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TOPIC 45 Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

It is interestingly noticed that each individual may have different points of view on sleeping some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work . However , others like to get to later in the day and work until late at night. This problem is, in evidence, of significant importance in term of its great effect on most people in their daily lives. Apparently ,it depends on personal hobby. For my part, I am liable to choose to get up early rather than late.

The first and fairly important reason is if you get up early, you may have more chance to incline to take exercise. As a proverb says, ” wealth is nothing without health”. A good health promises a bright future. Test have shown that a 15-minute exercise is more instrumental than most medicines on the market. For instance, not only in high school, but also in the university, I get up early to run or play tennis every day morning.

Another equally importance reason is that, in the morning, the brain,, undergoing resting after a whole night ,is relatively more clear and more suitable to study. For example, in many secondary school, the students are indispensable to attend morning exercise, mainly in order to learn some textbook, like, poetry or vocabulary, and so forth, by heart.

All the above evidence supports the undeniable magnitude of getting up in the morning. Because, if you rise with the lark, you not only can take sorts of exercise but also can study. Such kind of habit will be definitely helpful in one’s entire life.

I get up early to run or play tennis every day in the morning

in many secondary schools,

mainly in order to learn some textbook,最好把TEXTBOOK换成其它词就算不能换也要改成TEXTBOOKS

All the above evidence supports the undeniable magnitude of getting up early in the morning

if you rise with the lark, you not only can take sorts of exercise but also can study. 这句话太牵强了,学习,运动和天黑有必然联系吗?

最好能再多写一个理由段.以上是个人见解,仅供参考

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