新prep2-184

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In 1713, Alexander Pope began his translation of the Iliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced the greatest translation in any language.

A. his translation of the Iliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced

B. his translation of the Iliad, a work that took him seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced

C. his translation of the Iliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it as

D. translating the Iliad, a work that took seven years until completion and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it as

E. translating the Iliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it

答案是b，请指教其它选项的错误之处，谢谢

A a work that和后面that不平行，修饰错误

C用过完没有依据

DE主句没有谓语

在de中，In 1713, Alexander Pope began translating the Iliad，这不就是谓语表达吗，后面跟着同位语？

还有是不是还有个考点：pronounce的用法？

还是不明白，请指教

不明白“多出来的it和时态”？

请版主明示，我选的d，觉得没有错误啊，谢谢

我的分析是这样的：

In 1713, Alexander Pope began his translation of the Iliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced the greatest translation in any language.

A. his translation of the Iliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced 平行错误

B. his translation of the Iliad, a work that took him seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced

C. his translation of the Iliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it as 时态错误

D. translating the Iliad, a work that took seven years until completion and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it as 是否应该是take some time to do的问题，但是我觉得pronounced sth as sth会更加清晰吧

E. translating the Iliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it时态错误

可能我觉得有个as会更加明确吧？请指教，谢谢

哪位能帮我解释一下，如果此句的结构是 a work that........Samuel Johnson pronounced.....那SJ之前的and that又起什么作用吗？谢谢啦。