麻烦想一道AA思路

sabrina531 · 发表于 2010-8-12 18:35:53

The following appeared in a presentation by the chief production manager of a machine parts manufacturing company at a management meeting:
“Our factory in Cookville is our most advanced and efficient. It is capable of producing ten drill bits for each dollar of production costs, whereas none of our other factories can produce more than seven drill bits per dollar of production costs. Therefore, we can reduce our overall drill bit production costs by devoting the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production. Since reducing the production costs of individual machine parts is the only way to achieve our larger goal of reducing our overall production costs, dedicating the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production and shifting all other machine part production to our other factories will help us to attain that larger goal.”

rikki8489 · 发表于 2010-8-12 20:27:31

从三个方面来攻击：
1. 可比性。cookville跟其他工厂没有可比性，地理位置不同可能会造成运输成本、生产成本、人力成本都不同，不可以这样比较。
2. 攻击绝对化语言“the only way”。这种词出现就错，找他因。除了节省成本，还可以提高工人或机器工作效率，提高产品多样性等。
3. 攻击最后一句--草率出结论。没有任何数据或资料表明其他工厂虽然没有cookville效率高，profit就比它少，而且也许其他工厂有自己当地的固定客户，如果取消生产就失去大客户，反而对公司profit造成不小的损失。

麻烦想一道AA思路

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