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楼主
发表于 2009-6-19 22:55:00 | 只看该作者

六月作文JJ汇总


    

wang_mm2000


    

 


    

AA  The
following appeared as part of a plan proposed by an executive of the Easy
Credit Company to the president.

            

            


    

“The Easy Credit Company would gain an advantage over
competing credit card services if we were to donate a portion of the proceeds
from the use of our cards to a well-known environmental organization in
exchange for the use of its symbol or logo on our card. Since a recent poll
shows that a large percentage of the public is concerned about environmental
issues, this policy would attract new customers, increase use among existing
customers, and enable us to charge interest rates that are higher than the
lowest ones available.”


    

 


    

        

AI “Responsibility for
preserving the natural environment ultimately belongs to each individual
person, not to government.”


    

    

 


    

carolwting


    

AA:
 The following appeared as part of an
article in a computer magazine.


    

“A year ago Apex Manufacturing bought its managers
computers for their homes and paid for telephone connections so that they could
access Apex computers and data files from home after normal business hours.
Since last year, productivity at Apex has increased by 15 percent. Other
companies can learn from the success at Apex: given home computers and access
to company resources, employees will work additional hours at home and thereby
increase company profits.”


    

Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.


    

黄金80上好像是有这个的具体拆分例子的.我的观点:


    

      1.
Apex 15% increase
不是一个significant的增长,也许整个行业都增长至少15%,得益于新技术革新等;


    

      2. 即便是高增长.也不能说明是采取了这些措施所导致.


    

     
3. 
认为Apex的经验可以用于other
companies,
all
things are equal
的错误.     


    

        

AI:
Providing
health care should be the fundamental responsibility to the government.


    

    

Soyabo


    

 


    

AA:【题库里没找到】HR刊物说:non-profit organizations的成员不依靠实物奖励反而工作效率高,survey的结果是这些成员说他们认同自己的工作对社会有益。所以 corporations应该做一些公益事业(好像是捐款什么的),这样员工就能提高工作效率。


    

        

AI:【题库111题】 “Because of recent
advancements in business and technology, the overall quality of life in most
societies has never been better than at the present time.” 


    

    

Dominique_xy


    

 


    

1. Argument: “Currently, more professional accountants use SmartPro accounting
software than any other brand. However, in the market for personal accounting
software for nonprofessionals to use in preparing their income tax returns,
many of our competitors are outselling us. In surveys, our professional
customers repeatedly say that they have chosen SmartPro Software because our
most sophisticated software products include more advanced special features
than competing brands. Therefore, the most effective way for us to increase
sales of our personal accounting software for home users would clearly be to
add the advanced special features that our professional software products
currently offer.”Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.


    

        

2. Issue: Because
of recent advancements in business and technology, the overall quality of life
in most societies has never been better than at the present time.”


    

    

sht1987112


    

argument:说的是一个investment firm应该投资一个叫做E什么的公司,因为后者的主要business
electronic form
的图书。并且跟着一个调查,表明70多的受访者说他们会看electronic form的图书,80%多的表示他们认为读书很重要。


    

        

Issue:说constant innovation improve一个organization的同时也会damage到这个organization


    

    

Foxwill


    

AA:航空公司,投诉信。机经上有了。


    

        

AI:people are likely to
accept as a leader only someone who has demonstrated the ability to
deal with the tasks he or she assigh to others to perform.
不知道是不是题库里的。


    

    

Zhaobingdais


    

aa:一个航空公司利润下降,油价上升,添加新飞机,至少有一个原因。因为其他的airlines同样面对油价下降,但利润没有下降,所以为了提高利润应该取消添加的飞机。


    

        

aieducation is a main provider of opprtunity in
society,.just as money and .....,education is an element that most ensures
success in life


    

    

applediane


    

        

issuesthe best teacher
should expect students challenge popular ideas rather than accep them.


    

    

yumj2008


    

AA:一个叫做Apo Manufactoring的公司为其员工买了电脑,付了网费,从此该公司利润一路上升。于是作者得出结论:那些效益不好的公司都应该给他们的员工配备同样的设施:因为这会增加他们在家工作地时间,从而提高效率。


    

        

AI:现今社会,peolpe are becoming more respectful of one another's
differences.


    

    

Rookey


    

argument
        
一个杂志上的图片上,用某种健身器的人有着健壮的身体,所以某个town就提议给当地的健身中心装上这种健身器以使当地居民keep fit


    

        

issue:自然科学和技术越来越重要,所以学校应该多花时间教科技,少教人文。


    

    

 


    

Hippoie


    

AA  food processingcolor film processing那道;


    

        

AI   
A society should be judged by its scientific and artistic achievements rather
than by its business success.


    

    

Katelan


    

第一篇是说,Oak Citydowntown里建了一个shopping centre。然后城中的businesses全都closed,什么交通拥挤,最后又说parkXXX(都是不好)然后说Eml City也要建一个shopping centre一定要借鉴Oak City的结果。。。然后argue.


