一点没思路，请大家点拨

yanxingwei628 · 发表于 2010-8-4 19:58:21

It is unwise to quit a stable office job in order to be self-employed and work at home. 给出的理由是，在家办公容易受neighbor影响，没效率，经常avoid working等等。然后又说在家办公isolated with the work place, 对career advancement不好。所以不应该quit stable office job and become self-employed.
请问这个作文应该怎么写，有哪些错啊

lauchen · 发表于 2010-8-4 20:23:06

你这个是ISSUE还是Argument？

yanxingwei628 · 发表于 2010-8-4 20:24:36

是argument

joe5436611 · 发表于 2010-8-4 20:47:33

就有人不同喜欢在家工作。

有些人习惯在深夜工作，而办公室里没有人。

lauchen · 发表于 2010-8-4 20:48:54

problem 1: no proof to support that working at home is more easily disturbed than working at office, since at office, people can be more often disturbed by cooworkers or other distractions.

problem2: assume people working without supervision avoid working, as a matter of fact, people choose work at home are more often self-motivated than those working at office as am employee

problem 3: , assue career advancement is the people's main goal of life, if those people working at home choose taking care of their family over career, working at home is better at achieve their objective.

in sum, no data, no proof and unfounded assumptions...

一点没思路，请大家点拨

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