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joywzy

以下是引用joywzy在2003-11-6 7:31:00的发言：

再问一下，你怎么就知道句子是主从，而不是并列呢？从何得知啊？

谢谢。

同志们,再看看啦.

oldreaper

以下是引用joywzy在2003-11-5 19:11:00的发言：
8. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

答案：C，请问其它选项哪里不好了？谢谢。

现在分词修饰，如果前面有‘，‘  一般放在句前或句尾做状语。 凡在句中间肯定做定语，一般也不再前面加‘，‘  做差入语状，但是价也不能算错。做定语时有先修饰前面结构中的主词， 所以A, B 中都修饰 illastration错！

D, 不用细讲，过去分词。

E, 中的them有问题， 代词一般指代主句结构中的主词， 而这里指代了插入成分中的词，就会让人别扭，除非有中间有成分能够跳接这种指代关系。Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations that she spend most time on them, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

joywzy

E:讲的是代词的问题.

对啊.谢谢oldreaper.

annawj

关于oldreaper的“现在分词修饰，如果前面有‘，‘  一般放在句前或句尾做状语。 凡在句中间肯定做定语，一般也不再前面加‘，‘  做差入语状，但是价也不能算错。做定语时有先修饰前面结构中的主词， 所以A, B 中都修饰 illastration错！”

1）"如果前面有‘，‘  一般放在句前或句尾做状语",都有“，”怎么放在句前啊？
2）所指的主词是？
3）“做差入语状，但是价也不能算错”怎么理解？
请多指教，谢谢

ford424

D怎么错了,为什么我没看出来啊?

xiao_zhutou

D: coordinated with her narratives 修饰 Beatrix Potter，逻辑不通。

Avantasia

以下是引用oldreaper在2003-11-20 0:34:00的发言：

现在分词修饰，如果前面有‘，‘  一般放在句前或句尾做状语。 凡在句中间肯定做定语，一般也不再前面加‘，‘  做差入语状，但是价也不能算错。做定语时有先修饰前面结构中的主词， 所以A, B 中都修饰 illastration错！

D, 不用细讲，过去分词。

E, 中的them有问题， 代词一般指代主句结构中的主词， 而这里指代了插入成分中的词，就会让人别扭，除非有中间有成分能够跳接这种指代关系。Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations that she spend most time on them, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

这个说法真的很新颖, 不知道还有没有其它的例证?

mildsevens

我怎么觉着C不顺眼呢，which在从句中到底做什么成分？是with的宾语吗？

而且我记得OG上明确说过，介词短语里不能带从句，那C到底有没有这些错误呢？

还有，in her book illustrations这种用法怎么感觉怪怪的

请不吝赐教，谢谢

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fr6102790

再贴一遍原题

8.     Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.(P2 F-2)

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,

(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations（C）

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

C项中WHICH修饰前面的illustrations,C项意思为BP在她的书的插图中(该插图与其描述相对应),BP运用了尖锐的观察和对自然的热爱.

其中,which从句是个典型的非限制性定语从句.

To be discussed... ...

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mildsevens

以下是引用fr6102790在2005-7-14 12:15:00的发言：

再贴一遍原题

8.     Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.(P2 F-2)

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,

(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations（C）

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

C项中WHICH修饰前面的illustrations,C项意思为BP在她的书的插图中(该插图与其描述相对应),BP运用了尖锐的观察和对自然的热爱.

其中,which从句是个典型的非限制性定语从句.

To be discussed...

我明白你的意思，问题在于，which后面是一个完整句子，如果是定从的话，因此要么前面缺介词，要么从句里有多余的成分。

而且coordinate的主语是谁？或者说，到底是什么coordinated with narratives。逻辑上说，应该是illustrations. 因此，如果按照你中文的翻译的话，应该是.... illustrations, which was carefully coordinated with narratives。。。

这也是我看C不舒服的理由。

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