Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
8. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world. (A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, (B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter (C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter (D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations (E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
我觉得E把本来属于附属的成份carefully coordinated them with her narratives 变成了主干成份并列谓语。 虽然原句的意思未必正确，但我觉得C中把它作为非限定性定语从句which she carefully coordinated with her narratives要好一些。 再说什么大道理也没有了，个人感觉吧！
我认为这里存在一个表达意思的主次问题。这句话的重点是说capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world. 而carefully coordinated them with her narratives是修饰book的定语。如果把两个等同起来，象E那样，有些改变句意。而GMAT最好不要改变原文的句意。
以下是引用深海的小美人鱼在2003-11-5 22:57:00的发言： 我认为这里存在一个表达意思的主次问题。这句话的重点是说capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world. 而carefully coordinated them with her narratives是修饰book的定语。如果把两个等同起来，象E那样，有些改变句意。而GMAT最好不要改变原文的句意。
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