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晚生有礼

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It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in the books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?

 

It is common sense that books do not contain everything that is learned. Knowledge gained from experience and from books is at the same status. Both these sources have their own advantages and disadvantages.

 

Experience plays an important role in everyone's life undoubtedly. The most important, the knowledge gained from experience is so impressive that large amounts of them can not be forgot all our life, they will come to our mind whenever needed. In fact, the vivid scene and sound make them easier to last longer in our memory than the knowledge gained from books. In addition, not all things are covered by books, we often learn precious knowledge which can not be found in books through experience and it certainly helps us a lot. Furthermore, most of the knowledge in books is gained from experience first, in another way, experience is the original source.

 

However, not all knowledge we learn from books is right. We sometimes draw wrong conclusions from experiences. Without leading, we can be misled by complicated phenomena.

 

Books, however, are well organized and systematical. They are demonstrated in more accurate ways. Knowledge in books is also more convenient to get, we can easily find the very part we want, but we can only learn from the things we already experienced. Nevertheless, knowledge gained from books still has its disadvantage as being uneasy to remember.

 

Based on the points stated, my conclusion is that books and experience are both important sources. Their importance is based on our necessity, when we want to learn precise knowledge systematically or can be easily found, books are our first choice, in other cases, experience play a more significant role.

 

 

 

kevin3

不能老期待别人帮我改，看来自己也得做点贡献，小试身手，如有不妥还请见谅。

It is a common sense that books do not includeeverything learned. Knowledge gained from experience and (from) books is in the same situation. Both these sources have their own advantages and disadvantages.

 

Undoubtedly Experience plays an important role in everyone's life. What’ the most important is that knowledge gained from experience is so impressive that most of
        it can not be forgotten all our life, they will come to our mind whenever needed. In fact, the vivid scene and sound keep it longer in our memory than the knowledge gained from books. In addition, not all things are covered by books, we often learn precious knowledge which can not be found in books through experience and it certainly helps us a lot. Furthermore, most of the knowledge in books is gained from experience first, in another way, experience is the original source.

 

however,not all knowledge we learn from books(do u mean experience?) is right. We sometimes draw wrong conclusions from experiences. Without proper leading, we may be misled by complicated phenomena.

 

Books, however, are well-organized and systematical. They are demonstrated in a more accurate way. Knowledge in books is also more convenient to get, we can easily find the very part we want, but we can only learn from the things we already experienced. Nevertheless, knowledge gained from books still has its disadvantage which is not easy to remember.

 

Based on the points stated, my conclusion is that books and experience are both important sources of knowledge. Their importance is based on our necessity, when we want to learn precise knowledge systematically or knowledge which can be easily found, books are our first choice, in other cases, experience is a more significant source.

guolinwen

Based on LS.

It is a common sense that books do not includeeverything learned. Knowledge gained from experience and (from) books is in the same situation.(if you want to say in favor of both ways, please make a straightforward clarification to the readers) Both these sources have their own advantages and disadvantages.

 

Undoubtedly Experience plays an important role in everyone's life. What’ the most important is that knowledge gained from experience is so impressive that most of
            it can not be forgotten all our life, they will come to our mind whenever needed(lasts lifelong).
            In fact, the vivid scene and sound keep it longer in our memory than the knowledge gained from books(because the vivid combination of sound and picture renders a deeper imprinting). In addition, not all things are covered by books, we often learn precious knowledge which can not be found in books through experience and it certainly helps us a lot (you'd better directly go to an example, like MARRIAGE). Furthermore, most of the knowledge in books is gained from experience first, in another way, experience is the original source.

 

however,not all knowledge we learn from books(do u mean experience?) is right. We sometimes draw wrong conclusions from experiences. Without proper leading (interpretation), we may be misled by complicated phenomena. (this parag. is more like a distration. anyway, if you want to include, it is fine though. But you 'd better add an example to make a full development)

 

(add a long transitional sentence to make the shift move smoothly)Books, however, are well-organized and systematical. They are demonstrated in a more accurate way. Knowledge in books is also more convenient to get, we can easily find the very part we want, but we can only learn from the things we already experienced(shifting the subject from knowledge to we is not a good strategy).
            Nevertheless, knowledge gained from books still has its disadvantage which is not easy to remember.(delete it)
            

  Based on the points stated, my(a firm) conclusion is that books and experience(s) are both important sources of knowledge. Their importance is based on our necessity, when we want to learn precise knowledge systematically or knowledge which can be easily found, books are our first choice, in other cases, experience is a more significant source. (not staying closely with the previous paragraphs) 

晚生有礼

Thank you so much! I have correct the composition, I really learn a lot from you. 

It is a common sense that books do not include
        everything learned. Knowledge gained from experience and from books is in the same situation, which is more appropriate largely depends on our need. Both these sources have their own advantages and disadvantages.

 Undoubtedly experience plays an important role in everyone's life. The most important is that
            knowledge gained from experience is so impressive that most of it can lasts lifelong; they will come to our mind whenever needed. In fact, the vivid combination of sound and picture renders a deeper imprinting than the knowledge gained from books. In addition, not all things are covered by books, we often learn precious knowledge which can not be found in books through experience and it certainly helps us a lot. For instance, things like the feelings of marriage cannot be enjoyed from the lifeless description of books. Furthermore, most of the knowledge in books is gained from experience first, in another way, experience is the original source.

However, not all knowledge we learn from experience is right. We sometimes draw wrong conclusions from experiences. Without proper interpretation, we may be misled by complicated phenomena. Anyway, not anyone can come to the conclusion that gravity pulls things down after being hit by an apple. 

Books, however, are well-organized and systematical. They are demonstrated in a more accurate way. Knowledge in books is also more convenient to be absorbed. We can easily find the very part we want in the books, while we can only learn from the things we already experienced. Nevertheless, knowledge gained from books still has its disadvantage that it is uneasy to remember.

 

 Based on the points stated, my conclusion is that books and experiences are both important sources of knowledge. Their importance is based on our necessities, when we want to learn precise knowledge systematically or knowledge which can be easily found, books are our first choice, in other cases, experience is
        a more significant source.