[原创]【逵逵写作文3.1】～3.0的修改稿

28. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoying doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In the daily life, people sometimes do things that they do not like. I support that people who try to fulfill these things will be more progressive in a long run. These are some reasons supporting my view.

First, limited by society status or poverty, people cannot choice to do the things which will satisfy them. As a case in the point, a large number of workers who are from villages swarm into the major metropolises to seek jobs nowadays. They do manual work and earn just little money. They like working hard all day? I do not think so. But if they do not get the tough job, they will have no money to buy their sustenance and maybe their children lose the chance to continue the important education. We all can take soldiers as an example. No one really likes to plunge his precious life into the war without the trespassers existed. I believe most people prefer to enjoy their time along the beach with family rather than work hard or fight till death.

Second, it is also noted that things people do not like will be harmful to them. For instance, doing homework is part of students’ task. But sometimes it is not interesting by contrast spending time playing. And the tests always make students anxious. However, studying gives them credits and the essential skills for their jobs in the future.

Admittedly, doing what people do not like is not excited. Nevertheless，I think, during dealing with troubles, people get more special experiences and will be more preferable to others things. They know more about the social principle and their abilities as well. It is important for people to be mature through this way.

Depending on personal points above, we may reach the conclusion that doing what we do not enjoy is a part of life and in a long term we will benefit from it.

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In the daily life, people sometimes do things that they do not like. I support that people who try to fulfill these things (感觉有点别扭，改为have the courage and persistence to do these) will be more progressive(这个词的主要意思是有远见，用在这里与你下面的论述不一致，建议改为：likely to success) in a long run. These are some reasons supporting my view.

First, limited by society status or poverty, (不地道，改为：due to their relatively low social status and inadequate income), people cannot choice (choose)to do the things which will satisfy them( 改为：whatever they want). As a case in the point, a large number of workers who are  (多余，删掉) from villages swarm (时态改为 have been swarming )into the major metropolises to seek jobs nowadays. They do manual (laborious)work and earn just little money. They like working hard all day? I do not think so（中式英语，删掉）. But if they do not get the tough job（give up that tough but important job）, they will have no money to buy their sustenance (sustain their livelihood)and maybe their children lose the chance to continue the important education(their children are very likely to lose the chance of  continuing their education). We all (also)can take soldiers as an example. No one really likes to plunge his precious life into the war without the trespassers existed( Usually no one want the peaceful live to be destroyed by war). I believe most people (soldiers)prefer to enjoy their time along the beach with family rather than work hard or fight till (to)death.

握手. 我从来都是边做阅读, 边想着作文的.  有时连听力长段子的script 也一起上. 哈哈.

我以前有个英文老师, 她读书的时候写作特好, 曾经得过校长奖学金.  她说她的秘诀就是学原版.  可惜我到了考G的时候才明白.  唉...........

楼上强的。。

顶顶。。