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12. Rising inventories, when unaccompanied
correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead
to production cutbacks that would hamper
economic growth.
(A) when unaccompanied correspondingly by
increases in sales, can lead
(B) when not accompanied by corresponding
increases in sales, possibly leads
(C) when they were unaccompanied by
corresponding sales increases, can lead
(D) if not accompanied by correspondingly
increased sales, possibly leads
(E) if not accompanied by corresponding increases
in sales, can lead
Diction; Agreement
Th e modifying phrase when … sales is needlessly
diffi cult to understand. Th e adverb correspondingly
is incorrectly and ambiguously used; using the
adjective corresponding to modify increases in sales
makes the intended meaning clearer. Unaccompanied
is not wrong but not accompanied more eff ectively
expresses the intended negation.
A Unaccompanied correspondingly is awkward
and ambiguous.
B Plural subject inventories does not agree
with the singular verb leads.
C Wrong tense: past tense were indicates a
completed event, but can lead indicates a
possibility that continues.
D Correspondingly increased sales is awkward
and unclear; verb (leads) does not agree with
the subject (inventories).
E Correct. Not accompanied emphasizes the
negative and is preferable to unaccompanied
in this usage; corresponding modifi es increases
in sales; the modifi er is clear and
comprehensible, and there is no subject-verb
agreement problem.
Th e correct answer is E.
不明白A为什么不可以哦，when 和if在这里有什么区别呢？ |
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