9.4 TOP9 独立 Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. A/D
It is often argued that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past, since technology has made things simple that children do not need to think too much as those did in the past. However, after careful thought, I have come to disagree with it. I believe it is always beneficial for children to live a more convenient life. Actually, technology even made children more creative in some level.
The development of technology has direct effect on children to come out thoughts that they never had in the past. Children are always the most curious group of people. Curiosity stimulates them to figure out the theory of these technologies. By doing this kind of stuff, they learn and think, thus become more creative
At the same time, technology brings us into information era, it is easier for children to get information they need. Children nowadays no longer enjoy stuff they used to do in the past. They spend plenty of time on watching TV and surfing the internet. TV show, advertisement or webpage include lots of information, children absorb it and get learned without notice. When information they absorbed piles up to a level, it is natural for them to use it and create something or come out a thought. For instance, a 6-year-old boy live near my home is fond of reading news in the internet. Once he find a design in a webpage is inconvenient and can be improved. Then he use an idea that came out when he was watching TV improved that design successfully by himself. What ‘s more amazing is that he connect that website and tell the net engineer his idea and is adopted! See, technology won’t be obstacle for creativity of children.
In fact, if you look back, the last one hundred years has been the most creative period during the whole human history, it is also the period that technology has developed faster than ever. History never lied, it tells us that technology has not only not made children less creative but also made them better.
Based on the reasons I listed above, I disagree the statement that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. A/D
It is often argued that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past, since technology has made things simple that children do not need to thinktoo as much as those did in the past. However, after careful thought, however, I have come to disagree with it. I believe that it is always beneficial for children to live a more convenient life. Actually, technology even has made【你这一段都是完成时和现在时，这儿强调你观点了却用过去时不好】 children more creative in some level.
The development of technology has direct effect on children to come out【没查到你这里这个用法】 think of thoughts that they never had in the past. Children are always the most curious group of people and【要不俩句子太短了...】 Curiosity stimulates them to figure out the theory of these technologies. By doing this kind of stuff【嘛kind嘛stuff？太不清楚了】, they learn and think, and thus become more creative
At the same time, technology brings us into information era, and thus it is easier for children to get information they need. Children nowadays no longer enjoy stuff they used to do in the past. They spend plenty of time on watching TV and surfing the internet. TV show, advertisement or webpage include lots of information, and children absorb it and get learned without notice. When information they absorbed piles up to a level, it is natural for them to use it and create something or come out【真的有这个用法吗？我凌乱了。。。】 a thought. For instance, a 6-year-old boy live near my home is fond of reading news in the internet. Once hefind found a design in a webpage is inconvenient and can be improved,and【有联系的两句话干嘛要分开】 then he use used an idea that came out when he was watching TV improved that design successfully by himself【我感觉举例子用过去时比较好...】. What ‘s more amazing is that he connect connected that website andtell told the net engineer his idea and is adopted! See, technology won’t be obstacle for creativity of children.
In fact, if you look back, the last one hundred yearshas have been the most creative period during the whole human history, it is also the period that technology has developed faster than ever. History never lied andit tells us that technology has not only not made children less creative but also made them better.
Based on the reasons I listed above, I disagree the statement that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. A/D
It is often argued that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past, since technology has made things simple that children do not need to thinktoo as much as those did in the past. However, after careful thought, however, I have come to disagree with it. I believe that it is always beneficial for children to live a more convenient life. Actually, technology even has made【你这一段都是完成时和现在时，这儿强调你观点了却用过去时不好】 children more creative in some level.
The development of technology has direct effect on children to come out【没查到你这里这个用法】 think of thoughts that they never had in the past. Children are always the most curious group of people and【要不俩句子太短了...】 Curiosity stimulates them to figure out the theory of these technologies. By doing this kind of stuff【嘛kind嘛stuff？太不清楚了】, they learn and think, and thus become more creative
At the same time, technology brings us into information era, and thus it is easier for children to get information they need. Children nowadays no longer enjoy stuff they used to do in the past. They spend plenty of time on watching TV and surfing the internet. TV show, advertisement or webpage include lots of information, and children absorb it and get learned without notice. When information they absorbed piles up to a level, it is natural for them to use it and create something or come out【真的有这个用法吗？我凌乱了。。。】 a thought. For instance, a 6-year-old boy live near my home is fond of reading news in the internet. Once hefind found a design in a webpage is inconvenient and can be improved,and【有联系的两句话干嘛要分开】 then he use used an idea that came out when he was watching TV improved that design successfully by himself【我感觉举例子用过去时比较好...】. What ‘s more amazing is that he connect connected that website andtell told the net engineer his idea and is adopted! See, technology won’t be obstacle for creativity of children.
In fact, if you look back, the last one hundred yearshas have been the most creative period during the whole human history, it is also the period that technology has developed faster than ever. History never lied andit tells us that technology has not only not made children less creative but also made them better.
Based on the reasons I listed above, I disagree the statement that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
TO 绿光老师：感激不尽！ 举例子那儿本来都用的过去时，自己改的时候觉得不太对，又全改成一般时了……我时态超级烂！！！ 查了下好像是没有come out这种用法……chinglish了……用idea comes to mind的好了~ 过于口语化是我一直以来的问题，跟队后多看多练，会慢慢好起来的！ 开头结尾慢慢练哈，也是多看多写，现在还写不出来。
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