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发表于 2010-4-14 04:34:09 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
April 13, 周二下午:
觉得语法最琐碎又重要,所以今天开始先语法,从OG开始。
做完了http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-153179-1-1.html 上面所有的题,大概错了五道,在心情放松、时间无限的条件下。
1)错误很多就在划线的两端不远,但是对于全划线的句子比较头疼,不太清楚怎样很快下手
2)which vs. that: 如果用来定义先行词,用that;如果补充解释先行词,用which
3)结构对称和完整非常重要,其中as A do, so too A is, like等比较麻烦
4)数字的比较错了一题,句末可以独立地冒出个结构如double the figure for 1997
5)搭配的错误很容易忽略(因为我们的大脑聪明到可以从错误的搭配中,理解出正确的原意)

打算每晚写一篇Issue,坚持下去把高频题写光,而且有助于培养语感和增加词汇。


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沙发
发表于 2010-4-14 06:34:36 | 只看该作者
只错了5题,lz语法已经很强了。。。
个人觉得做好语法总结,有时间再看下OG12
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2010-4-14 11:22:30 | 只看该作者
April 13, 周二晚:
下载了黄金80题范文,然后写了一篇Issue,关于Conserve energy和 individual country,字数320,时间竟然一小时 换词不是很灵活,敲出来也有很多错字。结构是:第一段重述作者观点并指出自己观点,第二段是大分论点,第三段则是小分论点,第四段结尾。

The speaker assets that it is not reasonable that we expect and depend on efforts of individual countries to preserve energy resources for future generations. Although individual nations sometimes make sacrifices to help protecting energy resources, my view is that international collaboration and leadership are necessary, because each country has its own selfish consideration and the problem is worldwide in scope.

The main reason is that individual nations usually tend to act according to their self-interest and needs of domestic economic growth. Industrialization and technological improvements lead to correspondingly increased economic development, which pulls up energy use in the whole economy.  In order to achieve continuous economic growth, industrialized countries are not willing to reduce energy consumption unless a worldwide leadership intervenes. Furthermore, developed countries have the political, economic and military advantages to grasp energy resources from those emerging countries, in order to support their own excessive consumption. For instance, a government launched a war in Mid Asia for crude oil, because of its over-consumption of oil-based productions, such as cars. That is why we need a leader and coordinators, who can promote the cooperation and maintain justice among countries, to help world-wide energy conservation.

The second reason why international leadership plays important role is that it is a global problem and thus we needs world-wide effort to solve it. Nowadays, economic globalization increases export and import of energy resources. Japan imports coals from China and Russia exports natural gas to Ukraine. We can no longer control the energy use from a single side. Just like nuclear weapons and drugs, energy resource needs international support and cooperation to control the over-consumption. Since the problem already transcends national borders, any effort from individual countries will probably become futile and useless.

In short, every country needs to take positive action and collaborate with others to perverse energy resources. Leadership and collaboration will help us to deal with energy conservation effectively and efficiently.

不知道是不是应该在结尾前有个小让步,并且在结尾里再次复述自己的两个分论点。
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2010-4-14 11:28:17 | 只看该作者
只错了5题,lz语法已经很强了。。。
个人觉得做好语法总结,有时间再看下OG12
-- by 会员 guyuan0126 (2010/4/14 6:34:36)


谢谢~我对语法不敢大意,而且OG稍微偏简单一点。

另外,能不能下载到电子版的OG12?现在舍不得买书,所以所有材料都来自电子版。
5#
 楼主| 发表于 2010-4-15 13:48:21 | 只看该作者
April 14,周三晚:
晚上从公司回来,做饭洗澡,然后不知不觉就睡着了,一直到12点前突然醒来想起今天还没看GMAT,于是决定从粘人的床上爬起来

坛子里很多童鞋的日记都半途而止,我只想对自己说,成功来自于正确的心态和彻底的自我管理。毕竟如果连自己都无法管理,又怎能算是准备好了去读MBA?

起床后开始做Prep SC语法笔记(非常感谢Findjuhl整理),发现这次没有贪床真的很值:卡着一分钟做,1-12题全错。

确实要比OG难,知识点很细,也不是所有正确选项都比较顺口。第13题开始正确率>0,接着6题全对,打算今天到此,待会重新读一遍所有题目的正确选项,然后重新睡觉

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重读了这题,还是觉得不爽
11. Before scientists learned how to make a synthetic growth hormone, removing it painstakingly in small amounts from the pituitary glands of human cadavers.
A. scientists learned how to make a syntheticgrowth hormone, removing it painstakingly
B. scientists had learned about making asynthetic growth hormone, they had to remove it painstakingly
C. scientist learned how to synthesize thegrowth hormone, it had to be painstakingly removed
D. learning how to make a synthetic growthhormone, scientists had to remove it painstakingly
E. Learning how to synthesize the growthhormone, it have to be painstakingly removed by scientists




答案是C,我选了D
其实语法题也考逻辑
6#
 楼主| 发表于 2010-4-16 12:16:03 | 只看该作者
April 15,周四晚:

继续半夜做了会Prep SC,二十来题,对多错少。

又有一题很不爽:
29.  There are hopeful signs that we are shifting away from our heavy reliance on fossil fuels: more than ten times as much energy is generated through wind power now than it was in 1990
A) generated through wind power now than it was
B) generated through wind power now as it was
C) generated through wind power now as was the case
D) now generated through wind power as it was
E) now generated through wind power than was the case





答案是C,我又选了D
7#
 楼主| 发表于 2010-4-16 12:18:56 | 只看该作者
明天白天上班,晚上看场歌剧,祈祷从明天起,日子开始正常起来,工作、功课、GMAT都要更努力才行
8#
 楼主| 发表于 2010-4-17 12:19:30 | 只看该作者
April 16,周五晚

歌剧结束,到家12点,先发帖子,待会做题:

(更新) 今晚做得非常不爽,状态下降得如高盛的股票一样。
9#
发表于 2010-4-17 14:51:53 | 只看该作者
给LZ加加油啊
10#
 楼主| 发表于 2010-4-17 15:47:47 | 只看该作者
给LZ加加油啊
-- by 会员 ycui58199 (2010/4/17 14:51:53)



谢谢一定好好努力
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