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[AWA模板] 作文5.5,模板就给大家做素材吧

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发表于 2009-8-20 17:44:00 | 只看该作者

作文5.5,模板就给大家做素材吧

以下只是针对AA,我是考前7天左右写出模板,之后每天练习2次模板(打乱顺序记忆模板)。AI几乎跟裸考一样,听了过去前辈的建议“保AA,AI临场发挥”。

对于AA,跟过去前辈总结的一样,AA非常好拿高分,因为可攻击的套路就这么多,模板实现准备的话,临时想案例和具体的理由也来得及,而且心态也能稳定。

开始还是挺紧张考试的写作的,看了很多例文也没有思路。后来冷静下来,按照7宗罪的总结攻击点自己写了几段模板。事后并没有针对7-8月高频题库,主要是时间来不及,那么多数学JJ需要烂熟,外加Verbal永远有提高的余地。

不罗嗦了,下面是模板(其中有一两个比较扯的词,大家可用可不用,在括号里标明了用法,供参考),只有5个,我觉得7宗罪有点过度细分了,5个应该够用。AA的模板和当时的考试我非常有信心是6分,因为AI写的自己也感觉不好,很多都是为了凑字数和套路。另外大家切忌照搬任何模板,美国把plagiarism看的跟他们的freedom一样重,过去上学时老师说过一句话里连续3个词以上有和其他source重复就的标明出处,否则paper一律F,大家小心。另外如果有语法错,大家别拍我,错一两处也能6的...

关于字数,我算了下,这里每段都在110-150之间,这还不算空出的案例和针对的观点,加上开头结尾,400肯定够了。

单一条件的
For a start, the editor assumes that ___ is THE de facto (Latin,法律用词,意为实际上存在的)and only pivtal factor in either __ or ___. By doing so, the editor has subsequently committed the fallacy of single cause in his bold, albeit (其实就是but的意思,但这样说显得很fancy...)tenuous statement. For instance, case 1's __ could well be explained by a myriad of factors such as ___, ___, or ___. Consequently, it is worthwhile and perhaps necessary for the editor to reach beyond his rather limited scope of analysis and dig further for more convincing evidences.

Survey不能全面表达的
Without concrete support, it is premature and even careless for the author to assume that the trend ___ discovered in __ is representative of that in national. THe survey on which editor relies to draw his conclusion may not be adequate enough to best relfect the true trend presently emerging nationwide. In addition, if in fact the trend is heading toward the direction opposite to what the survey has predicted, the author's claim could be deemed as misleading or irresponsible to the general public en masse (Latin,就是表明很多人,其实对句子没有帮助,古典名著中常用的词). Therefore, the editor should be in his urgent to provide more convicing evidences that must be based on sufficient sample size , unbiased analysis process, and thorough deliberations.

过去现在一样
Furthermore, the editor's conclusion rests on the doubtful assumption that the trend observed in will certainly continue into the foreseeable future. In that sense, the editor has arbitrarily disregarded the possibility of any unexpected outcomes, which, if indeed happen, could instantaneously render his conlusion groundless. For instance, the subject could, or could. In any of such case, the outcome calls th editor's concluson, together with his credibility into serious questions. Consequently, the editor should not arrive at the conclusion in such hasty manner, and needs to carefully exam every other possible outcome in order to further strengthen his statement.

苹果比橘子
By drawing his conclusion solely on the success of case1, the editor has made the classic apples and oranges comparsion. the editor consider that a and b are perfectly comparable in that they are in the same location or some other reasons. However, such similarity never automatically guarantee that these two are identical in every aspect. Perhaps B's success through know-how (专门或专业知识,跟专利差不多...)or technology advantage that other companiteors inlcuding a are impossible to replicate. Furthermore, if second dirr. as a result, the editor should provide concrete evidences showing that a is analogous to b in.

结论唯一且排他
the editor inaccurately assume that __ is the only silver bullet (看狼人电影或柯南某年新年特别版的估计都有印象,唯一能杀死狼人的就是银弹,文中意为唯一的方法)to solve the problem and mutually exlusively to any other possible alternationves. for that matter, editor may have overlooked the significant synergy created through simultaneous implementation of mutlitple initiatives. Besdes the editor, the can stll acheieve the same goal though, perhaps could be facilated. In short, unless the evidence is simply overwhelming, the editor should enver settele for the current as THE best solution. 

结论
In conclusion, the argument is unconvincing at best. editor has made few and yet serious mistakes, as addressed previously in his decision-making process. To defend his position and credibility, the editor must provide indisputable evidences that——,. Only by doing so can it be called an optimal solution and most importantly, stand the test of time (意思估计大家都知道,这里就是用来拔一下高).

希望对大家有帮助,也是回馈CD的一点点微薄之力。

 

 

沙发
发表于 2009-8-20 20:53:00 | 只看该作者
你这模板十足大牛象啊。。。 佩服
板凳
发表于 2009-8-23 00:37:00 | 只看该作者
谢谢分享。
地板
发表于 2009-8-23 11:08:00 | 只看该作者
好复杂。。有点晕。。不过感觉的确很生猛。
谢谢LZ分享了。
5#
发表于 2009-8-23 13:11:00 | 只看该作者
谢啦~~好东西啊~~
6#
发表于 2009-8-26 22:37:00 | 只看该作者
非常感谢。
7#
发表于 2009-8-29 17:50:00 | 只看该作者
thank you ~~
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