    

        

第二篇,是说society is measured by sceintific and artist achievment more than
business success
。然后讨论


    

    

cdreamer666


    

AA: technology
可以提高work efficiency和员工的productivity,所以公司应该invest in the most advanced hardware& software,这样可以maximize employee productivity 同时可以ensure evey dollar spent will increase profit margin~


    

        

Issue:
the primary function of school is teaching academic skills instead of ethical
啥的


    

    

Nloth


    

aa:还真是题库。。。。。。。。。之前没看过的


    

The following appeared in
the editorial section of a West Cambria newspaper:

“A recent review of the West Cambria volunteer ambulance service revealed a
longer average response time to

accidents than was reported by a commercial ambulance squad located in East
Cambria. In order to provide better

patient care for accident victims and to raise revenue for our town by
collecting service fees for ambulance use, we

should disband our volunteer service and hire a commercial ambulance service.”

        
Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.


    

ai:(一搜居然又是题库。。。。)


    

        

“As technologies and the demand for certain services change,
many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for

those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker,
not to government or to business.”

Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated
above. Support your position with specific

reasons and/or examples drawn from your reading, your observations, or your own
experience.


    

    

Baojiakd


    

“On average, 9 out of every 1,000
passengers who traveled on Avia Airlines last year filed a complaint about our
baggage-handling procedures. This means that although some 1 percent of our
passengers were unhappy with those procedures, the overwhelming majority were
quite satisfied with them; thus it would appear that a review of the procedures
is not important to our goal of maintaining or increasing the number of Avia’s
passengers.”


    

Avia航空的部门备忘录:

    

        
平均地,去年乘坐Avia1000个乘客中有9个针对我们的行李处理流程写了投诉信。这说明虽然有大约1%的乘客对这一流程表示不满,乘客的主体对它还是满意的。所以对流程的重新审查对我们要保持和提高Avia的乘客数这一目标不是很重要的。


    

在当今飞速发展的社会,员工们从年轻人身上得到的energy new
ideas
比老人的经验和智慧重要


    

        

 


    

    

Atim


    

1Physical
activity and sports are as important to a student's education as academics


    

        

2、那个Food Processing的,应当是题库的。


    

    

Ququwen


    

Argument:


    

The following appeared as part of an
article in a weekly newsmagazine.


    

“The country of Sacchar can best
solve its current trade deficit problem by lowering the price of sugar, its
primary export. Such an action would make Sacchar better able to compete for
markets with other sugar-exporting countries. The sale of Sacchar’s sugar
abroad would increase, and this increase would substantially reduce Sacchar’s
trade deficit.”


    

Issue


    

 “Everywhere, it seems, there
are clear and positive signs that people are becoming more respectful of one
another’s differences.”


    

        

In your
opinion, how accurate is the view expressed above? Use reasons and/or examples
from your own experience, observations, or reading to develop your position.


    

    

红蔷薇


    

AA: A music store boosts its business
dramatically last year, by adopting radio advertisement campaign to increase
the foot traffic into the store, a Clothing store want to do the same to earn
more profits.
记得AWA
224
篇范文有类似题目。


    

        

AI:
Providing health care is the fundamental responsibility of the government.


    

    

Stonedog


    

AA.一个公司里的人说,"因为最近我们公司做了SURVEY然后所有人都指出了上下层间的交流是最需要补强的,而我们又刚刚开设了这个SESSION."


    

所以,"我们公司最需要解决的问题就解决了"


    

 


    

        

AI.有人说国际公司业务会让世界变的没有差异化.因为大家都需要同样的商品啦什么什么的.


    

    

 


    

Bluesnowdrop


    

AA The following appeared in the
letters-to-the-editor section of a local newspaper.


    

Muscle Monthly, a fitness magazine that regularly features
pictures of bodybuilders using state-of-the-art exercise machines, frequently
sells out, according to the owner of Skyview Newsstand. To help maximize
fitness levels in our town’s residents, we should, therefore, equip our new
community fitness center with such machines.”


    

AI "Education has become the
main provider of individual opportunity in our society.Just as property and
money once were keys to success,education has now become the element that most
ensures success in life."In yuor opinion,how accurate is the view exressed
above?


    

 



[此贴子已经被作者于2009-6-19 22:56:36编辑过]
沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2009-6-19 22:58:00 | 只看该作者
剪切,编辑,看了看,六月的内容其实也不少啊。我们不贪多,只在精:)
[此贴子已经被作者于2009-6-19 23:03:54编辑过]
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2009-6-19 22:59:00 | 只看该作者
有同学可以说说前面为啥米乱码吗?看着好烦哦。我辛苦的在WORD里编辑了一阵,贴到这里就变那么难看。郁闷!
地板
发表于 2009-6-20 03:16:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢楼主了~~前面虽然是乱码,后面还是可以看的~~谢谢拉^_^

5#
发表于 2009-6-20 08:24:00 | 只看该作者
谢谢,复制下这个页面中需要的内容,然后编辑再粘帖试试

6#
发表于 2009-6-22 18:06:00 | 只看该作者

Thanks so much !

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