presented which qualifies one presented earlier in the passage.（这个选项概括的非常棒）

怎样体会主题句不是第一段中的Modern manufacturers面临两难选择，而是陈述integration 的优势呢？

这个，要有阅读的基本感觉吧。转折的语气，词组；作者态度，纵观全文，不都是可以帮助理解的么

tania

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tania

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tania

谢谢fair和ann!

我体会到一些，但还是有一些困惑：整篇文章的结构是怎样的呢？怎样体会主题句不是第一段中的Modern manufacturers面临两难选择，而是陈述integration 的优势呢？是根据有两段陈述integration，仅有最后一段陈述buying，还是其他?

annwangwangqxwz

第三段的第一句话可知是个让步。即与前面的中心不一样。体会一下 楼主！