GWD26-Q24 确定下答案

24. GWD26-Q24

According to United States
census data, while there was about one-third

of mothers with
young children working outside the home in 1975, in 2000,

almost
two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home.

A.     while there was about one-third of mothers
with young children

working outside the home in 1975, in 2000, almost
two-thirds

of those mothers were employed outside the home.

B.     there were about one-third of mothers with
young children who

worked outside the home in 1975; in 2000, almost
two-thirds

of those mothers were employed outside the home

C.     in 1975 about one-third of mothers with
young children worked

outside the home; in 2000, almost two-thirds of such
mothers

were employed outside the home

D.     even though in 1975 there were about
one-third of mothers with

young children who worked outside the home, almost
two-thirds

of such mothers were employed outside the home in 2000

E.      with about one-third of mothers with young
children working out-

side the home in 1975, almost two-thirds of such
mothers were

employed outside the home in 2000

24. GWD26-Q24

According to United States census data, while there was about one-third

of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, in 2000,

almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home.

A.     while there was about one-third of mothers with young children

working outside the home in 1975, in 2000, almost two-thirds

of those mothers were employed outside the home.

B.     there were about one-third of mothers with young children who

worked outside the home in 1975; in 2000, almost two-thirds

of those mothers were employed outside the home

C.     in 1975 about one-third of mothers with young children worked

outside the home; in 2000, almost two-thirds of such mothers

were employed outside the home

D.     even though in 1975 there were about one-third of mothers with

young children who worked outside the home, almost two-thirds

of such mothers were employed outside the home in 2000

E.      with about one-third of mothers with young children working out-

side the home in 1975, almost two-thirds of such mothers were

employed outside the home in 2000

没有有人注意,those mothers     和   such mothers    ?
    

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恩,但是第三条不同意. 毕竟跳跃修饰是可以的.否则我们看C:  
                            in 1975 about one-third of mothers with young children worked

outside the home,这里worked作为分词也是跳跃修饰mother的.

所以这个who的修饰不能作为决断依据.

这里worked不是作为分词，而是动词，否则就没有谓语了

1、同意楼上的观点，不过while应该是表达让步，而不是比较，我认为while表示比较的时候比较双方应该是同时发生...而且如果是比较就不能被让步的even though所代替。

2、D中的who指代children有待商棰。定语从句完全可以跳跃指代。

3、但是我无法同意C里面用分号隔开两个有关联的句子。

4、such是指同类事物，those +n. 指代前面提到的Mothers，所以such mother是对的

5、C里面用worked把原句中用there be这个表达统计数据、存在的概念给抹掉了。统计数据用there be很正常，不能以那条规则排除选项。

同意D...

while有2个用法，引导时间状语从句表示“当...的时候”，也可以引导句子作比较。

D who如果说可以跳跃指代，那么句子就指代不清了。

还是觉得C对