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用了一些大牛的好的句式， 自己试着写了一篇independent writing:people are now easier to become educated than in the past. 望各位不吝赐教。在此谢过。
The level of education as a social index has ranked on all sorts of eye-catching measurements rendered by magazines or newspapers. Judging from the educational background, we can obtain the rough coincidence that the more education an individual recieves, the better chance to succeed he/she will have . Biased and superficial seems the judgement made, but the trend could still be speculated through the statistics of the investigations launched by different kinds of mass media. What reveals in deeply inspecting is that the difficulties for citizens to access the chance of being educated are related to the advancement of societies. As the wheels of modern society keep moving forward, civilians are more readily prepared to go to college or enter specific institutions to attain expertise, outfiting themselves to adapt the ever-increasing competitive marketplace. Several points in different dimensions will be demonstrated and explained to testify my hypothesis.
Generally, three elements decide the extent how easily an ordinary person becomes educated: culture, economy and facilities, in other words, the educational resources. Decided by mutiple factors, the scrutiny of this heatedly discussed topic should exploit these factors comprehensively instead of narrowing to one. Assuming that the culture of an isolate society does not emphasize the importance of education, the effort will be vain no matter how many investments pitched into educational pool. Likewise, the other two components should function well to speed the smoothly-runned educational machine. Therefore, the three factors must coordinate harmoniously to ensure a better chance for us to be educated.
Given the circumstance that culture has not been changed dramaticly since the past several decades, the investment in the educational resources nearly doubled, accompanying the economic growth in my home country. There is no doubt that we are now doing our utmost to engage ourselves in the reform of eduational system, bringing home to people the value of education. By purchasing computers, multi-media equipments and so on, staff in the school can utilize latest technology to improve the method used for teaching, maximizing students' motivation to study. Budget are also assigned to teachers to guarantee the quality of eduction students gained. What is more, the benefited from the educational system have a impetus to feedback the society. They walked through the door way of opportunity, and they donot slam and shut behind them; they offer the same chance to the successor, even better.
On the other hand, the improvement of education is such an intricate project that need generations to devote to. Citizens now indeed expose to much convenient sources of education, but there is no denying that the progress we made are too slow to clearly distinguish the ease of being educated now from the past. And also it is universally acknowledged that our educational system leaves something to be desired. Time will change; the opportunity we gain to access better education will vary; however, the natural attribute hiden behind the appearance of education will be constant-that is, making the world a better planet and a place full of love through education.
Finally, I would like to emphasize that we should cherish the valuable and convenient progress made in the pastc. It doesnot occur spontaneously but is built by elder generation-block by block, brick by brick, calloused hand by calloused hand. |
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发表于 2012-10-8 18:40:57
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