Issue6和Argument20

vivianian · 发表于 2012-11-18 22:59:23

1) A nationshould require all of its students to study the same national curriculum untilthey enter college.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to whichyou agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning forthe position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describespecific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would notbe advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

The speaker claims that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national courses before they are admitted to college, at the first glance , the opinion seems to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection on that shows that it is so complicated an issue that needs a case-to-case study, and I tend to hold the view that the same national curriculum has both its advantages and its disadvantages, whether to adopt the policy that all students are asked to take the same national course should be based on the real situation of a country.

To begin with, there are many obvious advantages to ask all the students to take the same courses before they enter college. On one hand, it benifits the students, for exmaple, a family that frequently moves from one state to another state because of the need of the parents' work will be glad to see that the policy that the all the students take the same national curriculum to be adopted, there is no need for them to worry about that their kids cannot get accustomed to the new curriculum. On the other hand, it is also conducive to the communication between those educators who carry out the curriculum, teachers from different states just have no difficulty in exchanging ideas about teaching better , thus it will finally facilitate a better teaching method.

However, despite the obvious advantages discussed above, there are some disadvantages which we can see. For students all over the country that take the policy that the whole students should take the same national course before their college time, as is knwon to all , there are many students with various talents who may not be accustomed to the national curriculum, thus if those students are forced to take the lessons they do not take interest in, not only their talent will be wasted, but also their bright future will be ruined because of the boring schoolwork imposed on them. At the same time, different teachers ahve different teacing style, if the teachers are asked to teach the same lessons all the years, their teaching ability will surely deteriorate.

In conclusion, the policy that students should take the same national coures both have its advantafes and its disadvantages,

argument20

In this argument, the arguer claims that they should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, this recommendation is based on the fact that most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of wenther and local news when the national news gained increased time while the weather and local news had less time. In addition , the arguer assumes that local business cancelled the contracts because of the change of time devoted to the weather and local news. However , a careful examination of this argument would reveal that the argument is rife with holes.

First of all, the argument assumes that most of the complaints received were concerned with the coverage of weather and local news because of the change of tiem devoted to weather and local news part, it is hasty for the arguer to make an assumption like this, there is a possibility that even more complaints went to the station's mailbox before the coverage change. Also, the argument just does not provide any information about the how many people made the complaints and who made those complaints, if there are one or two people who made the complaints like this , they should not be take great consideration, and if people who make the complaints did not tell the truth for some reasons , for exmaple, the contestant of the station made these dishonest complaints in order to confuse the staion's leader, then the complaints would not be reliable.

Additionally, the arguer mistakes the result of less time devoted to weather and local news for the reason that the local business cancelled the advertising contracts, however , without more information about the real reason why the local business made such decision, it is unwise to make the judgement that the former cause the latter, it is very likely that the local business find that the effect of advertising on the station is not good enough, and may be that the style of the station cannot work in harmony with the style of the local business, thus , there is nothing to do with the less time devoted to the weather and local news when the local busines made the decision.

一限时训练就死了，思路都打不开。。。TT,
求解救,词汇和句式都不够用啊

普渡哥 · 发表于 2012-11-19 12:02:54

要多背几篇优秀的范文

vivianian · 发表于 2012-11-19 12:39:57

要多背几篇优秀的范文

-- by 会员普渡哥 (2012/11/19 12:02:54)

马上就要考了一周不到

竹林中人 · 发表于 2012-11-19 22:39:32

The speaker claims that a nation should require all of itsstudents to study the same national courses before they are admitted tocollege, at the first glance , the opinion seems to be somewhat convincing, butfurther reflection on that shows that it is so complicated an issue that needsa case-to-case study, and I tend to hold the view that the same nationalcurriculum has both its advantages and its disadvantages, whether to adopt thepolicy that all students are asked to take the same national course should bebased on the real situation of a country.

To begin with, there are many obvious advantagesto ask all the students to take the same courses before they enter college. Onone hand, it benefits the students, for example, a familythat frequently moves from one state to another state because of the need ofthe parents' work will be glad to see that the policy that the all the studentstake the same national curriculum to be adopted, there is no need for them toworry about that their kids cannot get accustomed to the new curriculum. On theother hand, it is also conducive to the communication between those educatorswho carry out the curriculum, teachers from different states just have nodifficulty in exchanging ideas about teaching better, and thus it will finallyfacilitate a better teaching method.

However, despite the obvious advantages discussedabove, there are some disadvantages which we can see. For students all over thecountry that take the policy that the whole students should take the samenational course before their college time, as is known to all, there are manystudents with various talents who may not be accustomed to the nationalcurriculum, thus if those students are forced to take the lessons they do nottake interest in, not only their talent will be wasted, but also their bright futurewill be ruined because of the boring schoolwork imposed on them. At the sametime, different teachers have different teaching style, if the teachers areasked to teach the same lessons all the years, their teaching ability willsurely deteriorate.这段最好能有具体的例子做阐述。

In conclusion, the policy that students shouldtake the same national coures both has its advantages and its disadvantages, 这样的一个结尾是很没力度的
建议LZ，能把内容充实点，比如，再多考虑一种具体的情况是有利的或者不利的。

竹林中人 · 发表于 2012-11-19 22:40:14

第二篇，文章没写完，建议ＬＺ补充完整吧

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