以下是引用ecsniffer在2003-11-27 0:46:00的发言: 谢谢.偶的作文太差了,你的作文思路很好,但是我还是不能很好的理解.能不能举个题目具体说说呀!
就用我考试的例子吧 题目是 It is difficult to achieve professional success w/o sacrificing fufilling personal life.
Whether it is ... life is a broadly debated topic which attracts many attentions. While in some circumstances it is true that people have to sacrifice their fulfilling personal lives to reach their professional goal, in other instances, it may not be valid. Therefore, as far as I am concerned, I do not agree that it is... life.
First of all, professional success is not the definitely result of sacrificing fufilling personal life. There is no direct relation between them. For example,..... (举个例子说明即使牺牲了个人生活 还是无法成功的例子) In this circumstance, we could not assert that it is ... life.
Secondly, sacrificing is not necessary for professional success. How ever, many people reach their career peak with happly life. (再举个例子说明成功又有幸福生活的例子) From this aspect, it is not reasonable to claim that it is... life.
Finally, professional success and sacrificing fufilling personal life could affect each other but without absolute causal relation. The Pros for the argument may present some evidences showing that people could not get professional success because they could not sacrifice their personal lives, how ever, I should say, these cases are rare and therefore, are not sufficient to support for the conclusion. When advantages and disadvantages are carefully examined, the most striking conclusion should be that it is not reasonable to allege that it is ... life
In conclusion, sacrificing fufilling personal life affects professional success in little extent. How ever, considering the evidences I present above, we may safely draw a conclusion that the argument advocating that it is ... life is vulnerable.
这些例子考试的时候如果实在想不到 就瞎编 随便用个名字和事例 反正他们又不知道到底有没有这个人 :) 一般都可以超过400个字。 |