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laughing0 · 发表于 2016-5-15 09:36:21

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JonFrank · 发表于 2016-5-17 22:45:58

Hey there,
so what’s the question? How to write it?
The best is to choose SPECIFIC contributions you want to make to SPECIFIC places int he school( a class, a group a club) and to base your contributions based on PROVEN contributions you have made to other institutions in the past.

So that, and you should be off to a great start!
Best,
Jon Frank

laughing0 · 发表于 2016-5-22 00:16:30

JonFrank 发表于 2016-5-17 22:45
Hey there,
so what’s the question? How to write it?
The best is to choose SPECIFIC contributions yo ...

should I write a short story or accomplishment to prove it? for example.

I can contribute xxx to ...In the past, I ...(what I have done)
I am expert in consulting...I have done...So, I can contribute xxx to class and club

JonFrank · 发表于 2016-5-24 10:11:49

laughing0 发表于 2016-5-22 00:16
should I write a short story or accomplishment to prove it? for example.

I can contribute xxx to ...

Hey there,
Exactly! That’s the idea. You are going to propose something specific, and then SHOW through a story something specific that you already did! And when you connect the two it makes it seem really realistic.

Best of luck,
And if there’s any other way I can help, just let me know,
Best,
Jon Frank

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