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fr6102790

我明白你的意思，问题在于，which后面是一个完整句子，如果是定从的话，因此要么前面缺介词，要么从句里有多余的成分。

而且coordinate的主语是谁？或者说，到底是什么coordinated with narratives。逻辑上说，应该是illustrations. 因此，如果按照你中文的翻译的话，应该是.... illustrations, which was carefully coordinated with narratives。。。

重新写一下原句:

In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives,

在这个从句中,she 为主语, carefully coordinated which with  her narratives为谓语部分, which做宾语的一部分;

这样解释,能说的通吗?

即she coordinated A with B,she 发出coordinatd这一动作,是人使illustration使narrative 相符合,但中文解释是后面两个名词互相印证.

To be discussed... ...

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mildsevens

查了一下，coordinate是及物动词

谢谢楼上的

zhoushao

以下是引用oldreaper在2003-11-20 0:34:00的发言：

现在分词修饰，如果前面有‘，‘  一般放在句前或句尾做状语。 凡在句中间肯定做定语，一般也不再前面加‘，‘  做差入语状，但是价也不能算错。做定语时有先修饰前面结构中的主词， 所以A, B 中都修饰 illastration错！

D, 不用细讲，过去分词。

E, 中的them有问题， 代词一般指代主句结构中的主词， 而这里指代了插入成分中的词，就会让人别扭，除非有中间有成分能够跳接这种指代关系。Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations that she spend most time on them, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

E的解释我还是很疑惑，大家在有没有其他解释

fr6102790

还是很疑惑，大家在有没有其他解释

个人认为oldreaper对them的说法有失偏颇,E项主要错在无端改变句子中心及句意较为冗长.

amacd

still feel quite confused with this question,

1.        Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,

(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations（C）

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

for B) does "coordinating them" seem to lack a動作執行者?

and C)'s "she" fulfill that?

RayBear

同意oldreaper的看法。

peterchang

以下是引用oldreaper在2003-11-20 0:34:00的发言：

以下是引用joywzy在2003-11-5 19:11:00的发言：
8. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

答案：C，请问其它选项哪里不好了？谢谢。

现在分词修饰，如果前面有‘，‘  一般放在句前或句尾做状语。 凡在句中间肯定做定语，一般也不再前面加‘，‘  做差入语状，但是价也不能算错。做定语时有先修饰前面结构中的主词， 所以A, B 中都修饰 illastration错！

D, 不用细讲，过去分词。

E, 中的them有问题， 代词一般指代主句结构中的主词， 而这里指代了插入成分中的词，就会让人别扭，除非有中间有成分能够跳接这种指代关系。Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations that she spend most time on them, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

对于ｅ的说法是不是因为in her book illustrations是插入句，所以不能指代，但是OG11th #102也说them cannot refer to book illustrations because the plural noun is the object of the preposition，是因为介词的关系，有点搞不清，可否ｎｎ再解释一下，谢谢！！

zlzlzl

我感觉还是从意思着手，原文应该表达的意思是：

In her book illustrations，Beatrix Potter capitalized ......

而不是

Beatrix Potter, coordinated .....and capitalized

gonghao

汗呀

选了个E

C的介词为何不前置？似乎with which更合理些

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amysarmy

以下是引用gemj在2003-11-5 22:47:00的发言：
我觉得E把本来属于附属的成份carefully coordinated them with her narratives 变成了主干成份并列谓语。
虽然原句的意思未必正确，但我觉得C中把它作为非限定性定语从句which she carefully coordinated with her narratives要好一些。
再说什么大道理也没有了，个人感觉吧！

同意.....

我认为E的问题在于改变了句子的意思,原来的句子谓语动词只有一个,就是capitalized,