关于which跳跃修饰的新疑惑……求NN解答

bitieming · 发表于 2011-8-12 01:02:08

首先感谢一下sjmdlyc前辈对which修饰做出的详尽整理，关于which跳跃修饰的内容如下：

在前有“核心词+介词、分词等修饰结构”或者插入语的情况下，which跳跃修饰前面的核心词，不能修饰紧邻的名词。
下面是几个例子
1.OG12-26

Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.

A,Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumberin

B,Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ended shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber

C,Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and that ends shortly before Emily’s death in 1886and outnumbering

D,Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother, ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, and outnumbering

E,Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber
这句话的which不能修饰其紧邻的名词Susan Huntington Dickinson，必须跳过介词结构to…，修饰核心词letter。

2.Unlike most other mergers in the utility industry, which have been driven by the need to save money and extend companies’ service areas, the merger of the nation’s leading gas company and leading electric company is intended to create a huge network for marketing the utilities in question as states open their utility markets to competition.
这句话的which不能修饰其紧邻的名词utility industry，必须跳过介词结构in…，修饰核心词merger。

但是今天我重新复习到GWD-1-Q2时遇到了疑惑

By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.

A. their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
B. from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C. to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D. in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges (E)
E. to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges

本题目中B为错误选项，PREP解释为：
which可以跳跃指代，但是此处which离其指代对象隔了一个状语in the country，而且country与 ranges是gramatically matched的，故B不佳。
于是很想吐槽一下，根据上面所给出的例2
Unlike most other mergers in the utility industry, which have been
which同所指代对象merger也隔了一个状语in the utility industry，但是却跳跃指代成功了。
唯一的区别就是industry和have不是gramatically matched.

那么PREP中对B的解释里，关于状语in the country的错误是否其实是不成立的？而如果存在由于gramatically matched导致的语法歧义的话，能不能从逻辑含义上进行排除呢？因为在做代词指代的相关题目时，经常根据逻辑含义判断代词所指代的内容，那再这里which的指代内容能否通过逻辑合理性来排除语法合理性呢？

即GWD-1-Q2的B选项中，因为which可以通过逻辑含义判断出是指代book market，能否排除因为语法match形成的歧义呢？
求赐教…关于which的跳跃指代已经发了两贴……上一次还以为完全弄明白了，现在看来觉得自己真是个演员啊……

bitieming · 发表于 2011-8-12 09:18:44

自挽……

bitieming · 发表于 2011-8-12 11:24:10

自挽T T……真心求教

bitieming · 发表于 2011-8-12 23:03:33

再顶……

清飞扬 · 发表于 2011-8-12 23:38:53

By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.

A. their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
B. from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C. to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D. in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
E. to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges

主语是the company，所以应该是单数；因此；A, C, 排掉

D不对，因为increase这里做动词，所以不应该有in

最后比较BE

解答LZ的问题；我在mahnnan的SC树上看到的说法是noun都是close touch的，也就是就近指代。没有说法是跳跃指代的，除了很个别的情况，具体看下书吧

bitieming · 发表于 2011-8-13 09:15:44

谢谢~的确跳跃指代的情况不常见，但有时候也会出现，比如上面我说的两个例子……对于可以出现跳跃修饰的情况，我是从CD大家的讨论里摘出来的，因此做题的时候也不能看到跳跃修饰就认为错吧？

bitieming · 发表于 2011-8-13 15:30:48

再次自挽……

bitieming · 发表于 2011-8-14 10:21:48

Heather_Lau · 发表于 2011-8-14 11:07:38

manhattan里面说了noun modifiers都是close to touch的.
貌似我怎么觉得B的in the country是wordy的呢?

bitieming · 发表于 2011-8-14 11:11:15

manhattan里面说了noun modifiers都是close to touch的.
貌似我怎么觉得B的in the country是wordy的呢?

-- by 会员 Heather_Lau (2011/8/14 11:07:38)

的确看到这句了，但是不是说有极少情况例外么，这种前面有修饰核心词的介词结构就是例外之一那……
in the country跟country's比起来好像是wordy了一点……

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