21号，上海，在职，一战，败，AWA JJ（增加关于语法的感想）

跟公司请了一个星期的假，但考的不好。

贡献下作文JJ.

AA

The following is part of a business plan created by the management of the Megamart grocery store.

“Our total sales have increased this year by 20 percent since we added a pharmacy section to our grocery store. Clearly, the customer’s main concern is the convenience afforded by one-stop shopping. The surest way to increase our profits over the next couple of years, therefore, is to add a clothing department along with an automotive supplies and repair shop. We should also plan to continue adding new departments and services, such as a restaurant and a garden shop, in subsequent years. Being the only store in the area that offers such a range of services will give us a competitive advantage over other local stores.”

AI

physical activity and sports are as important to student's education as acedemics.

阅读 一篇是讲measurement bias，jj里有。

准备9月份份二战了。

今天考完有个感觉，真实的考试语法跟OG差别还是挺大的，总体来说题目里很难看出公式性的语法错误，什么not.. until..., both...and...,  +ing要注意逻辑主语。。。 类似于这种类型的错误几乎没碰到。当然可能是由于自己水平得问题，一家之言了。

CR记不清了，再说考的也不好，别误导了大家。