求助一道语法 要考试了 急

fdx3000

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The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A. some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B. some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters
C. some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D. with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter
E. with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter
答案是A  我选的是E  有没有NN 指点一下~~~

jackraywen

E比A啰嗦

fdx3000

题目是不是有点奇怪啊，我感觉看到了好多动词，却没有连词。感觉又不像并列

面条条

while 起连词作用 连词应当加句子！E.while others as religious havens， while+名词 所以E错 个人浅见

fdx3000

谢谢 LS 两位啦，问下LS  while .....heavens,each  had a written charter.可以看成一句啊？HEAVEN 后面是个逗号啊。

waccss

A：独立主格结构some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens（some...others...句型）是作插入语对The thirteen original British colonies 进一步解释说明，整句主语是each(colony).整个句型简洁流畅，正确。
E :with some....的some指代的就是some original British colonies,with...的逻辑主语是The thirteen original British colonies，与句子主语矛盾。故错误

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fdx3000

A：独立主格结构some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens（some...others...句型）是作插入语对The thirteen original British colonies 进一步解释说明，整句主语是each(colony).整个句型简洁流畅，正确。
E :with some....的some指代的就是some original British colonies,with...的逻辑主语是The thirteen original British colonies，与句子主语矛盾。故错误

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谢谢W 同学啊！！！解释非常详细！！！

hsinq

原文的主语是The thirteen original British colonies in North America，each是其同位语，中间的两个也是同位语（假设为A、B）

E选项中with没有错，只是有点多余；而原文A、B是并列关系，没有比较，用while改变愿意，再加上while后面句子不完整，省略也不对。

fdx3000

在理~~~恩恩 受用了