练习DELAT的作文，希望各位给以建议

Job without enjoy are like flower without sunshine. However there is no consensus among people as to work a job. Some people maintain we work at a job that we enjoy is important. While others may not agree. From my personal angle alone the former point coincides with mine.

  First of all, sometime we work at a job equal with student's study. We can imagine that a student enjoy to study English, and he can persistent to practice the English everyday. Finally he can make a big progress on his English study. We work at a job also like this example. Because of enjoy, we can do it better.

  Second, we work at a job for enjoy in order to prove our value. It different from we work at a job because of money. Even though money can help us to buy a lot of things we like, the person value can make our life beauty than any other things. Everyday we go to work that we enjoy, can make us feel very happiness. Even though the work is so easy or hard, we also can find the happiness in it. When the work time is over, we also can keep the smile on our face and feel we came across a nice day!

  Third, sometime people work at a job can not earn the money. Such as a volunteer. Even though we work as a volunteer have no pay for us and sometime we may feel very harder about this work, we gain a lot of compliment from other people. If you never had such experience, you would never know how happiness that work at a job for yourself enjoy.

  In conclusion, I agree with the point that it is important to work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot of money. Only in this way, can we have a beautiful life.

 昨天传上来一篇，但毛病颇多～～还好谢谢 amorela MM  帮忙修改，很用心的，谢谢你～～

由于本人英语功底较差，所以还得多多练习！

今天又写了篇小弱文，希望各位帮帮忙，给些评价！！麻烦各位了～

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